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Dragon Ball: TCS

Post by TeamPoPo » Tue Sep 13, 2011 2:11 am

This is my fan-fic. Before we start I want you all to know this is pretending that GT never was made.
Also Please tell me all what you think! I really want to get people to read atleast the first five chapters, Then tell me what you fellow's think! :)

So, Here you go!

Chapter 1!

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6 Years Later after Majin Buu Was Defeated by the Z Warriors, Goku Makes a Decision to re-group with his freinds and family at the 28th Worlds Martial Arts Torunement. 
What awaits Earths Hero's, Find out Now On Dragon Ball: TCS!

Chapter 1: The Reuinion
Chi-Chi: GOKU! WILL YOU HURRY IT UP! WE'RE GOING TO BE LATE!
Krillin: Naggy as always.
Chi-Chi: WHAT DID YOU SAY! I WILL MURDE...
Bulma: Chi-Chi its been so long!
Chi-Chi: Bulma!



Goku: Hey Guys? Whats up?
Krillin: Goku, Look it's Tien.
Tien: Hey guys, Hows it going?
Krillin: Hey Tien.
Goku: Yea... Its a... been awhile.
Tien: Yea Hasin't it? Hey uhh by the way is Launch coming?
Krillin: Yea I think she's coming, Not sure through.
Tien: Ahh God Damni...


Krillin: It's Vegeta and Trunks!
Vegeta: Hmm... Kakarot...
Trunks: Hey Goku! Where's Goten?
Goku: Ehh I really don't know...
Chi-Chi: Goku LEARN TO TAKE CARE OF YOUR KIDS! *Hits Goku*
Goku: Sorry, Geez... That Hurt you know.
Vegeta: The Strongest man alive hurt by a girl... Pathetic.
Bulma: WHATS THAT ABOUT GIRLS *Kicks Vegeta* SEXIST Fool...
Vegeta: Owwww! Servent Wo--men...
Goku: Haha... Like good times right?


Master Roshi: Oh Oh Oh The PoP wizz is here Baby! Whats Shakkin?
Goku: MASTER ROSHI! Its been so long!
Master Roshi: Yea Yea... Whatever What I'm looking for is some Momaseeta!
Hey Babay Wana Ride my stick shift? *Grabs Bulma and Chi-Chi's Butts*
Bulma and Chi-Chi: DIRTY OLD MAN! *Both hit him with a Frying Pan*
Master Roshi: Owwww... Where did you always get a Frying Pan?



Goku: GOHAN! 
Chi-Chi: Videl! Rich.. Rich.. VIDEL!
Gohan: Hey DAD! Its been so long! Living with Videl in Satan city gets boring without you around!
Goku: Really? Ehh Gohan your not going to where that to the Torunment right?
Gohan: WHAT? Why does everyone think say!
Videl: Told you... 
Gohan: STOP MOCKING ME!
Vegeta: Your Outfit is stupid
Gohan: I know your all just jealous.
Gohan: PICCOLO! HES HERE!
Piccolo: Gohan, Goku. 


Goku: Hey! Piccolo, Long time no see huh.
Piccolo: Yea, I Guess. By the way Gohan I brought a guest along.
Gohan: DENDE! Whats up!
Dende: Gohan! You need to come up more often.
Gohan: Yea I guess being married took away all freedom I had.
Goku: It sure does!
Chi-Chi: WHAT! *Hits Goku Again*
Goku: Sorry... Geez. Can we go yet?
Chi-Chi: Goku try to remember who's not here...
Goku: Oh Yeah! Oolong!
Chi-Chi: YOU IDIOT! YOUR SON GOTEN! REMEMBER?
Goku: Ohh yea hmm... Where is he?
Everybody: HE'S YOUR SON!
Goku: I know. I know, Hmm I got his CHI. Instant Transmission!



Goku: Hey Goten, It's time to go.
Goten: Oh Yea right Dad! Kinda Forgot...
Goku: Heh, You sure take after your dad. Grab on, Instant Tranmission!
Chi-Chi: GOTEN! WHERE WERE YOU! HOW DARE YOU JUST LEAVE LIKE THAT!
Goten: Sorry Mom I was just well talking to my Girl-Freind...
*Everyones Jaws Drop*
Everyone: G-G-GIRLFRIEND?
Goten: Yea we can talk about it later, We Have a Tournement to go to right?
Goku: Yea lets go!

A Couple Hours Later At the Tournement!

Annoucer: Registration Ends In 10 Minutes!
Goku: We'll Lets get going!
Mysterious Person: Your Skipping the line... Go back unless you want to end up... Dead.
"Black Hair, Blue Eyes, Black Shirt, Black Pants and a TAIL!"
Everyone besides Goku and Chi-Chi: "THERES NO M-M-MORE SAIYANS A-A-ALIVE!


Who is this mysterious Saiyan, Can it be? What has happened? Is he a Hero or a Villan?
Find out next chapter of DRAGON BALL: TCS!
Chapter 2!

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Chapter 2!
A NEW Saiyanjin?



Krillin: Are my eyes deciveing me?
Goku: No. It's real.
Mysterious Man: What are you staring at!?!
Goku: Everyone Go.
Krillin: But Gok...
Goku: GO! I'll sign in for all of you!
Krillin: Alright... Lets go 18.
Goku: EVERYONE LEAVE NOW!
*Everyone Leaves the room.*
Goku: First I need to know, Are you evil?
Mysterious Man: Hmph Why should I tell you? 
Goku: Listen I know this may sound out of hand but I'm your...
Mysterious Man: What?



Goku: Father.



Mysterious Man: Yea right, My father died when I was just Four years old.
Goku: Listen your name is Luvara and your my son. I'll Explain later.
Luvara: Heh, You make me laugh. My father can't be as weak as you.
Goku: But Liste...


Registration Man: Sir Please your name?
Luvara: It's Sebastian, Age 15.
Registration Man: Alright sir, You are Number 123 for the Pre-Elimanarys.
Luvara: See you there. Heh, Do I have a surprise for you...
Registration Man: Sir your name.
Goku: It's Goku, I will also be Registrating some freinds...

"A little While later"

Krillin: Goku! What happended? 
Goku: Don't worry about it. Okay?
Krillin: Alright, So What's are numbers?
Goku: Krillin, Your 120, Vegeta, Your 80, Goten Your 163, Gohan Your 111, Piccolo Your 121 and I'm 125.
Announcer: The PRE-ELIMINATION Rounds start in 10 minutes!
We'll lets go now.



Announcer: The Pre-ELIMINATION Rounds are like the old styled Rounds. 
Not the average punching machine that cause lots of trouble the last couple of years.
So you know the rules when your names called go fight your opponent. 
If you win you advance. If you lose your out of the tournement.
Kill your opponent and your out GOT IT!
Thats it. Wait intill you get called and then fight.


Goku: Long time, No see!
Announcer: Ahh It's great to see you guys here again.
It's such a snooze fest when your not!
Goku: Heh, Heh.
Announcer: Say It was really you guys who defeated Majin Buu Right?
Goku: Heh, Maybe.

Announcer: Numbers 111 and 192 Up to the stage.
Gohan VS Raw Luje!
Raw Luje: Heh, Booknerd you know who you steping to?
Gohan: Yea, Someone who's about to lose.
Raw Luje: Big Talk for a Small Person.
*Gohan Kick's Raw Luje's Out of the ring!*
Raw Luje: THE-E-E PAIN!
Announcer: Looks like Gohan WON!
Goku: NICE ONE SON!
Gohan: I think I knocked him to hard...


Announcer: Next up is 80 vs 212 Vegeta vs Kujuepop
Vegeta: Lets make this quick.
Announcer: FIGHT!
*Vegeta Kick's Kujuepop threw the wall knocking him out!*
Announcer: Ohh the pain! The Pain just cant stop can it?


Next Is 125 vs 201
Goku vs The BreadBaker!
FIGHT!
*Goku Tap's the BreadBaker Knocking him out*
Announcer: Well, Obviously Goku won.
Next up is 120 vs 123
Krillin vs Sebastian!


Krillin: You know your Goku's son right?
Luvara: No, No weakling is my father, Now let us fight!
Krillin *Talks to self: He has an evil look in his eye!*
Announcer: FIGHT!
*Luvara slap's Krillin with his tail Knocking him out while His nose bleeds!*
Announcer: Unexpected Sebastian Knocks Krillin out with ease! This is incrediable!
Luvara: Weakling....
Goku: KRILLIN!
Luvara: Oh sorry did I only Knock out your freind with my Power? Oh yes I did...
See you soon...
Goku: How can my son be so-so-so RUTHLESS!
Vegeta: Calm down Kakarot! He is a Saiyan after all...
Goku: Vegeta! We're not that type of Saiyans!
Vegeta: All Saiyan are Ruthless in there own way. Get over it.



So time passed as they all blow threw the tournement, Unfortunaly for Krillin.
Know there ready for the challenge iteself! Is Luvara really Goku's Son? 
If he is will he become one in the Goku's Family? How strong is he really? 
ALL OF THESE QUESTION'S CAN BE ANSWERED IN THE NEXT
CHAPTER OF!
Dragon Ball: TCS!
Chapter 3!

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Chapter 3!
The Tournament Starts!

Announcer: The Tournament starts in only 10 minutes!
Goku: Hey, Goten who are you paired against?
Goten: Hmm... Some Sebastian Guy.
Goku: Sebastian! *Talks to self "If I'm not mistaken that's Luvara's Name*
Goten: Yea what's wrong with it?
Goku: Oh. Nothing, Its just. Do your best, Okay?
Goten: Sure!
"Meanwhile"


Bulma: I wonder who's up first.
Good Launch: BULMA!
Bulma: Launch! Its been forever! Years!
Good Launch: It sure has. 
Bulma: Just like good times. Do you know Goku is a alien?
Good Launch: Whaa... an Alien?
Bulma: I'll explain later. Hey Number 18, Why do you look so worried?
Number 18: I have a fealing that something happened to Krillin.
Marron: Mom? Do you think Dad's alright?
Number 18: Not sure.


Announcer: It's TIME FOR THE Tournament! First up is Goten vs Luvara!
Chi-Chi: Ugh. This isin't good.

Goten: Are sure you want to fight me? I dont want to hurt you?
Luvara: I would watch who your talking to. 
Announcer: FIGHT!
*Luvara and Goten Clash together! Luvara easyly overwhealming Goten!*
Luvara: How's this for ya? Weakling!
*Goten Punches Luvara in his face*
Luvara: Hmph. Nice try!
*Luvara Kick's Goten in his face!*
Goten: Ugh! I cant lose... Atleast not to a weakling like you!
Luvara: You made me angry...
Goten: Sorry if I offended you! 
*Luvara stop's Goten's Punch, Counter-Attacking him*
Goten: Fine! Time to push my level to the top! BEAT THIS!
*Goten goes Super SaiyanJin Infront of Luvara*
Goten: 50x My Strength!
Luvara: That's to bad. I think I'll go 100x My strength with one attack... Hmph.
Goten: HUH!
*Luvara Punchs his fist to the ground, Obsorbing all engery in his area into a resorve spot in his body.*
Luvara:What I just did, Added 100x My Strength to a part of my body, For instance my hands. So when I punch, We'll It'll hurt 100x More! Hahahaha!
Goten: No your bluffing! *Goten attacks Luvara, Luvara Dodged and then Punches Goten so hard it knocks him out!*
Announcer: It looks like Goten is knocked out! Luvara wins!
Luvara: Hah, Never was a challenge!
Announcer: Next up is Piccolo vs Gohan!

What will happen on the next Chapter of Dragon Ball: TCS?
The only way to find out is to read it!
Chapter 4!

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Dragon Ball TCS: Chapter 4!
Gohan vs Piccolo

Goku: Looks like this is going to be a good match up, Gohan show me what you learned in the last couple of years!
Gohan: Piccolo, Hmm guess that means I should get serious *Takes off glasses*.
Piccolo: I wasin't expecting to fight you so early.
Gohan: Me either. Lets GO!
Announcer: FIGHT!


"Meanwhile"


Chi-Chi: Bulma, 18, Launch look! Gohan's up!
Bulma: Oh yea. Would you look at that. He really did Grow didin't he?
Chi-Chi: Yea, I'm just happy he isin't wearing that rediciouls outfit!
Bulma: ......
Medic: Ma'am Is this your son?
Chi-Chi: *Looks down at Goten's Bloody face* Ugh. *Faints*.


Piccolo: ARE YOU READY GOHAN! *Repeatidly Punches Gohan, Gohan Dodges all of the punches couter attacking Piccolo with a Kick!*
Piccolo: Ugh!
*Gohan Goes for another Kick! Piccolo Dodges and couter attacks!*
Gohan: UGH!
Gohan: Good warm up. "PICCOLO!"
*Gohan Kick's Piccolo's Jaw, Piccolo is stuned in the air, Gohan Repeatitly Kick's and Punches Piccolo. Piccolo then starts to cough blood. Gohan Slams Piccolo into the floor then shooting him with a High Power Ki Blast!*
Piccolo: Gohan... Your... Power. It-its Amazing!



Vegeta: Hmm... I expected Gohan to be weaker after settleing down.
Trunks: GOHAN! Your amazing!
Goku: That's My son for you.
Vegeta: Trunk's! You need to train more!
Trunks: That was kinda random Dad but ehh okay.
Goku: Seem's Like someone is jealous.
Vegeta: SHUT UP KAKAROT MY SON IS TWICE AS STRONG AS YOURS!



Gohan: Piccolo... I was expecting you to be a little stronger.
Piccolo: Don't get cocky yet. I have some tricks up my sleave! "RAPID FIRE!"
Gohan: Uhh!
*Piccolo spraying Gohan with his Rapid-Fire attack, Gohan seemed to dodge most of them. After dodgeing them he realized they weren't aiming for him, Instead They we're amazing around him. Now Gohan is caught in a bad situation. Piccolo Exploding all of the Blasts. Gohan Gets Servearly Damaged and falls to the ground.*

Gohan: Nice try Piccolo. You Damaged me there but now... I'm finishing this fight!
AHHHH! Gohan Punching left and right! Hitting every punch and kick. Gohan Decides to finish the fight by starting to rip both of Piccolo's arm's off. Knowing that Piccolo can re-generate of course. Piccolo re-fuses in letting Gohan do that. Piccolo Couter attacks Gohan. Throwing him onto Arena Floor. Piccolo once again using his Rapid Fire Abbility!
This time Gohan dodge's. Gohan appeares behind piccolo and says "Finished Piccolo. No hard fealing but... I want to meet my brother!" Gohan then rip's both of Piccolo's Arm's off. The Announcer Shocked by this says into his micorphone "We have a amazing fight here. Gohan just ripped off Piccolo's ARM!" Then Gohan throwing down piccolo to the 
outside part of the ring! Piccolo Falls down with the his legs throbing in pain, A very bloody and gorey face, and worse of all no arm's! Piccolo then fall's out of the ring and the Announcer, Announced that Gohan has won the match!
Everyone amazed by Gohan's Amazing Power! Jaw's we're droping every-where!


Announcer: We will be taking a short break because of this amazing match! We will be back in 2 Hours! The third Match-Up will be announced then!

Goku: Hey Gohan! Why don't we get a bite to eat!
Gohan: Sure dad! Just a minute I want to make sure that piccolo is alright!
So Gohan went to check on Piccolo. Then all of the Z fighters went out to go eat there total was 20K Zeni! Like always Goku didin't pay for it. Who is the next fighters? 
Who will win the fight? All of this will be answered on the next chapter of Dragon Ball: TCS!
Chapter 5!

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Chapter 5!
Trunks vs Deadlock


Announcer: The Next match will beguin in 10 minutes. The Match up is...
Trunks VS Deadlock!
Trunks walk's up to the arena. "So your my match-up... Wondering who you were." 
Deadlock slowly Says "Hmph... Get ready! Just because your a kid doesin't mean I'm going easy on you!" Trunks responds "Oh. I'm ready!" Then the Announcer started the match! "FIGHT!"

*Trunk's goes to kick Deadlock, Deadlock dodges Trunk's hit counter-attacking trunks. "So you're not half bad!" Trunk's goes to punch Deadlock but Deadlock dodges it again. Deadlock then Kick's Trunks. Trunks then dodges the attack and then Kick's Deadlock's Jaw open! Trunks then use's a highly powered up Ki blast to stun Deadlock. Trunk's rushes to Deadlock Kicking him in the air then Slamming him down! 

Deadlock: So this is the power of a SaiyanJin... Hmm... 
Trunk's: Time to pay! AHHH! *Trunk's Goes Ultra Supersaiyan(1.5)
Goku: Hey Vegeta! When did Trunk's Progress into an Ultra Supersaiyan...
Vegeta: We'll Kakarot my son is a true blooded Saiyan. Unlike your Kids that are caught up in school and girlfreinds! 
Goku: We'll I wouldin't say that.
Bulma: YOU CAN DO IT TRUNKS! YOUR MOMMY BELIVES IN YOU!


Trunk's then procides to punch Deadlock. Deadlock avoides every punch and ends up kicking Trunks! Trunk's eye's shrivel with fear! Trunk's power starts to drain more and more by the second. DeadLock drains all of Trunk's Power. Trunk's On near death, Deadlock let's go of Trunks and finishes him off with one punch! Trunk's fall down in fear in agony landing outside of the ring. Trunk's power has been completely removed. The Announcer then said that Deadlock won. All the Z warriors and there family are very confused about this win.

Who really is Deadlock? Is he that dangerous? Can he be the new villan of this series? Is trunk's going to be okay? You can find out if you read the next Chapter of Dragon Ball TCS!

P.S Sorry for the length of this chapter, Chouldin't think of much for this chapter because of the lineup!

Thanks! Make sure to tell me what you thought!

P.S I really need a good drawer for the art so if you would like to volunteer that would be amazing!

THANKS! ~ Nick