Dragonball Timestream (Group Writing Project)

[FoolsGil]

Now with Timeline 10 plotted out, I want to bring out my thoughts on the further techniques and abilities of T10.

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Tenshinhan's soul eventually becomes pure enough to learn Kaioken and Spirit Bomb during training with King Kai. He realizes the path of Enlightenment during the battle against Freeza. It's not quite perfect, but he combines it with Kaioken to create Nirvana. The perfecting of Enlightenment allows Tenshinhan to become a God.

Master Roshi's soul is not pure, so initially he is unable to use the Kaioken or Spirit Bomb. However, he like King Kai he knows how the techniques works: Ki Beat (since Kaioken is supposed to increase your abilities for a heart beat's time) and Ki Siphon (Spirit Bomb takes energy from surrounding forces) Master Roshi combines Ki Beat with the Kamehameha Wave to create Kaio Wave (Think GT's 10x Kamehameha Wave) After training with Tenshinhan, Master Roshi's access to Godhood purifies him-he can finally use Kaioken and Spirit Bomb

Yamcha's soul isn't pure either. Master Roshi teaches Yamcha his Thunder Suprise Attack. With continued training, Yamcha creates the Lightning Fist. Attacks are electrically charged, and using AfterImage creates Electric Clones. He claims he came up with the Kienzan in a dream. After Master Roshi's ascension, he tries to teach Yamcha. He just learned the basics of Enlightenment before the tournament.

Chaozu's soul is pure enough, but his physical limits prevent him from being able to use Kaioken, Spirit Bomb, Ki Siphon or Ki Beat. Training under Master Roshi, he learns to increases his TK abilites, read the mind of opponents (Foresight) Attack and disrupts an opponents Ki (Disabling Strike) Cause Illusions in opponents who can't control chi, and finally, learning Instantaneous Movement by the end of the Buu Saga.

Chi Chi's soul is pure enough, and can use Spirit Bomb and Kaioken, and uses the knowledge of Ki Siphon to absorb energy into her body, augmenting all of her abilities, and finally also uses the Kaio Wave

[jcogginsa]

Now with Timeline 10 plotted out, I want to bring out my thoughts on the further techniques and abilities of T10.

Spoiler:

Tenshinhan's soul eventually becomes pure enough to learn Kaioken and Spirit Bomb during training with King Kai. He realizes the path of Enlightenment during the battle against Freeza. It's not quite perfect, but he combines it with Kaioken to create Nirvana. The perfecting of Enlightenment allows Tenshinhan to become a God.

Master Roshi's soul is not pure, so initially he is unable to use the Kaioken or Spirit Bomb. However, he like King Kai he knows how the techniques works: Ki Beat (since Kaioken is supposed to increase your abilities for a heart beat's time) and Ki Siphon (Spirit Bomb takes energy from surrounding forces) Master Roshi combines Ki Beat with the Kamehameha Wave to create Kaio Wave (Think GT's 10x Kamehameha Wave) After training with Tenshinhan, Master Roshi's access to Godhood purifies him-he can finally use Kaioken and Spirit Bomb

Yamcha's soul isn't pure either. Master Roshi teaches Yamcha his Thunder Suprise Attack. With continued training, Yamcha creates the Lightning Fist. Attacks are electrically charged, and using AfterImage creates Electric Clones. He claims he came up with the Kienzan in a dream. After Master Roshi's ascension, he tries to teach Yamcha. He just learned the basics of Enlightenment before the tournament.

Chaozu's soul is pure enough, but his physical limits prevent him from being able to use Kaioken, Spirit Bomb, Ki Siphon or Ki Beat. Training under Master Roshi, he learns to increases his TK abilites, read the mind of opponents (Foresight) Attack and disrupts an opponents Ki (Disabling Strike) Cause Illusions in opponents who can't control chi, and finally, learning Instantaneous Movement by the end of the Buu Saga.

Chi Chi's soul is pure enough, and can use Spirit Bomb and Kaioken, and uses the knowledge of Ki Siphon to absorb energy into her body, augmenting all of her abilities, and finally also uses the Kaio Wave

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Actually I was thinking Yamcha would be unable to achieve the Enlightenment power due to being too worldly, thus forcing him to add a lot of tricks to his arsenal. Creative use of abilities like Shapeshifting and magic materialization, specialized weapons, and a few extremely lethal techniques (The reason he winds up losing to Gohan is that he's not willing to escalate into lethal force for a tournament). Yamcha, despite being very strong in this universe, does his best against foes who're stronger than he is conventionally.

As for Chaozu, I was actually thinking his training would be mostly solo efforts, developing his unique powers whilst also becoming more of an individual due to being separate from Tien.

As for Chichi, I was thinking she'd be the next in line behind Tien and Roshi to achieve godhood, though she hasn't actually reached that point by the time of the tournement (And she uses a different method)

[FoolsGil]

Spoiler:

Actually I was thinking Yamcha would be unable to achieve the Enlightenment power due to being too worldly, thus forcing him to add a lot of tricks to his arsenal. Creative use of abilities like Shapeshifting and magic materialization, specialized weapons, and a few extremely lethal techniques (The reason he winds up losing to Gohan is that he's not willing to escalate into lethal force for a tournament). Yamcha, despite being very strong in this universe, does his best against foes who're stronger than he is conventionally.

As for Chaozu, I was actually thinking his training would be mostly solo efforts, developing his unique powers whilst also becoming more of an individual due to being separate from Tenshinhan.

As for Chichi, I was thinking she'd be the next in line behind Tenshinhan and Roshi to achieve godhood, though she hasn't actually reached that point by the time of the tournement (And she uses a different method)

Alright. Sounds good to me.

[jcogginsa]

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Do you have any ideas for Yajirobe?

[FoolsGil]

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Do you have any ideas for Yajirobe?

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Yajirobe meets Goku the same way as in canon. When Piccolo Daimao beats Goku down. Goku tells Yajirobe to take him to Karin's Tower. Goku dies from his wounds before Yajirobe reaches the top. When Karin ascends to Kami, he makes Yajirobe the guardian of the Tower with all the same skills and abilities he had. Karin's Tower becomes Yajirobe's Tower. Other than Senzu beans, and teaching proper sword style to Yamcha and Chi Chi, there's not much I would consider him for.

[jcogginsa]

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One Idea I had for Yajirobe was that he'd develope a way to coat his sword in Ki that is sharpened like the Kienzan, Allowing him to cut through stronger foes

[FoolsGil]

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One Idea I had for Yajirobe was that he'd develope a way to coat his sword in Ki that is sharpened like the Kienzan, Allowing him to cut through stronger foes

He could teach it, but Yajirobe doesn't like risking his neck protecting Earth.

[jcogginsa]

He doesn't like it, but he doesn't always get what he wants XD

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On a different note, would anyone mind if I made Uub a bit younger than normal, so that he's closer to Pan's age?

[jcogginsa]

Scene 11

-The Timeline 16 characters arrive, and headbands are Given to Uub, Pan, Vegeta, and Nova. Pan looks around enthuesiastically, and spots Tullece of Universe 13. She asks if that's her grandpa, but Vegeta states that it's actually an old enemy of Goku named Tullece. Uub point out that he staring and three other people, the other fighters from his universe. And one of them is Rildo. Vegeta scoffs and says by this point all four of them can handle Rildo

"There you go," Whis said, after giving out headbands bearing the number 16 to the latest group.

"Wowwee!" One of the combatants marveled as she scanned the crowd. She was a young girl, around twelve. She wore a loose fitting red Kame Gi, and had an orange neckerchief around her neck. She was the daughter on Son Gohan, Son Pan.

"Be careful Pan," warned the boy next to her, who was around fourteen dressed in a teal Kame Gi. Aside from it's color, his gi differed from hers in two other respects. One was that his had a belt, whereas hers did not. The other was that his gi bore the Kanji of his sensei, Son Goku. Meanwhile, her gi bore the Kanji of the planet Earth. He was Uub, the reincarnation of Buu. "There are a lotta of strong Auras here, and they aren't all good guys. One of them might try something sneaky."

"Don't worry yourself," said the third of their combatants, the former Saiyan prince Vegeta. This Vegeta wore human clothing, in this case a pair of blue jeans, rawhide boots, a black tank top, a denim halfjacket, and fingerless gloves. This Vegeta also bore a mustache. "You and Pan are both strong warriors. You can take care of yourself," Vegeta finished.

The final combatant in their group was a draconian man with purple skin, covered nearly head to toe in natural golden armor. Behind him floated 6 Dragonballs, the seventh embedded in his body

"Hey, look at that guy!" Pan called out, pointing at a man in black Saiyan armor. "He looks just like Grandpa did before he got old and wrinkly!"

It was true, he bore a remarkable resemblance to the Saiyan Son Goku. However, there noticeable differences. This man's muscles were far bulkier than Goku's, and his skin was pale, almost ashen grey.

"That's one of our old enemies," Gohan said, "His name is Tullece. He's a Saiyan pirate who sucks planet's dry with a special tree known as the tree of might."

"I don't think he noticed us," Uub said to Pan, "but he does keep look in different directions every few seconds."

"Huh, you're right," Pan said. She craned her neck to try and see where Tullece was looking. She saw a tall man with teal skin and orange hair.

"That's Bojack," Vegeta replied, "A warrior from the distant past who went on a rampage years ago. He was slain by your father, Pan."

"Really? That's so cool daddy!" Pan said happily.

"Aw, it was nothing," Gohan said, rubbing the back of his head.

"So, who's that?" Uub said, pointing to another figure that Tullece was watching. He was a tall Namekian with a broad, powerful chin.

"That's Lord Slug," Gohan informed them, "Years ago he tried to freeze the planet Earth solid, so his men could live on it. Never did find out why a Namekian liked the cold so much."

"He was looking in three places, meaning there's one more..." Uub figured, as both he an Pan scanned the crowd. They found him at the same time, and he was a figure that they both recognized.

General Rildo, commander of the machine mutants.

Uub gulped.

"Have you forgotten what I told you earlier?" Vegeta said, "You're both powerful. Any one of us could go up against him and defeat him without any problems."

"Yeah, you're right!" Pan said with a laugh, "That doofus is no match for us!"

[FoolsGil]

He doesn't like it, but he doesn't always get what he wants XD

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I don't see why he's essential. There's already 5 members of T10 before Raditz shows up, 3 of which go to Namek. Then with the Namekians staying on Earth, Nail would be the 6th fighter. Launch and Android 19 are to be reformed, so the list goes up to 8. When Hildergarn is reformed, there will be 9 fighters defending the Earth.

On a different note, would anyone mind if I made Uub a bit younger than normal, so that he's closer to Pan's age?

Sounds fine.

[jcogginsa]

Fair enough.

Opinions on Scene 11?

[FoolsGil]

Scene 11 works. It looks good. I'll grab scene 8.

[jcogginsa]

Cool. Then I'll handle scene 9

[jcogginsa]

So, while I wait until I have time to write the scene, I thought I'd kick around a few ideas for character redesigns. Note that none of these are final, they are just concepts

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Time line 1
Everything here is mostly the same, however I was thinking in the second round Gohan could switch out of his Saiyaman outfit into a new outfit , Something incorporating a lab coat to signify the union of his scholarly mind and his martial arts

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Timeline 3

I was thinking Cell might have a few cosmetic differences to his design, things like organic shoulder pads. These are modifications he made to his body whilst experimenting with his abilities, but they don't make him stronger

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Timeline 4

Aside from Bardock looking older, there are two things i'd like to say here.

First, Celipa has an artificial eye and is missing an arm. Both of these are wounds from battles long ago

Second is Cooler. For him, I was thinking of redesigning his base form, though I can think of two ways to go about it. One is to change his skin from purple to blue. The other is to have him be majority white like Frieza is. Regardless of which form is his base form, his Golden form will resemble is normal design, with the white parts in Gold (Actual, Shining gold here) with a head similar to his canon fifth form.

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Timeline 6
Other than the new outfits, three of them have new forms. To use 17 as an example, his Superform has similar proportions to his GT Super 17 form, with the Blue skin of Super 13 and a new hair color.

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Timeline 9
All of them wear outfits with Kami's Symbol, for one.

Garlic has a new base form. It's essentially his old base form with the proportions of an adult. His powered up from is more or less the same

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Timeline 10

Master Roshi is now wearing a black and white version of the Kame Gi. Yamcha still wears the normal Kame Gi with a few modifications, such as a sword on his back, a belt with capsules, and sandals. Yamcha and Roshi both have loose fitting gi, to accommodate moves which change their size. Chaozu now wears an outfit that resembles Dracula's standard get up. Tien looks mostly the same with the exception of the blind eye

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Timeline 12
To start with, the three bio warriors resemble their human halves with the colors of their artifical half. Wheelo's avatar resembles a smaller version of his robo body

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Timeline 16
I think Super Saiyan 4 should get a slight redesign, so that the Fur of the form matches the forms unique hair color. So Vegeta would have auburn color fur, whilst Pan's fur would be the same as whatever hair color we give her.

Uub's Majin form would here involve actually transforming into a majin

And Nuova gets a super form, here called Super Nuova Shenron

[FoolsGil]

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Timeline 1-lol. Weird, but okay.

Timeline 4-In RoF Freeza's newest form color was to mock Goku, and could have chosen any color. How about Silver for Cooler-Gold vs Silver?

Timeline 10-You brought up Capsules earlier: Exactly what is Yamcha packing? What abilities are planned.

Everything else sounds fine.

[jcogginsa]

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Timeline 1-lol. Weird, but okay.

Timeline 4-In RoF Freeza's newest form color was to mock Goku, and could have chosen any color. How about Silver for Cooler-Gold vs Silver?

Timeline 10-You brought up Capsules earlier: Exactly what is Yamcha packing? What abilities are planned.

Everything else sounds fine.

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The reason i was thinking Cooler would go for gold is for the status. However Silver is fine

What I have planned for the capsules is this: A pair of Machine guns that fire special bullets designed to be empowered by Yamcha's ki, A baseball bat made of Katchin, A deck of playing cards enchanted to serve as Ki portals (IE if yamcha fired a kamehameha at one, the blast would come out of another), and finally a Grenade Launcher that fires bombs pre-made with Yamcha's Ki

[FoolsGil]

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Can't quite see how machine gun bullets are going to trump firing the same amount of shots out of your hands at a faster speed. Now Katchin Bullets, those sound painful. As unorthodox as it is, these weapons don't sound too bad.

[jcogginsa]

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Can't quite see how machine gun bullets are going to trump firing the same amount of shots out of your hands at a faster speed. Now Katchin Bullets, those sound painful. As unorthodox as it is, these weapons don't sound too bad.

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The opponent won't be expecting Bullets to hurt them, meaning the element of surprise is there. Only their once though.

[ShadowBardock89]

Spoiler:

Since we're talking appearances for the fighters from the different timeline,Timeline 11's fighters are all wearing an updated version of Time Breaker attires. Take a look at the Time Breaker uniforms from DBO and tweak it abit Also, each one of them has given their own personal aesthetic to it.
I'm inspired by the concept shown in RoF's Freeza soldier uniform (like what Togoma wore) compared the uniforms we see in the Saiyan-Freeza Saga of Z.

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The reason i was thinking Cooler would go for gold is for the status. However Silver is fine

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I call an audible and say Cooler's form should be Platinum, which is more valued than Gold

[jcogginsa]

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Is platinum a color or just a material?