Fan Works Explosion

[Mr.Piccolo]

Wow Mr. Piccolo a regular already! Means I'm lazy then I guess. Man I'd SO get one of these!

Most of my post expose theories of a certain number one fusion of Goku and Vegeta who types in all caps, but every once in a while I try to contribute posts of somewhat importance. I like that Freeza and Goku picture, Kaboom. Now all we need is a picture to compliment your quote thats in my sig.

[Mika]

I don't have any new DBZ art at the moment, but are photos okay?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34475494/

[QuantumDestiny]

I don't have any new DBZ art at the moment, but are photos okay?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34475494/

=O!! That's funny, I want text on Vegeta's thoughts about epic BBQ. Reminds me of a plushie version of Meri's feature films XD!!!

[Steven Perry]

I don't have any new DBZ art at the moment, but are photos okay?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/34475494/

Turn it into a comic!

[Kaboom]

[Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth voice]

Good news, everyone!

[/Professor Hubert J. Farnsworth voice]

Chapter 2 is finally up!

You know you want it



WARNING: I use the term "Android." It's easier, and most other readers besides anyone here would most likely just be confused by "Jinzoningen." So... meh/

[Mr.Piccolo]

I read Chapter Two, Kaboom. Now for thefirst review! I'll try my best not to spoil it for others. I thought it was good the way you got into the lives of some of the well known supporting characters. I also liked the way you keep the same feel for the personalities for the characters, you stay close to the Z atmosphere. The only problem with it is... NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR CHAPTER THREE..! Aside from that, good job and I'm looking foward to some more.

[ulisa]

Okay, I tried my hand at the fanfiction writing, something I've always loved doing but this was my first try at Dragonball writing. Vegeta and Piccolo are hard for me to write but people tell me I do Goku and gohan pretty well so...

Keep in mind that I usually watch the Funimation dub as opposed to the Japanese, although I like the original as well, so most of the dialogue is based off of how they talk in the dub. Anyway...hope you all enjoy it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2254631/1/

Ulisa

[Kaboom]

Okay, I tried my hand at the fanfiction writing, something I've always loved doing but this was my first try at Dragonball writing. Vegeta and Piccolo are hard for me to write but people tell me I do Goku and gohan pretty well so...

Keep in mind that I usually watch the Funimation dub as opposed to the Japanese, although I like the original as well, so most of the dialogue is based off of how they talk in the dub. Anyway...hope you all enjoy it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2254631/1/

Ulisa

Whoa. This is pretty good.

I just red (Get it? "red?"It's mispelled on purpose, to...) the first couple chapters, and I gotta say, you're a very good writer. I haven't gotten to a part with Piccolo or Vegeta, like you said, but I'll get there eventually. Don't worry about using "FUNimation lingo"; I've already used the term "Android" in my fic, and I feel perfectly okay with it.

So, it's a dramatic, angsty take of the Androids/Cell arc through Gohan's p.o.v., I take it? Nice, but to be honest, those are almost as overdone as GT Rewrites. (Poking fun)

You're very good at writing the deep, scary stuff, as evidenced in Chapter 1. My story probably won't get anywhere near that dark until the Babi arc is in full swing. 'Cause the way I'm having it, the more purehearted and good you are normally, the more evil, twisted and sadistic you are as a Tuffle. So, Tuffle Gohan = the 3vi1

[Mr.Piccolo]

Are you going to do fanart that goes with your fanfics, Kaboom?
-rick

[Kaboom]

Are you going to do fanart that goes with your fanfics, Kaboom?
-rick

...maaaaaaaaaybeeeee...

But yeah, at the very least just some more sketchy stuff (not full-blown "pieces of art") to go with important parts. You've already seen some of my "concept art" for Super Uub, a few pages back.

EDIT: Great, just great. Look what you did, Rick. Now I have to put up some sketches.

People
People as Tuffles
Sketches for a scene where Tuffle Gohan beats up Piccolo

[Steven Perry]

Anyway...hope you all enjoy it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2254631/1/

WARNING: This fanfic contains scenes of explicit violence and gore.

The three eyed warrior's neck was twisted at an impossible angle and blood pooled around him.

Gore Factor: 3.5/10

That was all he could see: blood everywhere. All he could smell was blood. All he could see was blood. All he could feel was blood.

Gore Factor: 6/10

He got no reply, aside from a few muffled screams and groans.

Gore Factor: 3/10

He couldn't even see the stars anymore; the sky was too clouded with dust and blood.

Gore Factor: 4/10

If he let even a little dust into his mouth, he tasted the sour and bitter taste of some one's blood.

Gore Factor: 4.5/10

Piccolo's blood smeared on his face, turning it green.

Gore Factor: 6.5/10

He found Chaozu, or rather what remained of him. He found him all over, in pieces.

Gore Factor: 10/10

Gohan passed over a dead Yamcha as he flew. He didn't need to go down to confirm it. He could tell simply by the ocean of blood he was lying in and the way his body lay. The torso looked like it had been snapped in two…yes, at closer glance, he confirmed that belief. His spine was severed, his heart exposed, he was gone.

Gore Factor: 9/10

Blood was gushing from a gaping hole in Krillin's chest.

Gore Factor: 3/10

Gohan froze. His father was gushing blood but that wasn't what Gohan's eyes focused on.

Gore Factor: 2.5/10

Everything had fallen into this…this lake of blood. Gohan screeched as something dry and rigid and strong snagged his leg. The white skeleton of Yamcha, Krillin, Tien, Chaozu, Piccolo, and then…the one grasping his ankle…his father's…were giving him a dark evil look, tugging him under. "You let us die…"

Gore Factor: 9.5

Thanks for getting me all depressed. Now I feel sick.

[The Tori-bot]

Hey, Kaboom, I was wonderin'... do you mind if I show you some visual ideas for your fanfic? Y'know, little charactar design sketches? If you don't need anything, it's fine. [size=0]Just means less work for me... >_>;[/size]

Anyway, it's got a lot of potential, and I'd like to provide something for you to use.

[Kaboom]

Hey, Kaboom, I was wonderin'... do you mind if I show you some visual ideas for your fanfic? Y'know, little charactar design sketches? If you don't need anything, it's fine. [size=0]Just means less work for me... >_>;[/size]

Anyway, it's got a lot of potential, and I'd like to provide something for you to use.

Oh, by all means, yes. Like I might have said before, I'm pretty much set in the larger picture, but I'm always open to help or input with little things. Some details I've already decided on, but te odds that they'll be whatever you picked are smaller than the Turtle's P.L.

Send me whatever it is you wanna show me in a PM.

[ulisa]

You're very good at writing the deep, scary stuff, as evidenced in Chapter 1. My story probably won't get anywhere near that dark until the Babi arc is in full swing.

Thanks. I try to throw in light hearted bits and pieces as the story goes on simply so the reader isn't in an all depressed mood through the whole story but drama and angst and such like that are easiest for me to write. Although, I'm getting better at the light hearted stuff, which is one reason I like to write the time period when everyone's a little younger. Children for me, are a lot of fun to write, more so than adults hence Gohan's younger age in this one.

I'll have to go read your stories now as I haven't had a chance to yet.

Ulisa

[Kaboom]

You're very good at writing the deep, scary stuff, as evidenced in Chapter 1. My story probably won't get anywhere near that dark until the Babi arc is in full swing.

Thanks. I try to throw in light hearted bits and pieces as the story goes on simply so the reader isn't in an all depressed mood through the whole story but drama and angst and such like that are easiest for me to write. Although, I'm getting better at the light hearted stuff, which is one reason I like to write the time period when everyone's a little younger. Children for me, are a lot of fun to write, more so than adults hence Gohan's younger age in this one.

Yeah, I know what you mean; everyone's got their own niche in this kind of stuff. I, for one, am best at action and comedy. So you can guess the sort of direction my story will take.

[The Tori-bot]

Hey, Kaboom, I was wonderin'... do you mind if I show you some visual ideas for your fanfic? Y'know, little charactar design sketches? If you don't need anything, it's fine. [size=0]Just means less work for me... >_>;[/size]

Anyway, it's got a lot of potential, and I'd like to provide something for you to use.

Oh, by all means, yes. Like I might have said before, I'm pretty much set in the larger picture, but I'm always open to help or input with little things. Some details I've already decided on, but te odds that they'll be whatever you picked are smaller than the Turtle's P.L.

Send me whatever it is you wanna show me in a PM.

Okay, done.

I've drawn about five as of now. I'll linky-linky in a PM later.

[ulisa]

Went through the first two chapters of your story Ssj Kaboom and I really like it so far! I love the conversations you put between Goku and ChiChi, very in character and it adds a lot to the story. I have to ask, where did you ever come up with this:

“Chi-Chi...” He whined. “They’re startin’ to sag...”

“Welcome to my world,” she absent-mindedly replied, paying more attention to Gosan. A second later, though, she realized what he had just said.

“Wait... what?”

Goku tilted his head down, and pointed to his hair.

I about fell over when I read that section simply because it was so like Goku to state something like that. I really liked you addressing the Saiyans getting older. We saw the human characters' take on it but never saw much reflection from Goku or Vegeta. Nice touch...

I love your characterizations of Pilaf, Mai and Shin. Pilaf was always an interesting character but I haven't seen many stories that write him well but yours remains in character. Good job!

Waiting for the next chapter:)

Ulisa

[Kaboom]

Went through the first two chapters of your story Ssj Kaboom and I really like it so far! I love the conversations you put between Goku and ChiChi, very in character and it adds a lot to the story. I have to ask, where did you ever come up with this:

“Chi-Chi...” He whined. “They’re startin’ to sag...”

“Welcome to my world,” she absent-mindedly replied...

I started thinking about what physical signs there might be when a Saiyan gets over the hill, and then I thought that their ever-spikey hair would probably be affected, and then the lines from the two which I've bolded here just came to me in a vision, or a sugar rush; I'm not sure which.

EDIT: And to be honest, while I am trying to keep Pilaf in character, I know barely squat about Mai and Shin, so I'm ballparking it with them.

[Ally McBeal]

a comic i did long time ago...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/7636857/

[Mika]

Thanks for the nice comments on my Veggie Plushie thing :3 I actually have some new art, HOOOO~!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/42490645/