Dragon Ball Wrong Time

[dbzfan7]

Basically a fan comic based on if Trunks' time machine went to the Saiyan Saga instead of where he ended up in official material. There isn't too much as of now though.

http://selphiesk.deviantart.com/gallery ... 5?offset=0

[TheGmGoken]

Basically a fan comic based on if Trunks' time machine went to the Saiyan Saga instead of where he ended up in official material. There isn't too much as of now though.

http://selphiesk.deviantart.com/gallery ... 5?offset=0

Not going to lie. This is kinda good. I've seen better. But this isn't as bad as I thought it'll be/ Bulma reaction is priceless.

[dbzfan7]

Basically a fan comic based on if Trunks' time machine went to the Saiyan Saga instead of where he ended up in official material. There isn't too much as of now though.

http://selphiesk.deviantart.com/gallery ... 5?offset=0

Not going to lie. This is kinda good. I've seen better. But this isn't as bad as I thought it'll be/ Bulma reaction is priceless.

That's why it's an interesting look. Over course there is better. I have a problem with the art at some points, but it's overall a decent read. Especially compared to most fan fictions.

[SelphieSK]

I was going to create a new topic for my fanmanga, good thing I did a search first x)

So Wrong Time is about Trunks traveling back in time two years earlier than he intended, and arriving right as Vegeta and Nappa first appear on Earth.
It's currently on the 5th chapter, being updated every Saturday.

You can read it either on deviantART or on Tumblr.

Here's the latest page (it IS spoilerish, so you probably shouldn't look at it if you intend to read the manga) :

Spoiler:

The first few pages are not as good looking as they could be, but the art gets better

[FoolsGil]

Meh. The fact that Trunks is a Super Saiyan clinches all suspense of sending him to the Saiyan Saga. Now, if the machine malfunctioned, exploded, and the damage was severe enough that Trunks could not access Super Saiyan and would lose to Vegeta in a straight fight because of his injuries, then yeah, this could be a good read. Since it's not that, it's only good for the art, no offense intended.

[TheGmGoken]

Meh. The fact that Trunks is a Super Saiyan clinches all suspense of sending him to the Saiyan Saga. Now, if the machine malfunctioned, exploded, and the damage was severe enough that Trunks could not access Super Saiyan and would lose to Vegeta in a straight fight because of his injuries, then yeah, this could be a good read. Since it's not that, it's only good for the art, no offense intended.

That sounds like NOTHING DB would ever do. Seems more like common fanfanfic thing so a strong character will lose. How about Trunks just refusing to hit his daddy

[SelphieSK]

Meh. The fact that Trunks is a Super Saiyan clinches all suspense of sending him to the Saiyan Saga. Now, if the machine malfunctioned, exploded, and the damage was severe enough that Trunks could not access Super Saiyan and would lose to Vegeta in a straight fight because of his injuries, then yeah, this could be a good read. Since it's not that, it's only good for the art, no offense intended.

None taken.
But you should maybe try giving it a chance first? The suspense doesn't hinge on Trunks's ability to beat everyone. It's quite the opposite.

[Hellspawn28]

Funny how I had a idea about this story for a DBZ game. Anyways, I enjoy it so far and I look forward for more.

[dbzfan7]

Welcome Selphie to Kanzenshuu.

[The Monkey King]

Meh. The fact that Trunks is a Super Saiyan clinches all suspense of sending him to the Saiyan Saga. Now, if the machine malfunctioned, exploded, and the damage was severe enough that Trunks could not access Super Saiyan and would lose to Vegeta in a straight fight because of his injuries, then yeah, this could be a good read. Since it's not that, it's only good for the art, no offense intended.

It's a very interesting piece of fan fiction.
It's not about how powerful Trunks is, it's the ripple effect he creates by going back to the sayin saga.

[Hellspawn28]

I'm looking forward what happens next since Trunks going back too early could change a lot of things. I guess Piccolo is alive which means everyone will be wish back expect for Kuririn and Chaozu. I don't think Trunks will go SSj, if he did then it would be funny to see how Vegeta will react to a SSj during this time era.

[TheGmGoken]

I'm looking forward what happens next since Trunks going back too early could change a lot of things. I guess Piccolo is alive which means everyone will be wish back expect for Kuririn and Chaozu. I don't think Trunks will go SSj, if he did then it would be funny to see how Vegeta will react to a SSj during this time era.

I thought Piccolo

Spoiler:

already died?

Spoiler:

[Hellspawn28]

I thought he was knock out? So far DBWT and DBNA are my favorite DB fan manga on DA. This has a lot of potential to see what happens in the story and I'm surprise Trunks didn't kill Nappa. If Trunks goes to Namek with them then they might kill off Freeza for good then Cell might be much weaker now or maybe Gero's spy bot ends up following them to Namek to create a stronger version of Cell. Imagine if Cell had the DNA of Freeza and The Ginyu Force.

[FoolsGil]

Meh. The fact that Trunks is a Super Saiyan clinches all suspense of sending him to the Saiyan Saga. Now, if the machine malfunctioned, exploded, and the damage was severe enough that Trunks could not access Super Saiyan and would lose to Vegeta in a straight fight because of his injuries, then yeah, this could be a good read. Since it's not that, it's only good for the art, no offense intended.

That sounds like NOTHING DB would ever do. Seems more like common fanfanfic thing so a strong character will lose. How about Trunks just refusing to hit his daddy

That doesn't sound like something DB would ever do either. When do Z Fighters refuse to do what's right, excluding Vegeta?

But you should maybe try giving it a chance first? The suspense doesn't hinge on Trunks's ability to beat everyone. It's quite the opposite.

Alright, I'll check it more.

[TheGmGoken]

That doesn't sound like something DB would ever do either. When do Z Fighters refuse to do what's right, excluding Vegeta?

Gohan at the Cell Games. Besides *SPOILER

Spoiler:

Trunks is doing exactly this in the fanmanga..well kinda. He refuse to fight but he however is getting invole which fucks stuff up

*

[Hellspawn28]

I think Trunks in his base form might be strong enough to take out everyone up to Freeza's third form. If he does go to Namek in this fan manga.

[SelphieSK]

I thought Piccolo

Spoiler:

already died?

As Hellspawn28 said,

Spoiler:

Piccolo's just been knocked out, he's still very much alive.

Welcome Selphie to Kanzenshuu.

Thank you! And thanks for creating a topic for my fanmanga

[goku1234]

so this manga is like WHAT IF? right? it look very amazing keep up the good job at it!!

[Hellspawn28]

Sadly only one page a week. As long if you put a lot of effort and art into the story then it should be worth it.

[Sin]

Meh. The fact that Trunks is a Super Saiyan clinches all suspense of sending him to the Saiyan Saga. Now, if the machine malfunctioned, exploded, and the damage was severe enough that Trunks could not access Super Saiyan and would lose to Vegeta in a straight fight because of his injuries, then yeah, this could be a good read. Since it's not that, it's only good for the art, no offense intended.

I've just finished checking this project out and I can't understand what you're getting at. Sometimes fan-manga for Dragon Ball doesn't have to be all about Ultra Xicor turning SSJ8, with this I can appreciate the scenario, the interactions between characters, and the tension of Trunks having to try not to interfere without knowing what he isn't supposed to interfere with.

So far it seems fun, interesting and best of all the characters are believable. I hope this project continues and consider me a follower.