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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Koitsukai » Fri May 08, 2020 4:07 pm

Well, the last one with Bra looking for the nucleus and destroying it, lol. At least no gore, I guess?

I think this fanfic has become self aware and now it's just trolling. It's close to breaking the 4th wall and having Bra winking at the audience after splatting all over the place the guts of the next guy she kills

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Fri May 08, 2020 4:12 pm

Koitsukai wrote: Fri May 08, 2020 4:07 pm Well, the last one with Bra looking for the nucleus and destroying it, lol. At least no gore, I guess?

I think this fanfic has become self aware and now it's just trolling. It's close to breaking the 4th wall and having Bra winking at the audience after splatting all over the place the guts of the next guy she kills
This whole ordeal to me just feels like Salagir making a dismissive jerk-off motion to all criticism of his Bra obsession.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Fri May 08, 2020 4:18 pm

Well... I guess they still have Majin Buu? Maybe the God's Blade, if Phipsil still has the juice needed. Not sure how else they're gonna beat her (if at all).
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Brikikoz » Fri May 08, 2020 4:24 pm

Buu's gonna turn the tide with absorption.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by goku the krump dancer » Fri May 08, 2020 4:30 pm

I never got the vibe that Salagir has this Bra Boner, unless i'm forgetting something she wasn't very prevalent before all this. She one shotted Zangya and then had that rage out moment where she further injured an already worn out Vegetto, then the whole thing with Ginyu but that didn't last long either.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Fri May 08, 2020 5:59 pm

Wow shocker....

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by miguelnuva1 » Fri May 08, 2020 6:41 pm

Still think Vegito could have popped back in and fought Bra and it could have been good character development for the both of them.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sat May 09, 2020 7:12 am

You know, I don't understand how Bra knew to look for Cell's core.

Think about it. She was raised in a universe where Cell hadn't trained his nucleus; Where one giant Kamehameha was enough to obliterate it. Big brother hit him with a big fricken energy blast, and that was enough to kill him.

So... How does she know? We know because Cell monologued it to us... But how does Bra?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TobyS » Sat May 09, 2020 7:23 am

Fionordequester wrote: Sat May 09, 2020 7:12 am You know, I don't understand how Bra knew to look for Cell's core.

Think about it. She was raised in a universe where Cell hadn't trained his nucleus; Where one giant Kamehameha was enough to obliterate it. Big brother hit him with a big fricken energy blast, and that was enough to kill him.

So... How does she know? We know because Cell monologued it to us... But how does Bra?
I was gonna say perhaps she was watching everything with babidi but she can't have known, she was suprised he was alive before when Gohan blasted him and then makansappoed her arm off.

It's a total plot hole. She might have known about the old cell games where that happened and he explained it, and she knows he did survive Gohan again, so perhaps she put two and two together but it does seem Sueish.

But it's bigger bullshit that everyone just stood there and let her do it, Cell only needed to be bought a couple of seconds to regen. This is so stupid on top of being painfully slow.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Saiga » Sat May 09, 2020 5:40 pm

Person who actually fought and killed Cell: didn't know to specifically look for his nucleus

Person who was born well after Cell's death and never interacted with him before, nor showed any prior knowledge of his abilities: knows exactly how to deal with his improved capabilities.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Sat May 09, 2020 5:46 pm

Cue the Bra apologists for defending more bland and bad writing

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sat May 09, 2020 7:14 pm

TobyS wrote: Sat May 09, 2020 7:23 am But it's bigger bullshit that everyone just stood there and let her do it, Cell only needed to be bought a couple of seconds to regen. This is so stupid on top of being painfully slow.
You know, I thought of that as well... But wouldn't it be slower if the panels DID show them trying to intercept her, and promptly failing? Is that the alternative we want?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Bebi Hatchiyack » Sat May 09, 2020 9:53 pm

Another very annoying page, I look at DBM more out of habit than out of frankly this arc with Bra makes me yawn as much as possible. It's just all this bloodshed stuff the lil side of "look I can edgy emo dark whatever" to make you kind of see it's serious or it's not.

It's starting to be borring.

It's not even a story that I like or not Bra lol. I find her treatment stupid. Salagir make us edgy stuff to put blood and do free violence because look it's dark it's violent so it's good unlike Dragon Ball Super or Dragon Ball GT lol. I call it the Batman phenomenon.

Let's not forgot her plot armor which I think is too big that you can see it from kilometers away LMFAO.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sat May 09, 2020 10:41 pm

Bebi Hatchiyack wrote: Sat May 09, 2020 9:53 pm Let's not forgot her plot armor which I think is too big that you can see it from kilometers away LMFAO.
I dunno... it seems too skimpy to me. Leaves a bit too little to the imagination, but... Maybe I'm old fashioned.
Kataphrut wrote:It's a bit of a Boy Who Cried Wolf situation to me...Basically, the boy shouldn't have cried wolf when the wolves just wanted to Go See Yamcha. If not, they might have gotten some help when the wolves came back to Make the Donuts.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jack Bz » Sun May 10, 2020 12:44 am

Back in the original manga Cell explained to the Z fighters that his nucleus in his head needs to be destroyed for him to die.

Cell has also been seemingly killed during Babidi's uprising, by a huge wide attack, only to be alive after all. Bra has made a note that she's surprised he survived.

It's really not a leap in logic for Bra to go "oh, I've thought Cell was dead before, better make sure he really is this time by taking out his nucleus".

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sun May 10, 2020 1:49 am

Jack Bz wrote: Sun May 10, 2020 12:44 am It's really not a leap in logic for Bra to go "oh, I've thought Cell was dead before, better make sure he really is this time by taking out his nucleus".
But as far as she knows, one big blast should've been enough. It was enough for Gohan, so it should've been enough for her (according to what the others would've told her).

Heck, if she had just said "Hmm, I wonder if there are any pieces left... Ah, there's one!", that would've been alright. Or maybe "Huh... I still feel some Ki. Guess I'll get that too!". Those would've accomplished the same thing, without her somehow knowing that his nucleus would be reinforced.
Kataphrut wrote:It's a bit of a Boy Who Cried Wolf situation to me...Basically, the boy shouldn't have cried wolf when the wolves just wanted to Go See Yamcha. If not, they might have gotten some help when the wolves came back to Make the Donuts.
Chuquita wrote:I liken Gokû Black to "guy can't stand his job, so instead of quitting and finding a job he likes, he instead sets fire not only to his workplace so he doesn't have to work there, but tries setting fire to every store in the franchise of that company".

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jack Bz » Sun May 10, 2020 3:51 am

Fionordequester wrote: Sun May 10, 2020 1:49 am
Jack Bz wrote: Sun May 10, 2020 12:44 am It's really not a leap in logic for Bra to go "oh, I've thought Cell was dead before, better make sure he really is this time by taking out his nucleus".
But as far as she knows, one big blast should've been enough. It was enough for Gohan, so it should've been enough for her (according to what the others would've told her).

Heck, if she had just said "Hmm, I wonder if there are any pieces left... Ah, there's one!", that would've been alright. Or maybe "Huh... I still feel some Ki. Guess I'll get that too!". Those would've accomplished the same thing, without her somehow knowing that his nucleus would be reinforced.
It was enough for Gohan to kill him during the cell games, but wasn't enough for Gohan to do it with an equivalent attack mere moments ago. Cell surviving a big kamehameha from a raging Gohan, aka the same thing that killed him in the original manga, is meant to specifically highlight that the same thing can't kill him so easily now. He doesn't need to spell it out to her.

Bra's already been surprised once by Cell being alive, you can assume she knows how much power she put into that blast and can guess if it finished him off or not judging from her witnessing what he can already survive.

There's a lot to criticise about how these chapters have been developing but I really don't think it's fair to call this a plot hole.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by miguelnuva1 » Sun May 10, 2020 5:28 am

Anyone see Blackscapes video about the gore in this arc?

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sun May 10, 2020 7:51 am

Jack Bz wrote: Sun May 10, 2020 3:51 am It was enough for Gohan to kill him during the cell games, but wasn't enough for Gohan to do it with an equivalent attack mere moments ago.
She wasn't there for that. She was in a different part of the Arena...

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Jack Bz wrote: Sun May 10, 2020 3:51 amBra's already been surprised once by Cell being alive...
...When? I just re-read the entire fight, and didn't see any moments where she almost killed him. She just goes "Ah, you finally showed your true colors! Cool, I've been wanting to fight you!", after he'd blasted her arm off with a Makankasappo.
Kataphrut wrote:It's a bit of a Boy Who Cried Wolf situation to me...Basically, the boy shouldn't have cried wolf when the wolves just wanted to Go See Yamcha. If not, they might have gotten some help when the wolves came back to Make the Donuts.
Chuquita wrote:I liken Gokû Black to "guy can't stand his job, so instead of quitting and finding a job he likes, he instead sets fire not only to his workplace so he doesn't have to work there, but tries setting fire to every store in the franchise of that company".

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Brikikoz » Sun May 10, 2020 2:28 pm

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Buu's gonna be the last minute saviour while Philpsil goes for the sacrifice delay.

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