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Sunlight & City Night
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by Sunlight & City Night » Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:28 am
Maphisto86 wrote:I like that concept for Freeza, although I don't know about the eye covering. He can't see!

It that supposed to be like what happened with Coola?

Yeah, that was the idea.
I figured if Cooler has a mouth shield/visor/thing then Frieza could have something to protect his eyes.
It's not clear on the design but the visor would be made of something that looks opaque from the outside but is transparent on the inside. Maybe he could retract it at will too? Who knows.

Or an even more interesting idea would be to propose that this new transformation gives him the ability to sense Ki.
Besides I couldn't bare to cover his mouth and loose the arrogant Freeza smirk.
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And I mean that in a good way, the visor just reminded me of him.
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by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Fri Sep 18, 2009 6:31 am
Sorry, but I'm gonna be lazy with this one. Haven't had much inspiration or time this week... If I make something better, I'll post it later.
So yeah, here's my quick lil' doodle of FURIIZA-SAMA.

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by Kaboom » Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:49 pm
Well, here's my submission!
I tried to strike a balance between similarity to Cooler's version, and finding some unique tweaks for Freeza. Harder than I though, but I think it turned out well.
This particular What-If hasn't seemed to net as much response as the previous ones. Was it perhaps a little difficult, or is interest in general just starting to calm down by now?
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by Remix » Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:52 pm
Incredible job, Kaboom! Definitely my favorite one.
You've got a good eye for what works with the designs of both characters.
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by Maphisto86 » Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:13 pm
SSj Kaboom wrote:Well, here's my submission!
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I tried to strike a balance between similarity to Cooler's version, and finding some unique tweaks for Freeza. Harder than I though, but I think it turned out well
Very nice! Still I agree with 'Sunlight & City Night' about Freeza's smirk. In fact both his concept and 'TrunksTrevelyan0064's concept reminds me of when we saw Coola transform. In the film he speaks ominously before the facial shield covers his mouth. I always thought that looked more creepy then with the shield.
SSj Kaboom wrote:This particular What-If hasn't seemed to net as much response as the previous ones. Was it perhaps a little difficult, or is interest in general just starting to calm down by now?
*shrug* It was probably too difficult to create a serious fourth transformation for Freeza that does not look too much like Coola's. This thread is a great idea though. Too bad I have next to no drawing talent or I would join in.

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by TrunksTrevelyan0064 » Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:01 am
SSj Kaboom wrote:
This particular What-If hasn't seemed to net as much response as the previous ones. Was it perhaps a little difficult, or is interest in general just starting to calm down by now?
Oh in my case, interest hasn't gone down at all. I guess this particular what-if, a new form for Freeza, just isn't interesting enough to really try.
I mentioned before that for this one, I had trouble coming up with a statisfying design. On one hand I could see that as a challenge, but it's also kinda "Meh, I'll pass, could you gimme another what-if, please?".
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by Kaboom » Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:07 pm
Alright then. Since I'm about to head out and probably won't be back until late, late tonight, I'm going to post this week's What-If a little earlier than usual. Let's see if this one goes over better.
- A "Super Human" Transformation -
That's right, it's time for the underdogs of the series to get some attention. Either pick a pre-existing pure-human character or make one up, and draw them with a power-boosting transformation that the human race can call their own. No prerequisites in design or concept, but let's try not to make it TOO similar to Super Saiyan, a'ight?
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by Innagadadavida » Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:11 pm
When are you going to do Tenshinhan and Lunch's kid?

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by Scarz » Sat Sep 19, 2009 5:06 pm
SSj Kaboom wrote:
- A "Super Human" Transformation -
FINALLY! The day has come and.... My mind is totally drawing a blank.
Innagadadavida wrote:When are you going to do Tenshinhan and Lunch's kid? Evil or Very Mad
Because I would just dig up some old
sketch and
cheat.
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by SHINOBI-03 » Sat Sep 19, 2009 5:16 pm
Wow!! Scarz... that's just awosome...!!
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by SHINOBI-03 » Sat Sep 19, 2009 5:54 pm
Who dare to make fun of Kuririn when he uses his Master's power-up?!
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by LeprikanGT » Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:34 pm
Kaboom DEFINITELY has my vote.
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by Innagadadavida » Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:24 pm
Scarz wrote:
Because I would just dig up some old sketchand cheat.
Aww man. I did one too, only mine's a boy. I'm waiting for the what-if thread to post it.
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by Metalwario64 » Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:30 pm

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by RogueA007 » Mon Sep 21, 2009 1:24 am
*salute* New recruit for the game, sir! This looks like fun, I need more of an excuse to draw Dragon Ball art like I used to long, long ago.
Except that when I saw about "super humans"...I initially drew a huge blank.
Then I remembered some stupid scenario that I thought about the first time I watched Dragon Ball in high school....."Yamucha's Wolf Fang Fist is boring! Like, if there was like, a Wolf Fang Fist Times Two, It should be all cool like the Super Sayians, but also cooler...and totally wicked awesome, and -"
*shakes head* I...dunno......

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by SSJ Helldog » Mon Sep 21, 2009 1:50 am
RogueA007 wrote:*salute* New recruit for the game, sir! This looks like fun, I need more of an excuse to draw Dragon Ball art like I used to long, long ago.
Except that when I saw about "super humans"...I initially drew a huge blank.
Then I remembered some stupid scenario that I thought about the first time I watched Dragon Ball in high school....."Yamucha's Wolf Fang Fist is boring! Like, if there was like, a Wolf Fang Fist Times Two, It should be all cool like the Super Sayians, but also cooler...and totally wicked awesome, and -"
**snip**
*shakes head* I...dunno......

Nice work, RogueA007! Welcome! I've been trying to find a common theme among humans in DB; all Super Saiyans have blonde hair, so what do all humans have? Spirit animals, perhaps? Yamucha is a wolf, Roshi is a Turtle... anybody have any thoughts on what other characters may be?
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by caejones » Mon Sep 21, 2009 6:00 am
SSJ Helldog wrote:RogueA007 wrote:*salute* New recruit for the game, sir! This looks like fun, I need more of an excuse to draw Dragon Ball art like I used to long, long ago.
Except that when I saw about "super humans"...I initially drew a huge blank.
Then I remembered some stupid scenario that I thought about the first time I watched Dragon Ball in high school....."Yamucha's Wolf Fang Fist is boring! Like, if there was like, a Wolf Fang Fist Times Two, It should be all cool like the Super Sayians, but also cooler...and totally wicked awesome, and -"
**snip**
*shakes head* I...dunno......

Nice work, RogueA007! Welcome! I've been trying to find a common theme among humans in DB; all Super Saiyans have blonde hair, so what do all humans have? Spirit animals, perhaps? Yamucha is a wolf, Roshi is a Turtle... anybody have any thoughts on what other characters may be?
Gyu-mao is clearly an ox.
Krillin......... ......... He's hard to place. I dunno, he kinda seems the most human of all of them. A ram? 'Cause, you know, there's all that symbolism, and it has horns, and...
... O.O *Imagines Krillin with horns*. .....
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by Metalwario64 » Mon Sep 21, 2009 10:57 am
caejones wrote:SSJ Helldog wrote:RogueA007 wrote:*salute* New recruit for the game, sir! This looks like fun, I need more of an excuse to draw Dragon Ball art like I used to long, long ago.
Except that when I saw about "super humans"...I initially drew a huge blank.
Then I remembered some stupid scenario that I thought about the first time I watched Dragon Ball in high school....."Yamucha's Wolf Fang Fist is boring! Like, if there was like, a Wolf Fang Fist Times Two, It should be all cool like the Super Sayians, but also cooler...and totally wicked awesome, and -"
**snip**
*shakes head* I...dunno......

Nice work, RogueA007! Welcome! I've been trying to find a common theme among humans in DB; all Super Saiyans have blonde hair, so what do all humans have? Spirit animals, perhaps? Yamucha is a wolf, Roshi is a Turtle... anybody have any thoughts on what other characters may be?
Gyu-mao is clearly an ox.
Krillin......... ......... He's hard to place. I dunno, he kinda seems the most human of all of them. A ram? 'Cause, you know, there's all that symbolism, and it has horns, and...
... O.O *Imagines Krillin with horns*. .....
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by Booney » Mon Sep 21, 2009 11:34 am
I designed some sort of super human transformation for my OC.
Basically a cheap copy of the SSJ transformation with a color swap.
Only this form is achieved in a more spiritual way rather than hard training and emotional struggle.
More info about the form and character
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by Kaboom » Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:45 pm
Well, here's my submission.
'Avatar ripoff,' yes, I know.
I'm a little bummed; this particular What-If might not have had as much potential as I thought. I'm sure I'll end up deciding on something good for next week by tonight.