DragonBall CRISIS

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DragonBall CRISIS

Post by FindKenshi » Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:04 pm

Was this board here last time? hehe, at any rate, I humbly present my currently incomplete fanfic, DragonBall CRISIS. Based entirely on DC Comics Crisis style of stories (Crisis on Infinite Earths, Infinite Crisis, Final Crisis, etc.) comes the Dragonball multiverse before Dragonball Multiverse.

Originally posted in early 2007 at GameFAQs community boards, I took a long hiatus in the middle of the story. But now I'm going to finish it.

http://www.FindKenshi.mezoka.com/crisis.htm

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Post by caejones » Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:49 am

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay!
:D :D :D :D :D :D

I got someone else into this as well... and I'm pretty sure he'll be glad to know you're back. :D

eah. I'm not sure I have anything to say that isn't fansplurging. XD
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Post by FindKenshi » Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:59 am

fansplurging is welcome, it puffs up my pride and makes the next chapters written better lol.
p.s. I promise to proof read better too, I just had to rush and get the new chapter out there asap.

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Post by caejones » Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:42 pm

Heh, well, I was in a hurry to read, so any obvious errors I might have noticed didn't stay in mind. :D

P.S.: Think we'll ever get an update to the Cell Files? I'd certainly prioritize story over that, of course... it's just been behind for a while. =P
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Akira Toriyama, in Son Goku Densetsu wrote:You really can’t go by rumors (laughs).

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Post by JulieYBM » Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:51 pm

Y'know...I'd visit...but my Norton has to keep blocking an identity threat each time I visit the site...so I'm a little leary of staying at the site...
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Post by FindKenshi » Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:13 am

^
Seriously? I hadn't noticed anything like that. The site was recommended to me by CNet's list of the best/most popular free web hosts.. that should make it safe and harmless right? o_O /e I just checked out the site, there are no Active-X scripts or Flash plugins silently running or anything of the like.. it seems to just be displaying my source unaltered.. I can't imagine why Norton would flag it as a supicious site, but it's not the first time a false positive appeared with them.

/e2 well your post alarmed me enough that I did some quick research and within seconds found this info from norton's page:
http://safeweb.norton.com/report/show?name=mezoka.com

They flag mezoka domain as being 'untrusted' because some kids use the site to host their phishing attempts.. they even gave an example of a fake site which is trying to steal people's gmail accounts. I guess the reason Norton would set their AV to block the site, is because Mezoka will not delete your website for phishing attempts.. yeah it seems a little seedy, but I promise my site is 100% clean.

I guess I can start looking around for another free webhost though, but it seems dissapointing, lol they were soo good for being free and all

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Post by caejones » Sun Sep 26, 2010 1:56 pm

Chapter 22 = awesome. I totally appreciate the strategy that went into the fight, there...
(Heh, in going over Goku's "not-so-injured" fights, I couldn't help but notice a conspicuous lack of the fights with Piccolo. XD )

Eh, if you want a different host, I might be able to use my website, so long as we aren't talking a bunch of videos or things of the sort. ^^
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:33 pm

I read the first chapter (and still haven't gotten a warning from Norton this time around). I couldn't help but imagine Yamcha with that dorky bowl cut the entire time, even though it was suppose to be the longer hair from the Saiyan arc. :p

This is actually pretty interesting. I love the idea of those multiverse crisis' from DC, so I think I'll keep going...
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