My First Fan-Fic: Dr. Gero's Dream.

RoarkVegeta · Post by **RoarkVegeta** » Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:31 pm

Yes. It's based off of the "Ultimate Battle Mission" in Sparking METEOR. This is my first fan-fic, so some critique would be nice. Yes, it's short.

Note: This story follows the events of Movie 6. Imagine Trunks comes and tells the others about the Androids. And heeeere we go!

3 years have passed since the boy named Trunks warned the Z Senshi of the horror, that was the Androids.

Chapter 1

Four feet landed at the same instant in a rocky wasteland. “This is the place, right?” a man spoke. “Yep. That’s what he said”, a more cheery voice said. We see the faces of Son Goku and Vegeta. “Hmph. I bet that brat was lying.” Vegeta scowled. “Guess not. Look up.”. From the shadows they saw 2 figures hovering in the sky. They both landed. One was an old man with a tall hat on, and the other was a pale, fat man. The old one spoke, “Ah! Greetings, Son Goku and Prince Vegeta. It seems you were expecting us?”. Neither of them spoke. Vegeta broke the silence by saying “No time for chit-chat, we’re here to fight!”, as he transformed into a Super Saiya-jin. Neither of the Androids looked shocked or surprised. “Hm. Vegeta’s right!” Goku said, and he also transformed. Nothing from the Androids. “Kakarot, I’ll take the fat one. You get the old dude. Got it?” Vegeta whispered. Goku smiled, and said “Sure. But let’s take turns. It’ll be confusing if we all just fight. You can go first. “ In an instant, Vegeta was rushing towards the Android. With a quick punch, the machine was on the ground. “#19! Get up, this instant!” the old man yelled. He got up. Goku spoke, “Hey. Are YOU Dr. Gero or something? You seem to be ordering this guy around.”. The old man stared at Goku. “Impossible. I, am #20.”. Vegeta looked at #19, “Was that it? A simple punch and you’re do---HMHMH!!” In an instant, #19 punched Vegeta in the gut, and put his hand over his mouth. Vegeta’s arms dropped. “NO! VEGETA!”, and Goku rushed over to save him, but #20 soon stood in his way. Goku heard a laugh. “What the..?”. Vegeta was laughing as #19 absorbed his Ki. In one hand, Vegeta charged a Ki Sphere. #19 looked down at it. “What th----BWA!!!!”. Vegeta had shot the energy right through #19. #20 stood silently. “Hm. It seems #19 was a failure. Son Goku and Vegeta. I must make you aware of something. In one hour, a monster will awake. He, is #13. So even if you kill me, you aren’t done. He is more powerful than both of you combined.” Vegeta smirked, “Shut him up, Kakarot.” Goku smiled. “Got it.” Goku used his Zanzouken attack to confuse the robot. When #20 turned to the real Goku and yelled “Aha! THERE YOU ARE!” and prepared to absorb his Ki, Goku fired a Kamehameha that blew #20 into pieces. When the smoke cleared, Goku said, “Well, we may as well wait for this #13 guy to show up.” They both powered down and sat, waiting. Then, exactly an hour later. 2 feet hit the ground.

RoarkVegeta · Post by **RoarkVegeta** » Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:33 pm

Chapter 2

Goku and Vegeta looked at the person who had landed. He was a blue skinned man, with red hair sticking straight up. “I’m guessing you are Son Goku and Vegeta?”, he spoke. “Yes.”, they both said. “Well, that is good. I have been ordered to tear you apart.”, and he rushed at them. They both turned Super Saiya-jin, but before Goku could make a plan, Vegeta was off. “No! Vegeta! VEGETA!!” Vegeta didn’t expect this kind of strength. He couldn’t land a single hit. Goku jumped in, but was knocked far away. When he got up from the rubble, horror was in his eyes. Vegeta was trying to hold back a large, red Ki blast sent by #13. He wasn’t going to win. “VEGETA!!!” There was a loud explosion and a scream of pain. When the smoke cleared, #13 stood in the sky, laughing at Vegeta’s weakness. Goku rushed over to where Vegeta had been standing. Vegeta’s lifeless body now stood there. “V-V-V-V-VEGETA!!!!!!!” Goku screamed. The earth was shaking. A flame was in his left hand, and a Kamehameha was in his right. Instantly, Goku was in front of #13. With his left hand, he punched #13 in the gut. #13 couldn’t move. And with his right hand he yelled, “HA!!!” and blue light shone through the sky, then a loud explosion. When the smoke cleared, #13 was no longer there. “I-I-I did it…” Goku hovered to the ground to pick up Vegeta’s body. “How am I going to tell Bulma and the others..?” and flew off.

RoarkVegeta · Post by **RoarkVegeta** » Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:34 pm

Epilogue

Rain. Cold rain. A dozen people stood. We see Trunks, the boy from the future, playing a mellow tune on his ocarina. There is a grave, that states, “Here lies Vegeta. A brave warrior and prince of the Saiya-jin.” Son Goku stared at it. Bulma couldn’t even look at it. After the rain started to let up, everyone left, except Goku. He keep looking at the stone before him. Finally, he hovered to the sky. He turned around and said, “Goodbye, Vegeta.” And flew off slowly.

Thanks for reading! Like I said, critique would be great. And don't be shy!

Innagadadavida · Post by **Innagadadavida** » Sun Oct 11, 2009 5:34 pm

Maybe you could put all of these in one thread? It seems kind of silly to have a whole bunch of similar products by one author scattered among several threads. TeamFourStar, Dragon Ball Multiverse, and Dragon Ball AF only have one thread.