New Saiyajins

[Sigh-Ya-Jin]

We are all DB fans here and at least 69% probably more of the users on here would like to be a Saiyajin or at least create one. Here's your chance to do so, the story must be sort of legit i.e he or she has to tie into the DB universe and their story must be 100% original. No corny revenge plots unless it's really interesting. The being on a different planet when Freeza destroyed the Saiyajin home planet has been done a bunch too, if you are planning this to be your characters origin it must be done differently. Something original please.


|||My Saiyajins name is Okura (Okra), he was a lower class Saiyajin who was drafted into the Saiyajin Army and put under the command of Nappa at Age 731. In Age 732 he turned 9 and after numerous planet excavation missions he was appointed to the rank of mid class Lieutenant, becoming the youngest Saiyajin to do so. He idolized Prince Vegeta but because of his ranking he was never allowed to converse or befriend the Prince of Saiyajins not like Prince Vegeta would anyways. Okura wasn't particularly strong, what helped him rise in rankings was his determination, persuasiveness and cunning. In Age 737 the former planet of the Tuffles and Saiyajins planet was destroyed by Lord Freeza, being deemed evil Okura was sent to hell and his body was destroyed much like a bunch of other Saiyajins.


In Age 774 Janemba encases King Yenma in a weird barrier letting the villians from hell escape Okura being one of them, while the villians wreaked havoc on Earth Okura did the opposite and just walked around West Metro trying to find out what happened and why he has his body back, after Trunks and Goten defeated Adolf and his army they spotted Okura walking around town. The kids saw that his Saiyajin style battle armor resembled Vegeta's and approached him, seeing Goten reminded Okura of someone he asked Goten is he related to Bardock? Because the kids know nothing of their heritage they respond no, he then asks them are they mixed with Saiyajin blood , they respond accordingly and he then asks them what age this is.

Some time afterward they become acquaintances and they show him around West Metro, Okura is astounded at the power these children possess especially after he sees them transform after a friendly spar goes awry. A couple of hours later Janemba is destroyed and Okura is sent back to hell, his relationship with Trunks and Goten ultimately leads to him being resurrected by them In the Age 781 with the Dragonballs.


The kids kept the secret of the Dragonballs from Okura and this wish a secret from everyone else, Trunks and Goten then took Okura far away in the mountains and taught him how to conceal and sense Ki so that he won't be discovered by the Z Warriors they also taught him how to read among other things. After 1 year of living in the mountains Okura asks Trunks for a favor to let him borrow a spaceship.Trunks goes and steal a capsule from their lab, Okura then leaves Earth to find a Planet he can rule over and call his own so that he himself can become royalty albeit self proclaimed, he then sets off to create his own legacy.






(Tell me what you think guys, I made it up on the spot so criticism is welcomed)

[Skar]

Cool backstory for that Saiyan! I agree it's hard coming up with a plausible OC Saiyans. If there were off in space when Frieza destroyed the planet then most would've ended up like Turles and formed their own gang of misfit aliens. Maybe some decide to settle down on a nice planet.

[DarkPrince_92]

I smell a potential Xenoverse custom character lol.

[Sigh-Ya-Jin]

Cool backstory for that Saiyan! I agree it's hard coming up with a plausible OC Saiyans. If there were off in space when Freeza destroyed the planet then most would've ended up like Tullece and formed their own gang of misfit aliens. Maybe some decide to settle down on a nice planet.

Ikr, I wanted to tie him in as best as I can. Also Vegeta is my favorite character so I modeled him after his younger brother Tarble.

[Sigh-Ya-Jin]

I smell a potential Xenoverse custom character lol.

Damn Straight! Makes it more exciting...

[Skar]

Ikr, I wanted to tie him in as best as I can. Also Vegeta is my favorite character so I modeled him after his younger brother Tarble.

Hell yeah Vegeta is still the greatest evil Saiyan. Goku vs Vegeta during the Saiyan saga is probably my favorite battle.

What do you think of other hybrid Saiyans? I liked how in AF they explored the possibility of Saiyan hybrids with other species. I didn't like how Xicor just happened to be insane but his backstory was creative. Vegeta could've slept with various alien women during his conquests. They sense or detect with a scouter all the energy coming from Earth during the Buu saga and go to check it out. Or maybe they hear rumors that Emperor Frieza was defeated by a SSJ from the distant planet Earth and go looking for Earth to see if they have any family there.

[FoolsGil]

Got a really simple one I read in a fic. Saiyan banished due to mental instability, dropped off years before Planet Vegeta was destroyed.

[Sigh-Ya-Jin]

Ikr, I wanted to tie him in as best as I can. Also Vegeta is my favorite character so I modeled him after his younger brother Tarble.

Hell yeah Vegeta is still the greatest evil Saiyan. Goku vs Vegeta during the Saiyan saga is probably my favorite battle.

What do you think of other hybrid Saiyans? I liked how in AF they explored the possibility of Saiyan hybrids with other species. I didn't like how Xicor just happened to be insane but his backstory was creative. Vegeta could've slept with various alien women during his conquests. They sense or detect with a scouter all the energy coming from Earth during the Buu saga and go to check it out. Or maybe they hear rumors that Emperor Freeza was defeated by a SSJ from the distant planet Earth and go looking for Earth to see if they have any family there.

Hybrid Saiyajins huh? It's completely possible because look at Tarbles wife, they could've had a kid..haven't read too much of DBAF. None to be exact lmao.

Got a really simple one I read in a fic. Saiyan banished due to mental instability, dropped off years before Planet Vegeta was destroyed.

Mental instability huh? To which degree? Because Broly was hella unstable lmao!

[BlazingBarrrager]

I would introduce my Saiyajin FC, but I'm still in the process of revamping her so I don't feel it's the right time to showcase her fully. Oh, and thanks to TheDevilsCorpse for helping me with her appearance (especially with the SSJ form, because designing the hair to match the base hair is HARD).

[Sigh-Ya-Jin]

I would introduce my Saiyajin FC, but I'm still in the process of revamping her so I don't feel it's the right time to showcase her fully. Oh, and thanks to TheDevilsCorpse for helping me with her appearance (especially with the SSJ form, because designing the hair to match the base hair is HARD).

Yeah that took me some time too, have to incorporate elements from the base into the SSJ. I think I correctly did Bitos tried to make the left side more lengthy than the right.