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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Mon Aug 08, 2016 11:51 am

Everyone who keeps harping on Bra not getting any comeuppance, she's not going to win the tournament.

You know that XXI guy? Well...things are probably going to take a turn for the worse. And characters like Bra, the really strong ones who look to be a lock? They're all a bunch of Vegetas--powerful characters who are bound to get their asses kicked by this mysterious villain. This is like Dragon Ball 101.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Mon Aug 08, 2016 2:13 pm

While deflecting it the way shes planning is a bad idea, she could always just clap catch it with her palms and throw it somewhere.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by HeroR » Mon Aug 08, 2016 6:38 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:Everyone who keeps harping on Bra not getting any comeuppance, she's not going to win the tournament.

You know that XXI guy? Well...things are probably going to take a turn for the worse. And characters like Bra, the really strong ones who look to be a lock? They're all a bunch of Vegetas--powerful characters who are bound to get their asses kicked by this mysterious villain. This is like Dragon Ball 101.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Mon Aug 08, 2016 11:19 pm

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HeroR wrote:Second, a character can be a Mary Sue without being perfect, or even powerful for that matter. A Mary Sue is, to be blunt, a character who isn't written well.
No. Not even close. A character who isn't written well is a character who isn't written well. There's a specific definition of what a Mary Sue is.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Noah » Tue Aug 09, 2016 10:07 am

I wonder why eating a senzu doesn't hurt Bra's pride
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Tue Aug 09, 2016 2:03 pm

DBM.com wrote: The next special chapter will be about universe 16, and begins on Sunday 21th.
It's drawn by Charlotte (see chapter 34 on U16) and by Yura Kim (see minicomic 68-70 on Broly) and will also be in colors by Homola Gábor!

We all have a lot of work these days, so this chapter will be released at two pages per week (Wednesday and Sunday).
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Tue Aug 09, 2016 4:17 pm

Hey guys. Some of you are probably aware that me and LittleNeko27 are doing an audio drama adaptation of Dragon Ball Multiverse. If so, you might also know that me and her are also touching up the dialogue to sound more natural in English. Now, neither of us know French, so most of our revisions just involve rewriting the more awkward lines into ones that read better. But for SOME passages, like the one below...

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There's some actual translation work required; for example, that phrase "You're honest with me now...I will be honest with you too" seems to be an overly literal translation of "Te voilà honnête, je vais en faire autant, avança Coola en se relevant, et te montrer ma véritable force!". In THIS specific context, it actually translates into something more like "Now you are being fair. Now I will be fair too...and show MY true power!" This is because "honnête" doesn't JUST mean honest...it can also mean "noble", or "fair", or "on-the-level".

So basically, Cooler is implying that Trunks WASN'T playing fairly before he put down the sword; he was (supposedly) artificially enhancing his power beyond his normal limits by using the sword. Trunks was, therefore, playing dirty. But now, by putting the sword down, Trunks is playing fair and square! And then Cooler is being "fair" by choosing not to hide his true form any longer.

The problem though is that said assertion was not stated directly. It was being implied with an exclusively French figure-of-speech, which is why this translation missed those nuances. The panel, therefore, should look something like THIS instead...

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But, as you can see...the font I'm using is a bit larger than what's being used in the first panel. So what I'm wondering is, "does anyone know what font DBM uses"? That way, if I decide to do a "translation tidbits" thread or whatever, I can post side-by-side comparisons of how the script is probably SUPPOSED to read. Thank you so much, and God bless you all!
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbgtFO » Wed Aug 10, 2016 11:09 am

Fionordequester wrote:But, as you can see...the font I'm using is a bit larger than what's being used in the first panel. So what I'm wondering is, "does anyone know what font DBM uses"? That way, if I decide to do a "translation tidbits" thread or whatever, I can post side-by-side comparisons of how the script is probably SUPPOSED to read. Thank you so much, and God bless you all!
The font they use is listed in the FAQ on the site under "Comic Making":
http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/faq.html
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TonyTheTiger » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:04 pm

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Bullshit. Fuck this Kienzan nerfing. The thing has one special property. If that property can be nullified then it's useless. It'd be nice to have one attack in Dragon Ball that works regardless of raw power.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:06 pm

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :lol:

...godammit. But you know what? I'm not surprised. At all.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Neo-Makaiōshin » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:07 pm

TonyTheTiger wrote:[spoiler]Image[/spoiler]

Bullshit. Fuck this Kienzan nerfing. The thing has one special property. If that property can be nullified then it's useless. It'd be nice to have one attack in Dragon Ball that works regardless of raw power.
Not exactly what everyone was predicting but close enought.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by coola » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:08 pm

Cool, she use Sauza blade. If she used it to nullify Kienzan, i don't have problem with it, Kienzan is made of energy, so energy sword should be able to counter it
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:15 pm

coola wrote:Cool, she use Sauza blade. If she used it to nullify Kienzan, i don't have problem with it, Kienzan is made of energy, so energy sword should be able to counter it
Even though the Kienzan cut of Freeza's tail. When Freeza was hundreds of times stronger than Krillin. It's not like the other attacks. You can't just deflect it. But I'm not even mad. Bra is special. She's spectacular. She's the savviest saiyan ever. Good for her. Super. She's suuuper.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by coola » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:21 pm

I think she didn't deflected it, but rather used energy sword to destroy it, Bra should be stronger than Cold thanks to zenkai, plus...multiplied Kienzan is probably weaker than just single one. And i don't think she is that special, she is just Saiyan, almost every Saiyan is arrogant jerk with unfair advantage (Zenkai comes to mind)

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbgtFO » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:21 pm

coola wrote:Cool, she use Sauza blade.
I think that's supposed to be Vegetto's ki sword technique(Spirit Sword in Budokai 2 and 3 IIRC).
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Post by BlazingBarrrager » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:30 pm

dbgtFO wrote:
coola wrote:Cool, she use Sauza blade.
I think that's supposed to be Vegetto's ki sword technique(Spirit Sword in Budokai 2 and 3 IIRC).
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Make sense, and it's better than using her bare hands which would otherwise be complete BS.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Kamiccolo9 » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:31 pm

I'm....really not seeing the problem here?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Scarz » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:34 pm

I like it! Clever attack.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by SSJ God Gogeta » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:40 pm

Meh, she lives only to be defeated some other day.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Wed Aug 10, 2016 2:50 pm

dbgtFO wrote:The font they use is listed in the FAQ on the site under "Comic Making":
http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/faq.html
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Scarz wrote:I like it! Clever attack.
Yeah. I was actually going to cry foul at first, just because I thought she was ripping off Sauza's move (which would have been a very Mary Sue-esque trait; using techniques that are normally exclusive to one specific, already established character)...

But then dbgtFO posted, and I remembered "Oh yeah, Vegetto DID have something like that too! She's his daughter, so obviously he'd have taught her that too"! Nice how these things work out, huh?
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