Weird theory I'd like a response to...
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Weird theory I'd like a response to...
Bit of background, first: I'm a writer of fanfiction, and while I was plotting out a story of mine I was thinking of enemies... I wanted something origional, and thought: "Hey... wouldn't it be cool if there was another Saiya-jin?" Of course, the problem with that is that *IF* someone else had survived, there would be no *WAY* they'd be powerful enough to hold up to a post-GT Vegita, etc.
Sooooo... I started thinking, and here's my big WHAT IF question I need responce on (so that you can tell me if it's too impossible).
WHAT IF the Saiya-jin on Vegita-sei were just a small division of the main group? It says in the timeline that they arrived on Tsufuru-sei out of no-where, and were only there for a fairly short time after concoring it before it was destroyed. What if King Vegita was actually just a general of the REAL Saiya-jin planet, and he and his troops were sent to concer a planet for the real King? King Vegita got arrogant and made himself king of the planet, naming it after him, etc? What if the main group of Saiya-jin didn't CARE, and so let this happen (for whatever reason)? Strength issues aside here (that's a completly different theory of mine), would that be plausable? Possible enough to write into a story? Or should I just forget the idea and make up some cousin of Furiza's or something?
Be harsh, but not mean.
Or ignore me entirely. I don't claim to be an all-knowing DBZ head, after all.
Thanks! (and sorry this is so long...)
Sooooo... I started thinking, and here's my big WHAT IF question I need responce on (so that you can tell me if it's too impossible).
WHAT IF the Saiya-jin on Vegita-sei were just a small division of the main group? It says in the timeline that they arrived on Tsufuru-sei out of no-where, and were only there for a fairly short time after concoring it before it was destroyed. What if King Vegita was actually just a general of the REAL Saiya-jin planet, and he and his troops were sent to concer a planet for the real King? King Vegita got arrogant and made himself king of the planet, naming it after him, etc? What if the main group of Saiya-jin didn't CARE, and so let this happen (for whatever reason)? Strength issues aside here (that's a completly different theory of mine), would that be plausable? Possible enough to write into a story? Or should I just forget the idea and make up some cousin of Furiza's or something?
Be harsh, but not mean.
Or ignore me entirely. I don't claim to be an all-knowing DBZ head, after all.
Thanks! (and sorry this is so long...)
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There's some good thought behind your ideas, though I have no idea how good the fic would actually be unless I read the finished deal. a lot just depends on how well you develop the idea. If its done with good taste and not just well...whatever (I'm not feeling very articulate) I'm sure it could work in the eyes of some fans.
One thing about your premise that others may attack, though, is that I think the whole story about the sayians arriving on planet Planet is that that part (which was the Kaiou-sama narrative) was anime filler, which also went claimed that the planet was destroyed by a disgruntled Kami. So...there's my response.
One thing about your premise that others may attack, though, is that I think the whole story about the sayians arriving on planet Planet is that that part (which was the Kaiou-sama narrative) was anime filler, which also went claimed that the planet was destroyed by a disgruntled Kami. So...there's my response.
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Is it the home planet? I'm not sure, I forget those types of things. Truthfully, anything is possible in fanfiction, but it's better when you don't alter the history of what you are writing fanfiction about. Make something that would actually be possible to tie into the real story.
If I remembered exactly if it was the home planet, I'd tell you. However, I don't. Freeza having a cousin is entirely possible, because even if Freeza claimed that everyone else of his spieces was killed, there's a chance that one got by that Freeza didn't know about. We'd only know for sure if Freeza used some "Other people of Freeza's race detector" and couldn't find anyone other than his father and brother (even still, it could have bugs and / or survivors might be out of range).
Go for it, just try not to alter history. Alright, parron?
If I remembered exactly if it was the home planet, I'd tell you. However, I don't. Freeza having a cousin is entirely possible, because even if Freeza claimed that everyone else of his spieces was killed, there's a chance that one got by that Freeza didn't know about. We'd only know for sure if Freeza used some "Other people of Freeza's race detector" and couldn't find anyone other than his father and brother (even still, it could have bugs and / or survivors might be out of range).
Go for it, just try not to alter history. Alright, parron?
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