Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by Kingdom Heartless » Sun May 03, 2009 3:14 am

Wow... not every little thing is an attempt to screw over Vegeta. :?
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Post by JulieYBM » Wed May 20, 2009 9:41 am

Toyble's made an update, along with a cool sketch. Anyone care to translate?
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Post by Herms » Wed May 20, 2009 9:50 am

Toyble says that Goku's mother will surely always remain a mystery. But he thought it'd be cool if she had died protecting a young Raditz, so he drew that picture. She's saying "Damn! So it was all Freeza's doing?!". Though Toyble says that Raditz thought Planet Vegeta was destroyed by a meteor, so the picture is really impossible. What would her name be? The only named female Saiyan, Selipa, gets her name from parsely, so maybe a leafy vegetable would be good.
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Post by Captain Awesome » Wed May 20, 2009 10:07 am

Wow, that sketch looks awful.

The anatomy and proportion is really off, not to mention I hate the idea behind it.

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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Thu May 21, 2009 9:26 am

JulieYBM wrote:Toyble's made an update, along with a cool sketch. Anyone care to translate?
Where is the link to this sketch?
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Post by Scarz » Thu May 21, 2009 1:52 pm

Saiyan-Professor wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:Toyble's made an update, along with a cool sketch. Anyone care to translate?
Where is the link to this sketch?
Ditto.

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Post by Herms » Thu May 21, 2009 1:54 pm

Just go to Toyble's blog and scroll down.
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Post by Dayspring » Thu May 21, 2009 2:02 pm

Captain Awesome wrote:Wow, that sketch looks awful.

The anatomy and proportion is really off, not to mention I hate the idea behind it.
Selypa with Raditz's hair, Bardock's clothes, and Nappa's legs. Sexy, in a crack-addicted streetwalker kind of a way.
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Post by Scarz » Thu May 21, 2009 2:43 pm

Captain Awesome wrote:Wow, that sketch looks awful.
The anatomy and proportion is really off, not to mention I hate the idea behind it.
I wouldn't go out and say it's awful but I can definitely agree with everything else.

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Post by Herms » Thu May 21, 2009 2:46 pm

Who would she even be protecting Raditz from, anyway?
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Post by SSJ Helldog » Thu May 21, 2009 3:23 pm

Herms wrote:Who would she even be protecting Raditz from, anyway?
Bardock. Abusive drunk.

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Post by Innagadadavida » Thu May 21, 2009 3:29 pm

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Herms wrote:Who would she even be protecting Raditz from, anyway?
Bardock. Abusive drunk.
Nah, I think Bardock is the opposite when drunk. Saiyans love to fight so Radditz would have been up for the challenge. He was trying to hug his son and no woman was going to stop him.
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Post by Dayspring » Thu May 21, 2009 3:49 pm

Herms wrote:Who would she even be protecting Raditz from, anyway?
Presumably Freeza goons like the ones Bardock killed on planet Meat. For whatever reason, Raditz was left alive. Thus lies Toyble's "nevermind" comment; Raditz never knew Freeza was responsible.

Although, one could argue she and Raditz were only stronger than the planet's inhabitants when in Oozaru form. At one point they track them down in human form, gang on up them, kill her while Raditz manages to escape.
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Post by MajinKing » Mon May 25, 2009 12:52 pm

So is this getting translated?
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Post by Rod » Mon May 25, 2009 4:39 pm

MajinKing wrote:So is this getting translated?
Yup
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Post by Vino » Tue May 26, 2009 4:26 pm

I saw some pages of Goku turning SSJ5 with Broly in the background

thats where I went wtf.

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Post by JulieYBM » Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:44 am

Four new pages!!

Seems like our Kaiôshin here still has a little fight left in him...hmmm...
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Post by Booney » Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:03 am

Did he just blew himself up or...?
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Post by Herms » Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:54 am

First page (where are the numbers?)

Kaioshin: [r] Guh…I knew it! So even though she’s sunk into evil [l] She still hasn’t lost her telepathic powers!

Gohan: [r] Tha…[l] That can’t be…

Raira: [r] So [l] Now to undo this seal!

Kaioshin: [r] The only people who can kill her…[l] Are either demons…or those with the same abilities…

Kaioshin: [r]…Which leaves... [l] Only me…!
[Kaioshin’s bubble]: Haah

Raira: Kukuh

Second page

Gohan: …!!!
Vegeta: …!
Raira: [r] What are you up to?! [l] What could you possibly do? You’ve always been so powerless!
Kaioshin: [r] As a Kaioshin, I cannot allow you to get away with this! [l] I’ll see to it that you atone for your deeds with your own death!!!
Raira: [r] !! [l] D…don’t tell me you’re going to self-destruct…!!!

Third page

Kaioshin: [t] Gohan-san, Vegeta-san! [d] I leave the rest to you!!!
Gohan: Eh?
Vegeta: …
Gohan: [r] Ka… [l] Kaioshin-sama…

Fourth page
Raira: [t] St…stop it Shin! Kaioshin aren’t allowed to self-destruct!!!
Kaioshin: [t] Fuh I never thought I’d hear that from you, as evil as you’ve become…
Kaioshin: [r] Farewell [l] Raira, my sister…
Raira: Stop------!!!
Kaioshin: HAAH!!!
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