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Post by Thanos6 » Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:03 am

Trunks should be there as GS 4...
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Post by Olivier Hague » Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:29 am

Mr.Piccolo wrote:how could that Kaioshin be alive (and evil for that matter)
No idea.
and wasn't Freeza very dead by now.
That was a flashback.
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Post by Mr.Piccolo » Fri Oct 13, 2006 12:08 pm

Thanos6 wrote:Trunks should be there as GS 4...
There shouldn't have been a GS1 imo :roll: .. I like that Oob makes an apperance though, when I saw the end of Z and heard about GT, I assumed Oob would have a great role... it looks like this fanfic is pushing for that. Wow. This is the first time I was actually interested in anything AF.
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Post by Sun_Wukong » Fri Oct 13, 2006 12:39 pm

I love it how much doujin artists try so hard to immitate Toriyama's style. Even in hentai doujin, wich makes it even funnier.
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English Translations

Post by simmdogg113 » Fri Oct 13, 2006 2:59 pm

Here are some translations I found:

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Post by Rocketman » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:33 pm

SSj4 Gohan, Broly, SSj5, and... Vegetto?

:roll: :roll: :roll:
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Post by Mr.Piccolo » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:35 pm

Rocketman wrote:SSj4 Gohan, Broly, SSj5, and... Vegetto?

:roll: :roll: :roll:
Adonde senor Vegetto?
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Post by simmdogg113 » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:37 pm

I think the characters are SSJ4 Vegeta, SSJ4 Gohan, SSJ4 Goku, Broly and Xicor. On the last page is SSJ4 Goku going SSJ5
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Post by Synthe » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:47 pm

Brolly? bah not him again....
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Post by Bardock the Mexican » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:52 pm

Mr.Piccolo wrote:
Rocketman wrote:SSj4 Gohan, Broly, SSj5, and... Vegetto?

:roll: :roll: :roll:
Adonde senor Vegetto?
Ay por favor un titulo más grande por un idiota cómo él. Salva su oxigeno.

This is very interesting in spite of the obvious GT refferences. I think that this may not be half as bad as it seems despite being a April Fool's prank. He he he he. :lol: :wink:
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Post by Mr.Piccolo » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:55 pm

Bardock the Mexican wrote:
Mr.Piccolo wrote:
Rocketman wrote:SSj4 Gohan, Broly, SSj5, and... Vegetto?

:roll: :roll: :roll:
Adonde senor Vegetto?
Ay por favor un titulo más grande por un idiota cómo él. Salva su oxigeno.

This is very interesting in spite of the obvious GT refferences. I think that this may not be half as bad as it seems despite being a April Fool's prank. He he he he. :lol: :wink:
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Post by Panda » Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:57 pm

Who the hell is Xicor?


Ah... I thought it might be kinda interesting (or at least something nice to look at ) but I've been fooled again by Broly...
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Post by The Tori-bot » Fri Oct 13, 2006 4:24 pm

Panda wrote:Who the hell is Xicor?
First paragraph. :)
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Post by Snail » Fri Oct 13, 2006 4:34 pm

Sun_Wukong wrote:I love it how much doujin artists try so hard to immitate Toriyama's style. Even in hentai doujin, wich makes it even funnier.
Haha actually, some of the hentai doujin artists are fantastic. I'd post a link up, but we'll see.
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Post by DaemonCorps » Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:02 pm

Deus ex Machina wrote:Good stuff, but Daemon what makes you think that female Kaioshin (West Kaioshin?) is Freeza's mother? It looks like she's drowning him in that second page.
Well, the previous topic about this same website found translations on another website and... well there ya go (referring to the exact same translations a couple posts up).

Also, the Kaioshin was only seen in filler in the manga, so I guess this artist uses that as an excuse to use her design here :roll:.
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Post by Rocketman » Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:14 pm

Mr.Piccolo wrote:Adonde senor Vegetto?
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Looked close enough.
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Re: English Translations

Post by _Jrinu_ » Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:16 pm

simmdogg113 wrote:Here are some translations I found:

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Yea, those are the same translations I was talking about earlier.
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Post by Maphisto86 » Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:59 pm

Well drawn though confusing to say the least. And was that Kuriza and another relative of Freeza (Cooler!?). Man that is confusing since I can't read Japanese and we are missing a bulk of the story. All well...

It seems the woman Kaioshin wants to create the ultimate warrior and mated with King Cold in order to create it (the child being Freeza or Cooler or perhaps another but I'm geussing Freeza was the goldenboy).
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Post by fps_anth » Fri Oct 13, 2006 6:33 pm

Yeah, Kuriza makes a cool cameo appearance in there. And there is Coola in there too, its the author's interpretation of his first form.
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Post by Tanooki Kuribo » Fri Oct 13, 2006 10:50 pm

Also, does anyone understand how this work- how could that Kaioshin be alive (and evil for that matter) and wasn't Freeza very dead by now. This level of confusion makes GT look like canon.
Who cares? Its just pretty to look at and just a fun read. I hope no one takes this seriously. They could have a pregnant Brolly shooting out baby Astro Boy's that shoot killer bee's out of there mouths. Its just fan made, just for fun. :D
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