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Toyble's DB Zero

Post by desirecampbell » Sun Apr 04, 2010 1:33 pm

So, Toyble’s DB Zero fan manga seems like a thing that people want to read, so this is an open call for anyone with scans of the manga. As big as you can get 'em.

Then, step two will be twisting someone's arm for translations. But first, some scans!

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Herms » Sun Apr 04, 2010 4:55 pm

As far as translations go, I already did the first few pages that Toyble put up on the blog as a special preview. I'm assuming that they're the same as what appears in the actual book:
Title Page (page 3)
Toyble
Dragon Ball Zero
Horizontal writing: Shall I give you an example of my technique?

Page Four
Box 1: [t] The year, Age 737— 3 days before Planet Vegeta’s destruction—
Box 2: Planet Vegeta Fighting Arena #3
Announcer: The team who finally wins this match will be approved to be dispatched as soldiers to another planet.
Raditz: [r] Hah [l] Hah

Page Five
Raditz: [speech bubble] Gugugu [little bubles] Hah
Shallot (short-haired kid): [r] Hey, Raditz! [l] Say that you give up!!!
Shallot’s teammates: Nice going!
Rycelo (head-scarf kid): …!
Tullece: Guguh
Tullece: [r] Raditz, that’s enough! [l] Surrender!!
Raditz: [r] ! [l] Tullece…

Page Six
Raditz: I get it…
Raditz: [r] Hey! Did you hear that?! [l] I’ll surrender, so take your leg off me.
Shallot: [t] There’s something you’re forgetting! I can’t do that! Just announce that you’ve lost like this!!!
Raditz: [r] Look, please…[l] I don’t want to lose looking so pathetic.
Shallot: …
Raditz: I’ve got pride too! Please take your leg off me.
Raditz: Please!!!
Shallot: …! Chih

Page Seven
Raditz: Daah!!!
Shallot: Wha—

Page Eight
Announcer: [r] We—ell now! [l] Contestant Raditz has kicked up sand---!!!
Announcer: I can’t see the ring through all this dust!
Shallot: [r] Crap [l] Where’d you go?!!!
Shallot: !!
Shallot: [r] Kah…[l] Kahah!!!

Page Nine
Shallot: [t] You…you bastard. Ge…getting help from others, and grabbing tails are…against the rules…!!!
Tullece: You think we care?!!!
Raditz: Hah!!!

Page Ten
Announcer: [r] Contestant Shallot is out of bounds!!! [l] And so, Raditz’s team wins!!!
Shallot’s teammates: Eeh!!?
Raditz: Hihihi

Page Eleven
Shallot teammate 1: Hey now!!!
Shallot teammate 2: That was against the rules! That’s dirty!!!
Raditz: [t] Hmph There’s no such thing as “dirty” in battle!
Raditz and co.: [r] Haah hahhahhahahhaah!!! [l] Hahhahhahhahhaah!!!
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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Scarz » Sun Apr 04, 2010 8:54 pm

DBZero sounds like a waste of money and time just scanning it now. No offense to Toyable, but it sounds like a really boring story. Gah, I have stop being so mean.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sun Apr 04, 2010 9:15 pm

Scarz wrote:DBZero sounds like a waste of money and time just scanning it now. No offense to Toyable, but it sounds like a really boring story. Gah, I have stop being so mean.
I know, more Saiyan backstory stuff...


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Post by spencer7x7 » Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:27 am

Scarz wrote:DBZero sounds like a waste of money and time just scanning it now. No offense to Toyable, but it sounds like a really boring story. Gah, I have stop being so mean.
Actually, I'm glad to see something original with no Super Saiyans or Goku. This time period has not been explained well and I hope this gets translated soon.
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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by hui43210 » Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:57 pm

Yeah, the story sounds cool to me.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by DBZ MAN » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:21 am

Oh I thought Tullece was supposed to be kid Goku and that this story was basically a 'what if' Goku stayed on Planaet Vegeta (which didn't blow up).
I prefer this Manga though to his AF one, I want to see more of it.
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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Amaranth Sparrow » Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:18 pm

Nah, it's a doujinshi about the days just before Planet Vegeta was destroyed, which is supposed to explain how the other survivors, well, survived. Raditz is the main focus.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by TenshinFan » Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:57 pm

Raditz is the main focus you say? Well then I guess I better check this out!

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by macho_man » Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:32 am

Look here: http://www.fan-manga-dbz.com/dbzero.php

Someone is scanning it! They are uploading 3 pages-a-day translated in french. Soon it will be completed! Hope DesireCampbell translates them from french to english and uploads in his blog.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Big Momma » Mon Apr 26, 2010 3:20 pm

This looks really interesting! It looks like Goku had an uncle we never knew about!

EDIT: I took a shot at translating a few pages. Yeah...I used an internet translator mostly...because I speak zero French :P


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I may do more later...or, you know, someone more qualified and better at it can do it. Whatever :P
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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:20 am

Looking good so far except for "Thales", which is correct but just looks weird.



And that Tules chest pound panel is hilarious.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Big Momma » Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:37 am

"Thales" is just weird name, period. :P
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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by desirecampbell » Tue Apr 27, 2010 5:45 pm

Ugh. My Internet has been flaky for the last few days - I've got most of the manga scanned, and am working on it. Expect the raws soon.

-wow, it worked, here's what I've got so far.

https://www.dropbox.com/photos/dbzero/

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Innagadadavida » Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:52 am

Is that supposed to be Tulluce? Why does he look like Goku?

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by desirecampbell » Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:58 pm

Innagadadavida wrote:Is that supposed to be Tulluce? Why does he look like Goku?
Um, because he supposed to look like Goku?

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Innagadadavida » Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:06 pm

desirecampbell wrote:
Innagadadavida wrote:Is that supposed to be Tulluce? Why does he look like Goku?
Um, because he supposed to look like Goku?
Sorry, those were unrelated questions. The second should have been "If not, then why does he look like Goku?" So it is Tulluce then.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by DNA » Sat May 08, 2010 3:12 pm

So... what's happening to this then?

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by Z-Dragon » Sat May 08, 2010 6:08 pm

Thales? This weird name's like Whales lol.

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Re: Toyble's DB Zero

Post by M4rb » Sat May 08, 2010 8:47 pm

I put up English scanlations for DBZERO on my website.

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