Fun thing I noticed watching Z episode 2...
In the this scene, Bulma notices that Gohan is rather polite for a child of Goku.
In the Kai dub, Goku says he gets that from Chichi... Which doesn't make much sense, seeing as Chichi is as much of a country bumpkin as Goku is.
In the subs, Goku says "Chichi is fussy about that.", which makes far more sense.
Funny how little changes like that, when not fully thought out, can really impact a line. I think Funi's general disregard for OG DB is largely to blame here; I imagine the scriptwriters were thinking of Chichi as characterised in the original dubs of Z, rather than paying attention to the Japanese/manga version, or even thinking about how Chichi behaved in OG DB...
I'm probably overanalysing it, but this line is a pretty good illustration of the things wrong with Funi's modern dubs; yes, they do pay attention to the subtitle lines, but their changes, despite theoretically being just simple adaptation for natural dialogue and better-fitting to the mouth flaps, can be rather poorly thought-out, and lead to various problems.
FWIW, the Saban version of this line (which was carried over to the 2005 dub) was Chichi asking Gohan if he's gonna grow up to be big and strong like his dad, to which Goku says "Chichi doesn't let him train."
Other than that... Man, all the faffing about in the forest with Gohan in episode 1 is tiring, given that I've seen the Saban version of this so many times. Episode 2 is okay, though still a little slow, but episode 1 is near insufferable.
Steve Simmons' subs are, of course, accurate, and generally well-written, but some of the lines are exactly as clunky as their reputation would suggest. This one in episode 2 particularly stuck out to me: "You were supposed to have been under orders to dispose of humanity!"
Another one I'll briefly mention is Goku saying "I'd die before lending my hand to you!"... Simmons made sure to include certain speech quirks to reflect Goku's country bumpkin way of talking, but Simmons' subs are so literally-minded, that you end up with situations like this, where Goku would never use vocabulary like this.
No offense to Mr Simmons, and I love watching Dragon Ball subtitled, but I thought I would recognise the flaws of some work that was done well over 15 years ago as, indeed, being as flawed as many would say it is. Still leaps and bounds ahead of the various dubs by virtue of Simmons actually caring about what was intended by the writers at Toei, but nothing is ever perfect, and I think being ready to cricicise things we like is an important thing we, as a society, need to do... But anyway, enough philosophy... Simmons' subtitles are good, but the flaws of this work he did 15 years ago are quite clear.
Raditz saying that there are four surviving Saiyans counting Goku is hilarious now that we know about Paragas, Broly, and Tarble in modern canon. And, of course, there's Tullece from the movies, and there's all the Saiyans in Universe 6.
Also, I just noticed that Lunch is in Zenkai Power!
Anyway, with that, I'm all caught up.
Planetnamek wrote: Tue Aug 25, 2020 11:02 am
One thing I do support Funimation doing is combining Z episodes 1 and 2 into one as that get's things rolling much quicker. Don't get me wrong I can see why people like the stuff with Gohan in the forest, I just personally think it dragged on a bit much and I think devoting almost the entire first episode to his antics was not the best first impression for the show.
Well, remember, it's not a first impression! In Japan, basically everyone was familiar with Dragon Ball. Z episode 1 wasn't a first impression for anyone, really. Probably a bunch of people who weren't regularly watching Dragon Ball tuned in, but they'll have seen a bunch of the show before, most likely, given its immense popularity.
So, you really can't judge Z episode 1 as "Episode 1", it's Dragon Ball episode 154. From that point of view, bogging it down with that filler is still pretty bad, but it could be swept under the rug of introducing us to the new world state and characters in this old show, rather than being a slow beginning to a new show.
The point of Dragon Ball is to enjoy it. Never lose sight of that.