Flamingwindjutsu DBZ fandubs *UPDATED 15/11/2010*

[Flamingwindjutsu]

#1 - The Z-Sword Breaks

Here is the first DBZ fandub I've mixed, and I think it turned out pretty well overall. Please leave your critiques and feedback. Please try to make criticism constructive. Also, yes, I know I slurred pretty damn bad in one of the lines, so... well mention it if you must, just know I'm aware of it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7STF86sbbc

Starring
Goku-Lordofthemorning
Gohan-Flamingwindjutsu
Supreme Kai-Flamingwindjutsu
Kibito-wyotryot

Bleach Diamond Dust OST-Execution
Bleach Memories of Nobody OST-Will Save You

SFX from Voice Acting Alliance Sound Collection

#2 - Goku's Speech

(On its way soon, I'll say end of November-ish)

[linkdude20002001]

I like Kaiohshin's voice, but I don't think Gokuh sounds like he has that child-like innocence that he's known for, and Gohan is perhaps a bit too deep. He doesn't sound like a 17-year-old like he's supposed to. Though I did have a friend who had a voice even deeper than that (and he was 16), but he should probably sound younger (and less like the He-Man Gokuh from the AB Groupe dub of the movies). Kaiohshin should probably have more emotion to his voice when he's got that utter shock face on. Kabito's voice is kinda meh... Perhaps a different take on the voice would work.