Kanzenshuu

Boy has a lot happned with the production of the DBAF I've been in...but things are appearing to be improving..

http://sephiandtoma.blip.tv/file/5141696/

Without the specific goal of "facing the Androids", Goku didn't train as intensely as he did in the series.
Sorry this is so late, I didn't realize you'd replied and I've not been here in ages. Sense then I've seen wut u did ther about Piccolo a long time ago (found out about the behind the ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POQOo47A14U

Re-uploaded the main cast video I mentioned before..with improved voices.
It's actually "Toyble", not "Toyable". Just thought you might want to get the original creator's name right.
lol whoops. Thanks. Meh, too late to change it right now but I'll ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POQOo47A14U

Re-uploaded the main cast video I mentioned before..with improved voices.

I guess I'm just surprised by how much it's NOT bothering me that Goku is returning as the main protagonist. This just feels like such a natural continuation of GT but it's better and is returning to some of what was good about the first two series'.
I love Uub (his fight with Bebi was one of my ...

Goku singlehandedly kills Freeza and King Kold, just as he did in Trunks' timeline.

With Vegeta dead, the Earth setup mostly returns to how it was before Raditz landed. Piccolo has changed enough from absorbing Nail that he doesn't want to conquer the Earth, but Goku is still his rival and the ...

Personally...I think without the other Saiyans, earth would be fucked. The humans have no possible way to compare to a Saiyan's level, its been shown signs of that as early as Dragonball itself..look at the difference between Goku and everyone else...and that gap only got larger. Androids can take ...

There are many human fans out there, so here's a scenario for everybody:
What if Vegeta died after Freeza killed him, but never came back? Add one more thing: Gohan was never born, but for the sake of argument, pretend that for some reason, everything in the Namek saga (as well as before it) still ...

its obviously full of Fanwank
that was the point. Give fanservice fights. And the plot hasn't really started yet so yeah...Art alone is FAR superior.

few examples of characters that sound straight out of a fanfiction in a bad way
I can only think of two. Broly and Mary Sue. the latter is ...

Rocketman wrote:There's also that, y'know...we're already seen evil Goku.

If you mean Turles, that hardly counts man -.-

EDIT: whoops..sorry for the double post..if someone wants to merge this one into the other one or vice versa..feel free to do so mods.

I still feel the same way about this as the first time I saw it.

The art is great, it's far above average, it dips in a few places, but the coloured pages are gorgeous.

But the story to me just reeks of a bad fanfic, I really can't put it any other way, it doesn't feel like a story to me, it just ...

I just read Dragonball Multiverse (all of it so far) and yeah..wow. DBAF is way leagues above it..don't get me wrong, it has some cool fights and is interesting..but its obviously full of Fanwank and has a few examples of characters that sound straight out of a fanfiction in a bad way....DBAF>DB ...

To be quite honest, I didn't think that the whole Xicor plot and Broli coming back and all that stuff would ever work, but guess what, it is working. So maybe he'll find away to make sense of it.
To the extent of my knowledge of AF fanfic, which isn't much, those are the main plot-points, unless ...

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While I agree with you..didn't this site make a topic on its main page about this..?

@SephiVA
Piccolo Jr. the SON of Piccolo Daimao actually never did anything bad as far as the story tells besides destroying some mountains, the moon and the island, where the 23rd Tenkaichi Budokai was held.
Good things done by Piccolo Jr. before dying: Killing Raditz, who threatened the people of ...

best of luck on your end guys (if the project hasn't died..its hard to tell) We're currently working on one ourselves. (We're still looking for an Uub but we just now finally got our West Supreme Kai and our replacement Xicor sense we had to fire the person who was going to be him at first. Though ...

Thanks for reminding me why AF is so much better than Multiverse! The font's different to all the other pages, but that doesn't really matter.

It does to me! D:

No offence but, desirecampbell does a cleaner job.
No offense taken. Hence saying that I don't mind if someone uses it or not for ...

My question is that, when Vegeta dies, would be be-able to keep his body and train with Goku in the other world? Would Vegeta get to keep his life and train with Goku later on when Vegeta dies of old age? But would Vegeta be able to keep his physical body in the other world after aging to death ...

Wow, thanks a bunch Necrosaber! I went through those pages pretty quick, so I'll probably revise this later.

Edit : Rats, missed a page. Fixed now.
Edit edit : OK, translations fully revised now.

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Writing on bottom: 3 Lyra’s Miscalculation (complete)
Based on the translations you ...

Holy crap! That's crazy! That DOES explain why in the preview of Goku going SS5 that we saw Broly..wow. This is going to be awesome! I've always been a huge Broly fan! (The only part I don't like is Pan and Bra being able to go Super Saiyan but I'll look past that because it works for the plot)

I ...