DBZ alternate story fan manga

temujin · Post by **temujin** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 3:16 pm

I found this what if:i used the google translator to understand everything.
The artist said that next time he will present more 50 pages.
http://img2.imageshack.us/i/1losguerrer ... uesco.jpg/
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rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:00 pm

Wow, that was actually very cool. Good find!

temujin · Post by **temujin** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:51 pm

rereboy wrote:Wow, that was actually very cool. Good find!

I think it is great too.
In this story characters like Tenshinhan,Yamcha,chaoz and Krillin will be crucial in every saga.
All of them will be in Namek to fight,etc.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 6:35 pm

So, why are they trying to fight Vegeta instead of all attacking Nappa?

temujin wrote:In this story characters like Tenshinhan,Yamcha,chaoz and Krillin will be crucial in every saga.
All of them will be in Namek to fight,etc.

Ah, Human fanwanking then. Good to know.

temujin · Post by **temujin** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 7:02 pm

So, why are they trying to fight Vegeta instead of all attacking Nappa?

Because,Tenshinhan is strong enough to take Nappa even if he has to die in the process,i guess.

Ah, Human fanwanking then. Good to know.

No problem,considering that we already have enough sayajin fanwanking in dragon ball multiverse and in DBAF.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:08 pm

I suspect that the end result will be the same as it was in the manga. Most of them dead until Goku arrives.

But how the fight is fought is what is being changed. And I honestly like it, because it doesn`t make the humans look so useless despite the fact that they eventually lose anyway.

However, there were a few things that I noted.
Krillin seems to be left on the side lines and Piccolo seems to be on the same level of power as the others. These would be the things that I would change.

Overall I think its actually a great idea to redo the fights and try to make them more interesting and show some good fights out of the underused fighters while keeping the end result or at least a very similar one. This way the overall story is preserved but we just add some good fights.

And I loved Yamcha`s technique in this comic. Its very cool and it does justice to his "wolf fangs".

The art is actually nicely done but its too bad it doesn`t have a professional feel to it. It looks more like sketches than final art.

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:11 pm

rereboy wrote:And I loved Yamcha`s technique in this comic. Its very cool and it does justice to his "wolf fangs".

The Wolf Fang Fist has never done anything ever. Seeing it suddenly effective startled and scared me.

temujin · Post by **temujin** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:18 pm

I suspect that the end result will be the same as it was in the manga. Most of them dead until Goku arrives.

Probably.

But how the fight is fought is what is being changed. And I honestly like it, because it doesn`t make the humans look so useless despite the fact that they eventually lose anyway.

That's his goal.

Krillin seems to be left on the side lines

He will have his moments,but he is bellow Tenshinhan and Piccolo.

Piccolo seems to be on the same level of power as the others

Piccolo is still stronger than the others,but Tenshinhan is very close.
I'm not sure how strong is Yamcha.

Overall I think its actually a great idea to redo the fights and try to make them more interesting and show some good fights out of the underused fighters while keeping the end result or at least a very similar one. This way the overall story is preserved but we just add some good fights.

My feeling too.

The art is actually nicely done but its too bad it doesn`t have a professional feel to it. It looks more like sketches than final art.

He is working hard to improve the draws.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:19 pm

Rocketman wrote:
rereboy wrote:And I loved Yamcha`s technique in this comic. Its very cool and it does justice to his "wolf fangs".
The Wolf Fang Fist has never done anything ever. Seeing it suddenly effective startled and scared me.

Thats why I loved it!

This comic is basically telling us that Yamcha could develop his "sloppy" technique that gets blocked everytime or just isn`t effective by infusing his hands with ki and turning his fingers into powerful ki fang-like blades.

Just like Krillin with his kienzan (but not as effective or as sharp), this allows him to confront very powerful foes with good results. Its a very nice idea and had it been done in the original manga it would give Yamcha finally some maturity as a fighter even if he eventually died and everything else about the story (namek, androids,...) remained the same with him not doing anything else that great ever again.

temujin wrote:
I suspect that the end result will be the same as it was in the manga. Most of them dead until Goku arrives.
Probably.

But how the fight is fought is what is being changed. And I honestly like it, because it doesn`t make the humans look so useless despite the fact that they eventually lose anyway.
That's his goal.

Krillin seems to be left on the side lines
He will have his moments,but he is bellow Tenshinhan and Piccolo.

Piccolo seems to be on the same level of power as the others
Piccolo is still stronger than the others,but Tenshinhan is very close.
I'm not sure how strong is Yamcha.

Overall I think its actually a great idea to redo the fights and try to make them more interesting and show some good fights out of the underused fighters while keeping the end result or at least a very similar one. This way the overall story is preserved but we just add some good fights.
My feeling too.

The art is actually nicely done but its too bad it doesn`t have a professional feel to it. It looks more like sketches than final art.
He is working hard to improve the draws.

Well, the thing is, Yamcha should be weaker than krillin because he always was weaker than krillin.

I actually like how he fought in this comic but it doesn't feel right to have him fight like that and keep krillin on the side lines. Krillin should be fighting Vegeta along with Yamcha, Piccolo and Gohan. Since Vegeta is much stronger than Nappa it would make sense to attack him with most of the fighters while leaving Tenshinhan and Chaozu with Nappa.

So, that would be what I would change, I would move krillin to the Vegeta fight and make apparent that Piccolo was the strongest of them by making appear so or by making Vegeta say or think something to that effect.

It doesn`t bother me at all that Yamcha dealt with Nappa so easily because, if his technique allows him to have blade-like fingers infused with ki, similar to kienzan but not as sharp or effective, then it makes perfect sense, even with Yamcha being weaker than Krillin or Tenshinhan.

Velasa · Post by **Velasa** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 10:24 pm

It's not the most realistic thing but hey, fanwork is fanwork! I can't read it but I can't read my doujins either < <; so it's still pretty enjoyable.

As for the art, I prefer sketchwork to finished super-clean stuff myself so it looks good to me. Not to mention Yamcha's flowing fluffy locks just may be my favorite part of the whole comic, hehe. Well that and that shot of just Pic tossing the weighted clothes off- it's based off a wonderful image of him and he looks effing gorgeous.

I'll be waiting to see the rest when it comes up ^^