Master Roshi's Big Wish

Remix · Post by **Remix** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:58 am

I don't know. I felt that I liked this particular dub so much that I had to share it with you all in its own thread. The concept of this video plays with the idea of telepathic communication through King Kai. Except... with a twist.

Master Roshi's Big Wish

Thanks to Inna for the editting.

Comments, plz.

Godo · Post by **Godo** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 9:01 am

Oh, it was awesome. The only problem was that I had a hard time to understand what Shenlong was saying.
But, the editing was good, and the acting too. Sounded like the Funi cast, which made if funnier.
And comedy-wise, well, it can't get any more brilliant when it comes to giving birth to baby-doodies. At least making someone to believe that they did!

Innagadadavida · Post by **Innagadadavida** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:49 pm

I like how the music ends right after Roshi gets the surprise. Little known fact, that was a complete accident and coincidence.

Remix · Post by **Remix** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:12 pm

The lack of feedback makes me sad.

Chrono Trigger · Post by **Chrono Trigger** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:23 pm

I thought the use of clips was extremely clever and the whole thing was just really funny. Just not as funny as the one where Vegeta owns Yamcha.

Big Momma · Post by **Big Momma** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:06 pm

Words cannot describe how awesome that was...so I have to use a meme.

B · Post by B » Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:17 pm

I chuckled. Not bad.

Rory · Post by **Rory** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:54 pm

Nowhere near as good as Yamcha: RUINED (Your best video in my opinion). It had be a little bit bored, which is a shame. Never the less, I look forward to your next video.

Maphisto86 · Post by **Maphisto86** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:54 pm

Yeah I laughed pretty hard for a minute or two. Probably one of your best as the dub track aligned perfectly with characters lip syncing and expressions. The voices where well done also. I just loved the concept!

Poor Roshi.

Though you're right about "Yamcha: Ruined", Rory. That is hands down the best.

JAPPO · Post by **JAPPO** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 4:51 pm

Remix wrote:The lack of feedback makes me sad.

All of your dubs are good and they will always be good. How's that.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:42 pm

The punchline sort of faultered because of how predictable it was. Not that I can any better, but something I'm sure you'd like to keep in mind is that there is having a strong punchline that makes sense in the context of the piece, despite being almost totally unexpected, and then a punchline that the viewer can see coming.

But at least you had fun. I envy how you and so many others can get their fanworks out as quickly and efficiently as many of you here do.

Remix · Post by **Remix** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:52 pm

You usually know exactly what's coming when you commit a prank. You throw a banana peel on the floor, you know someone is going to slip on it, and you get exactly what you expected. I didn't really fault in the punchline at all. Only thing faulty was it not making you laugh.

Ah well. Different strokes.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 5:56 pm

Remix wrote:You usually know exactly what's coming when you commit a prank. You throw a banana peel on the floor, you know someone is going to slip on it, and you get exactly what you expected. I didn't really fault in the punchline at all. Only thing faulty was it not making you laugh.

Ah well. Different strokes.

You're absolutely right. I was focusing on the mind set of 'I did not laugh, therefore it is because of the type of joke', but my mind never processed it was really more of a prank, for whatever reason.

Maphisto86 · Post by **Maphisto86** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:00 pm

JulieYBM wrote:
Remix wrote:You usually know exactly what's coming when you commit a prank. You throw a banana peel on the floor, you know someone is going to slip on it, and you get exactly what you expected. I didn't really fault in the punchline at all. Only thing faulty was it not making you laugh.

Ah well. Different strokes.
You're absolutely right. I was focusing on the mind set of 'I did not laugh, therefore it is because of the type of joke', but my mind never processed it was really more of a prank, for whatever reason.

Heh, that's in contrast to me and my sick mind. I was giggling like a twelve year old just waiting for the pay off. *sigh*

Remix · Post by **Remix** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:03 pm

JulieYBM wrote:
Remix wrote:You usually know exactly what's coming when you commit a prank. You throw a banana peel on the floor, you know someone is going to slip on it, and you get exactly what you expected. I didn't really fault in the punchline at all. Only thing faulty was it not making you laugh.

Ah well. Different strokes.
You're absolutely right. I was focusing on the mind set of 'I did not laugh, therefore it is because of the type of joke', but my mind never processed it was really more of a prank, for whatever reason.

Yep! And I know what you're saying.

The humor I go for here is juvenile and straight-forward. That's what I think my core audience comes to see and I don't really want to alienate them. Just look at the, err, comments. For others who don't really care for the humor (like myself, for the most part), they come and listen to all the different voices. Heck, my girlfriend loves them just for the voices.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:05 pm

I can't say I dislike all your work, though...it is just that typically the one's I like are the...you guessed it, Big Green stuff (specifically that Vote Piccolo video).

Alas, such is life...

Remix · Post by **Remix** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:08 pm

Maphisto86 · Post by **Maphisto86** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:09 pm

Well the voices are really good and I love the use of sound effects . . . no not Roshi squeezing brown. I mean the spooky ethereal effect you used when Yamcha was speaking through Kaio-sama. I know we've all heard it before but it was a nice touch.

I don't know why but I could see Yamcha and the gang doing this, which made it funnier for me. Yamcha is not that much of an asshole in the original story but somehow I could see him do this.

NeptuneKai · Post by **NeptuneKai** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:15 pm

"Farts are not funny!"-Scot the dick

Remix · Post by **Remix** » Thu Aug 20, 2009 6:16 pm

I disagree, Neptune.

I think that if I placed my gluteal flap upon your mouth and flatulated, it would be hysterical.