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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 13, 2010] pg 169-171

Post by JulieYBM » Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:30 am

http://blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/

Three new pages. The plot thickens!!
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 13, 2010] pg 169-171

Post by Herms » Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:12 am

Page 172
Everyone: Ryu’oshin Realm!!?
Goten: Uh…
Goten: Owy…
Trunks: Goten!
Vegeta: [r] What do you mean? [l] What’s this “Ryu’oshin Realm”?
Elder Kaioshin’s voice: [r] To put it simply, it’s the world where the Shenlongs live…[l] More or less.

173
Bulma: Huh? But wasn’t Shenlong created by God?
EK: [r] To be precise, he wasn’t “created”…[l] Rather, he was “called forth” from the Ryu’oshin Realm.
Gohan: I see…So in other words, the Namekians possessed the power to summon Shenlongs forth from the Ryu’oshin Realm...
Trunks: But then why did Goku-san go to that world?
EK: Right, well originally the dragons were unable to leave the Ryu’oshin Realm. In order to call them forth to the living world, the dragonballs and a dragon model are needed…

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Gohan: Oh, I've seen that before!
EK (narration): [r] However, when the evil dragons were born, that model was destroyed. [l] Meaning that Shenlong lost his physical presence in the living world.
EK: [r] Having lost his physical presence, Shenlong couldn’t return to the Ryu’oshin Realm. [l] Shenlong’s spirit needed a vessel to enter into.
Vegeta: I get it. So then, Shenlong’s spirit entered into Kakarot…

Apparently Toyble originally had Vegeta call Goku "Goku" by mistake, but he changed it to "Kakarot".

It looks like Toyble will have DBAF Volume 3 ready in time for Comiket 78; it just needs a little touching up here and therefore before it's ready. Seems that this volume was the biggest hassle yet.

The Comiket details:

Date: August 14th (Saturday), 2010
Time: 10:00 AM ~ 4:00 PM
Place: Tokyo Big Site
Booth: West Section, Block 23b
Club Name: toywarble

The goods:

NEW: DBAF3 (First Edition): 70 pages, ¥1,000 
(contains pages 129~174 as featured on the blog, as well as 20 pages not yet shown on the blog)

DBZERO (First Edition): 52 page, ¥1,000
(contains a 4-page special bonus, "DBZero episode 1: Bardock's Secret")

DBZERO Roughdraft (First Edition) 34 pages, ¥500
(the rough draft of DBZERO)

DBAF1 (Revised Second Edition): 66 pages, ¥1,000 
(contains pages 1~64, as featured on the blog blog)

DBAF2 (Revised First Edition): 66 pages, ¥1,000  
(contains pages 65~127, as featured on the blog)
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 13, 2010] pg 169-171

Post by desirecampbell » Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:53 pm

New Toyble DBAF pages 172-174 are up on the project page: http://www.desirecampbell.com/dbaf

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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 13, 2010] pg 169-171

Post by JulieYBM » Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:00 pm

desirecampbell wrote:New Toyble DBAF pages 172-174 are up on the project page: http://www.desirecampbell.com/dbaf
Whee!!

The expositionary rest has been fun, but I hope we get to some training soon. SSj4 Vegeta and Gohan sparring, please!!
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Re: Toyble DBAF [June 13, 2010] pg 169-171

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desirecampbell wrote:New Toyble DBAF pages 172-174 are up on the project page: http://www.desirecampbell.com/dbaf
Thanks.


Man, reading some new AF is really refreshing coming from all that Broly fanwanking in Multiverse. :P

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Hellspawn28 » Sun Aug 08, 2010 8:16 pm

That was a cool chapter, and I like the whole idea of the world of Shenrons. I can't wait to see how it turns out.
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Hero 004 » Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:37 am

What an awesome revelation! A really creative back story/twist. Looking forward to see what comes next. Thanks Herms and Desire!
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by goku the krump dancer » Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:24 pm

So will Goku show up only if Shenlong is Summoned? And if Shenlong took Goku with him by choice then how could the Grand Kaio or was it West Kaio just force Paikuhan along with them?
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

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goku the krump dancer wrote:So will Goku show up only if Shenlong is Summoned? And if Shenlong took Goku with him by choice then how could the Grand Kaio or was it West Kaio just force Paikuhan along with them?
How could anyone but Toyble know the answer to that?

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by goku the krump dancer » Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:35 pm

DNA wrote:
goku the krump dancer wrote:So will Goku show up only if Shenlong is Summoned? And if Shenlong took Goku with him by choice then how could the Grand Kaio or was it West Kaio just force Paikuhan along with them?
How could anyone but Toyble know the answer to that?
I know but it doesnt hurt to speculate.
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

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goku the krump dancer wrote:
DNA wrote:
goku the krump dancer wrote:So will Goku show up only if Shenlong is Summoned? And if Shenlong took Goku with him by choice then how could the Grand Kaio or was it West Kaio just force Paikuhan along with them?
How could anyone but Toyble know the answer to that?
I know but it doesnt hurt to speculate.
But... You weren't speculating, you were asking... That's what question marks are for.

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by jjgp1112 » Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:26 pm

Wow, I actually really like his stuff about Shenron and the Dragon world.
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by goku the krump dancer » Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:55 pm

Indeed thats what question marks are for. I wasnt really expecting an answer but more or less trying to bring in new topics about this doujinshi.
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by desirecampbell » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:27 pm

New Toyble post. Something about Comiket ending.
コミケ終了

ちょっと遅くなりましたが、

コミケ。
来てくださった方々ありがとうございました。

今回販売したDBAFの3巻ですが、
会場で売れ残ったものをまんだらけ様で
ちょろっと発売いたします。
(通販&店舗で買えるそうです)

本格的な販売は9月に入ってからになってしまいそうです。

もし、ご興味がありましたら…。

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Herms » Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:42 am

desirecampbell wrote:New Toyble post. Something about Comiket ending.
The announcement is a little late, but Comiket has ended, and Toyble thanks everyone who was nice enough to come. The leftover copies of DBAF volume 3 will be sold at Mandarake. They’ll be available both in-store and by mail order starting in September, so if anyone's interested...
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Necrosaber » Thu Sep 16, 2010 5:58 pm

Been almost a month since this was updated, but I wanted to let you guys know I just got the 3rd AF book in the mail with the last 20 pages of this chapter. Seems really interesting, but I'd need someone to translate it. I'm going to upload them as soon as I get a hold of a scanner. :o

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by JulieYBM » Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:16 pm

Necrosaber wrote:Been almost a month since this was updated, but I wanted to let you guys know I just got the 3rd AF book in the mail with the last 20 pages of this chapter. Seems really interesting, but I'd need someone to translate it. I'm going to upload them as soon as I get a hold of a scanner. :o
Oh man, material not yet posted online but from the third volume?! Very interesting!
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Necrosaber » Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:28 pm

Yea, I was wondering if it was going to be uploaded before I got a hold of one. The volume has been available on the Japanese part of the Mandarake website, and was only recently placed on the English part. I've been checking the site daily, waiting to whip out the credit card. :lol:

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

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Necrosaber wrote:Been almost a month since this was updated, but I wanted to let you guys know I just got the 3rd AF book in the mail with the last 20 pages of this chapter. Seems really interesting, but I'd need someone to translate it. I'm going to upload them as soon as I get a hold of a scanner. :o
Have you got any of the other volumes? I'm interested in whatever extra material was included. As in, extra material that's not in his blog.

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Necrosaber » Thu Sep 16, 2010 9:11 pm

Yea I have all of 'em including DBZero. Not too many extras. A nifty image of Goku with Shenlong's shadow behind him. Volumes 2 and 3 have a recap page of the previous volume. Stuff like that.

I don't own a scanner, but I'm going to see if the library has one for me to access tomorrow. Hopefully, you guys will have some new pages soon.

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