So I'm thinking about writing a fic about Vegeta's childhood

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So I'm thinking about writing a fic about Vegeta's childhood

Post by jjgp1112 » Fri Jun 13, 2014 3:38 pm

I wrote a preliminary chapter as just a 1-shot, but I think I left enough in the open to turn it into a full story. it starts after Vegeta learns his planet was destroyed:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10447440/1 ... ant-Prince

What do you guys think? Comments, critique? I've disregarded Dragon Ball Minus and am trying to stay true to the characterizations.
Yamcha: Do you remember the spell to release him - do you know all the words?
Bulma: Of course! I'm not gonna pull a Frieza and screw it up!
Master Roshi: Bulma, I think Frieza failed because he wore too many clothes!
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Re: So I'm thinking about writing a fic about Vegeta's child

Post by jjgp1112 » Sun Jun 22, 2014 5:24 pm

I decided to follow through with making it a story. Here's is the last 2 chapters:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10447440/2 ... ant-Prince
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10447440/3 ... ant-Prince
What do you guys think of the characterizations thus far?
Yamcha: Do you remember the spell to release him - do you know all the words?
Bulma: Of course! I'm not gonna pull a Frieza and screw it up!
Master Roshi: Bulma, I think Frieza failed because he wore too many clothes!
Cold World (Fanfic)
"It ain't never too late to stop bein' a bitch." - Chad Lamont Butler

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