There's a stray l in 'killing' there; and based on spell-check, 'indiginous' should be 'indigenous', but I don't know for sure on that one.Toriyama's (New) Bardock
Several of the same characteristics are there - namely killilng indiginous creatures without much regard and being wary of Freeza's ulteriour motives - but Toriyama's own recent take on Bardock is anything but familiar.
Hope this doesn't come off like complaining or nitpicking, because I mean it far from it - this is still a beyond amazingly well put together work, but I got the feeling that a print version might very well be happening eventually based on Mike's response, so I figured this sort of thing would be something he and the rest of the staff would want noted.