My GT

[Nex Carnifex]

This is how I would do GT if I ever got the chance to pitch a script for a re-imagining of the continuation of Dragon Ball to Toei, this is probably tl;dr but wtvr I want to post it, if you read it tell me if you think it would be better than the actual GT or if there are problems in it personally I think it would work really well and would be pretty amazing if made. I tried to strip it down as much as possible to just get basic points across, and this would just be the 1st part of it all. If I had the talent to write a manga I would but I don’t. Its long but I was really bored and decided to write out my ideas, so if you do read it please tell me what you think, thanks. This is how I feel GT should have been done...

(I'm working on a rewriting it)

6 years after Goku and Uub leave to train Uub has surpassed SS3 Goku in power. Meanwhile alien scientist Myuu approaches the new king of the Planet Trade Organization, sharing with him his plan to eradicate the Saiyans. King Cooler, having trained for years without coming close to the power readings taken from Earth, is enthusiastic about the plan. Myuu has recovered the spell book which Bibidi used to summon Majin Buu, and plans to use it to summon something much more powerful. With the help of Cooler he preforms a mass sacrifice of multiple planets, Cooler using his death ball to obliterate them. To control the demon spirit Myuu seals it inside his machine mutant parasite containing the cells of the Tuffle king. Cooler and Myuu with his mechanical servant Rilld invade Earth with a gigantic fleet made up of the strongest warriors within Cooler's massive collection of races, allowing the demon parasite to slip in unnoticed.

still working on this...

[theawesomepossum777]

That's an awesome take on it! I would never think or write something with such detail. What you just wrote is like Dragon Ball at its peak! Especially the stuff you gave the minor characters to do. You should have been in the writing staff Toei had for GT when it aired.

[Nex Carnifex]

That's an awesome take on it! I would never think or write something with such detail. What you just wrote is like Dragon Ball at its peak! Especially the stuff you gave the minor characters to do. You should have been in the writing staff Toei had for GT when it aired.

omg thanks that means a lot to me! Yeah I was just thinking what I would have loved in a continuation of Dragon Ball and how everyone could play a significant role even if they were not very strong anymore, and also how to make the story actually make sense and flow into itself unlike GT. I wish I could make a fan-manga like Dragon Ball Multiverse or Dragon Ball AF with this kind of story because then people looking for an alternate, more sensible continuation with authentic art would have one, I know that's something I've always wanted.

[SSJ YUSUKE]

Not bad, more please.

[Insertclevername]

Wow this is some awesome stuff! I like how you are focusing on characters that aren't Gokuu.

[Nex Carnifex]

I completed the 1st half of the Baby arc, it's really long so I split it into parts.

[elyas11]

you know.. if I didn't have my own Dragon Ball manga in the making, I would've loved to work with you on this.
But I can't take on 2 mangas because of school. Your take is Dragon Ball according to Akira Toriyama. How it should be!

[Nex Carnifex]

I'm gonna rewrite some of this I thought about it and I developed much better ideas so yeah. And then I might finish it, if people are interested.

Edit: So there's my new idea for a story, I think its better, what do you think?