Fanfiction: Dragon Ball Otherworld

[jamiljamtheman]

Well, I've made a couple "chapters" of my fanfiction idea. Please do tell me what you think, even if you hate it, because I'm curious how I did. Happy reading! Also, the dub-name checker is changing Pikkon and Frieza's names in dialogue, but not in my all-caps identifiers. Sorry!
Dragon Ball: Otherworld
By jamiljamtheman

----NOTE----
This fan-fiction assumes a Dragon Ball timeline in which Battle of Gods,
DB Super, and RoF did not happen; GT happened after Z instead. However, I
am deciding to include the fact that Frieza acheived Golden form somehow.
The story takes place after Dragon Ball GT.

----PROLOGUE----
Goku. Across the universe, that name is engraved in the minds of living
beings everywhere. It is the name of arguably the most powerful warrior
ever known at this point in time. Throughout his life, Goku saved his own
world, Earth, countless times when he wasn't saving other worlds from
doom. After he and Vegeta defeated Omega Shenron, a villain born of the
Dragon Balls and the most powerful yet, Goku was carried away by the good
dragon Shenron along with the Dragon Balls to ensure the universe's
safety from them.

Though his adventures on Earth have come to an end, Goku has
no idea what he is about to face....

----CHAPTER 1----

*The setting is an infinite collection of floating orange clouds.
Shenron, carrying a sleeping Goku on his back, breaks through them
and fills the emptiness with his snake-like body. Goku wakes up.*

GOKU- Wow, what a place! Did you bring me here to train?
SHENRON- No. You are here because you are not supposed to be alive.
Omega did, in fact, nearly kill you. When you asked for energy
for the spirit bomb, I used what energy I had that was not
corrupted by Omega Shenron. As a result, you were able to
stay alive and defeat him. The laws of life dictate that because
you should be dead, you cannot remain in the realm of the living
and can never go back. As for training, I am no teacher of
physical arts.
GOKU- Oh. Well thank you for helping me save everyone, Shenron.
It's just a shame I'll never get to see Chi-Chi or train with
Vegeta again. Who wrote these "laws" anyway?
KING YEMMA(voice)- I did, who else?
GOKU- He-ey King Yemma! It's good to see ya again! How've you been!?
KING YEMMA- Well, those lousy scientists' shenanigans have drowned me
in paperwork...but there's something more important.
Seven immense energies have appeared in Hell. I can't
have those lousy Shadow Dragons causing more trouble
than I've already put up with. Go there and find out
what's going on.
GOKU- Uh, sure. I'll need some help, though. They have to be taken out
before they all become one again!
KING YEMMA- Pikkon can help you.
GOKU- Yeah, and I could use Piccolo's help too, since he's down there.
Shenron, can you get me and Pikkon over to wherever Piccolo is?
SHENRON- It shall be done.

*A blinding flash of light, and Goku's gone. Shenron is alone.*

SHENRON- I must keep a close eye on this. The shadow dragons were
manifestations of darkness and shouldn't have been able to
arrive in Otherworld as they were not living beings. Something
else is amiss...

END

----Chapter 2----

*The setting is in Hell. Goku, Pikkon, and Piccolo are navigating cliffs
of dark, brittle rock under the purple sky until they reach a plateau
with several boulders.*

PIKKON- This has to be the place, according to Yemma's map. But, I still
sense no ki. What are these dragons?
GOKU- I'm still not entirely sure, but I do know they need to be seperated.
PICCOLO- I can't wait to try my hand against these bozos. I was almost getting
bored of avenging my life against Nappa. Haven't seen him in a while,
actually. Heh, maybe I scared him off.
PIKKON- Wait! Look, over there!

*Behind a rock lies the 2-star Dragon Ball, emitting bright light as if another
ball was near it.*

PICCOLO- That's strange. The Dragon Balls normally have to be really close to
start glowing like that.
GOKU(approaching the ball)- I guess the energies King Yemma felt were from these,
and not from the Shadow Dragons. Might as well get
them all before someone else in here abuses them.

*As Goku approaches, the ball begins glowing at a faster rate. Short sparks of
what looks like orange electricity begin to shoot out towards Goku. Then...*

PIKKON- G-Goku!
PICCOLO- What's going on...!?
GOKU- I know! I'm sure there's no other balls nearby!
PICCOLO(sighing)- You moron...
PIKKON- Goku, your hair...
GOKU- Huh?

*As if it were natural to do, Goku materializes a mirror in his hand. In the
reflection he sees his hair glowing bright yellow-orange in sync with the
two-star Ball.*

PICCOLO & PIKKON- ...!?
GOKU- Oh yeah, my hair IS acting strange. I wonder what this could mean.

*In the blink of an eye, a white and purple stream rushes by. Goku's
mirror drops and breaks. In place of the two-star Ball is a cloud of
dust. Frieza's laughter is heard getting farther away.*

PIKKON- What?
PICCOLO- Tch! That Frieza..! We have to go after him!

*Before they can leave, Cooler stops the trio in their tracks.*

COOLER- Going somewhere?
GOKU- You guys just never quit, do you?
PIKKON- His ki is fairly strong, but I feel hardly threatened.
PICCOLO- It's a diversion. We have to take him out quickly!
GOKU- There are no stars in Hell to help you this time, Cooler!
COOLER- Hah! So I guess my brother spoke true of the newly
fun-sized Goku. And yet he was still too pathetic to
win...
PICCOLO- Let's see if it runs in the family!

*Before the fight can begin, there's a sudden flash of light.
The scene now changes to a forest of dead trees. Goku, confused,
floats above the seven Dragon Balls in front of Frieza.*

GOKU- Huh? Frieza! Hand over the Dragon Balls before I take them
from you!
FRIEZA- Gyeeeaaaaa! What the heck is going on!? I asked to summon
a dragon, and I get this pipsqueak Saiyan trash instead!
I wish I didn't have to look at your ugly monkey face
ever again!

*Frieza gasps and cups his hands over his mouth.
Goku, looking down and realizing the Balls are
right under him as he floats, momentarily stops
looking confused.*

GOKU(chuckling)- Well, if you say so!

*He snaps his fingers and a pair of glasses materializes onto
Frieza's face.*

GOKU- Hey, not bad. They match the contours of your face! (laughs)
FRIEZA- What? Where's that coming from? I thought you disappeared!
And what are these infernal contraptions on my face!?
FRIEZA(taking off glasses)- Gah! There you are, you primate! Wait...

*He puts the glasses on, gasps, and takes them off again.*

FRIEZA- Tch...n-n...

*Another flash of light. Goku is gone, and the Dragon Balls launch into
the sky and disperse.*

FRIEZA- NNNNNNNNNNYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

*Trees crumble under the stress of Frieza's tantrum as Cooler appears.
Frieza stops, panting, and turns to his brother.*

COOLER- Always the idiotic buffoon, I see.
FRIEZA(calming down, smirking)- Heh. You look pretty beat up. I knew
I'd long surpassed you at this point
but didn't expect the Namekian to
give you trouble.
COOLER- Shut up! You've just wasted an opportunity.
FRIEZA- No matter. We can find them again in no time. Good thing
my henchman who went out when the hole opened snagged
one of those radars for me.
COOLER- Yes, but we've lost the element of surprise. After the commotion of
the balls dispersing, there's no doubt every other life form in here
covets them!
FRIEZA- All my inferiors, ultimately.
COOLER- It's a wonder your puny body can hold such an ego...
FRIEZA- Silence. Let's go grab an evil scientist or something
so that you can heal quickly. We have training and
hunting to do.

END

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