Fanfic: 21st Tenkaichi Budokai, An alternate story

[SSJGarfield]

Hey guys =D

Here's a fanfic I've been working on for a couple of years and so far I've got 5 chapters.

The story is an alternate story-line for the 21st Tenkaichi Budokai arc in which Goku learns about his
Saiyan origins much, much earlier then in the original story and instead of Raditz telling him this information, My Dragonball OC called Jagaimo (Who is Goku's older sister) comes to Earth, participates in the 21st Tenkaichi Budokai and tells Goku about his true
origins.

Some remarks about my writing style:
- There might be some spelling and grammatical errors because I've been raised billangual (Dutch and English)
- I tend to switch from Japanese and English terminologies

So please keep this in mind before posting comments on the story. I will post the first chapter now and the next one after 3 - 5 comment posts.

Without further ado, Here's the first chapter:

21st Tenkaichi Budokai
An Alternate Story

Chapter 1: Arrival on Earth

Far away in our solar system, near Neptune’s moon Triton, a small spaceship is hurling
its way through space, carrying a young girl, about 16 years of age.

“Computer. What is the nearest habitable planet in this solar system” The young purple haired girl asks.
“Nearest habitable planet is Earth.” The computer answers. “Earth? That does sound familiar.
Can you tell me which Saiyans were assigned to Earth?” The girl wonders.

“Searching….searching…..Saiyans assigned to Earth….Kakarot. About 12 years ago.”
The computer tells the girl who’s surprised to hear that name.

“Set course for planet Earth” the girl commands to the Computer” “Course set for planet Earth.
Estimated time till arrival….5 days” Computer answers after setting the coordinates.
“I’m coming for you, little bro….I hope you’re still all right.” The girl mutters in herself as she prepares
to rest for the remainder of the journey.

Meanwhile on Earth, a young boy with black spiky hair is training with a young bald boy who has
6 small dots on his for-head. “Oh boy! Only 7 more days until the Tenkaichi Budokai. I’m so excited.
What about you, Krillin?” The spiky haired boy calls out of joy.
“Oh me too! I sure hope we get far in the tournament, Goku” The bald boy answers his friend. During their training,
the boys were carrying 100 lbs turtle shells on their backs to help them to become stronger and stronger each day.

Goku and Krillin are now training under the watchful eye of Muten Roshi, also known as Kame-sennin, for nearly 8 months.
Their exercises include milk delivery, farming, construction work and swimming in shark-infested waters.

Two days before the 21st Tenkaichi Budokai, the young purple haired girl finally approached planet Earth.
“Jagaimo, Wake up….We are now approaching planet Earth” The computer said when waking up the young girl.

“Yaaaawwwnnn…wow…Those five days really flew by” the girl, whose name appears to be Jagaimo,
says when rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. She looks through the window of her space ship to take a look of Earth.
“So this is planet Earth? It sure looks beautiful” Jagaimo says in a cheerful tone. “Computer, initiate landing procedures”
“Landing procedures activated” The space ship is now rushing towards Earth and lands near a large city

“Welcome to planet Earth. You may now exit the spaceship” the computer said after the landing.

When Jagaimo gets out of her space ship, it’s revealed she’s quite tall for her age, has long purple
hair with spiky hair parts on top while she’s wearing a pink combat suit, blue fingerless gloves and
white boots. She also has a long purple monkey-tail curled around her waist.

“Well here I am…Now let’s see if Kakarot is around here somewhere. But first I need some Earth clothes.
I would stand out too much with my current clothes” Jagaimo thought and approached the city.

Who is this mysterious young lady called Jagaimo? Are her intentions good or evil?
And who is this “Kakarot” she’s looking for? Read it next time.

Hope you guys enjoy this first chapter and be positive about it.