Opinions needed: My review video.

[SHINOBI-03]

Ok, so, I've reviewed "Plan To Eradicate The Super Saiyans" today, and it happens to be the first review I did in video form.

http://shinobi-03.blip.tv/file/4349061/

I used to do reviews in other forums, but they were all text-only. This is the first review I do with me speaking.

So, was I good enough? Did I make my points clear? What do you think I could've done to make it better?

[Ahiru77]

You could try to speak a bit more clearly.

It's nice that you used screens from the OVA, but I think it would be more entertaining if you used actual scenes of the old and new OVA, for comparison.

You gave your opinion clearly about the soundtrack, but you could use short examples of both soundtracks. Then people can hear what you're talking about and maybe give their own opinion.

Nice little anti-piracy speech at the end.

[SHINOBI-03]

You could try to speak a bit more clearly.

Well, I'm not used to speak English on a daily basis ((Since I'm not a native English speaker )) and that's why I have a hard time trying to talk normally like a native speaker. It's a lot tougher than typing because you can take your time thinking about what you should write instead of letting it all out while speaking.

It's nice that you used screens from the OVA, but I think it would be more entertaining if you used actual scenes of the old and new OVA, for comparison.

You gave your opinion clearly about the soundtrack, but you could use short examples of both soundtracks. Then people can hear what you're talking about and maybe give their own opinion.

As much as I'd love to, I just couldn't take the risk of using actual videos or soundtracks after the two strikes I had on Youtube... and they were both for DBZ videos. I don't know if Blip.TV take it easier than YT, but just thinking about "Copyright Infringements" and the scary thought of loosing my new account because I used a video clip from a copyrighted material are forcing me to choose my content very carefully!

Nice little anti-piracy speech at the end.

Something I learned from DaizenshuuEX.

[Godo]

I would like to give you the tip to rehearse the review a couple of times if the problem is that you are having a hard time to enunciate and read at the same time.
I've had the same problem, and doing several takes and reviewing has helped me a lot. I mean, I speak English very well normally, but when reading aloud I get worse, so I rehearse prior to presentations.