DBS Episode Edit

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DBS Episode Edit

Post by MrDawn » Sat Dec 03, 2016 5:27 pm

Greetings, this is my first post here at Kanzenshuu. I see many people unsatisfied with the current series’ art style, so I did some visual edits over DBS Episode 63 in order to get it to look more like DBZ, you know, back when it was done traditionally (with celluloids). It is basically just the episode with some effects like saturation adjust and color contrast, but I think it looks pretty decent. I'm still trying to find a way to remove the soundtrack and leave the speech intact (I'm not even sure if that's possible) so I can change the music to the original score.

Here's some pictures:

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And here's the download link:

https://www.4shared.com/rar/9f8cuZNace/ ... Style.html

Let me know what think of it! Sorry for any rendering mistakes if you happen to spot any.

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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by Danfun64 » Sun Dec 04, 2016 9:03 pm

No offense, but I don't like it at all. The colors are pale, and the blacks are crushed (pun not intended. This might be a helpful read).
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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by Jinzoningen MULE » Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:57 pm

You did not make them look like DBZ. What you did was crank up the saturation way too far, then used blur to keep it from looking to ridiculous. It isn't good, it looks like the Orange Bricks on steroids.
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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by MrDawn » Mon Dec 05, 2016 4:56 pm

Danfun64 wrote:No offense, but I don't like it at all. The colors are pale, and the blacks are crushed (pun not intended. This might be a helpful read).
Thank you for the feedback and the helpful advice, I shall use it for futher development.

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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by Yomi » Mon Dec 12, 2016 10:50 pm

Feels like you're losing too much visual information when the contrast is that high.
You're better off going over all of the lines with a chauky pen instead.
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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by Ki Breaker » Tue Dec 13, 2016 2:58 am

I would point out it's not good myself but that has been done a lot before..
So I will say nice try! It's great you are trying to make super look like DBZ style, it might please many!
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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by Geekdom101 » Wed Dec 14, 2016 10:58 pm

Jinzoningen MULE wrote:You did not make them look like DBZ. What you did was crank up the saturation way too far, then used blur to keep it from looking to ridiculous. It isn't good, it looks like the Orange Bricks on steroids.
IT DOES remind me of the Bricks a little!
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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by YonedgeHP » Wed Dec 14, 2016 11:39 pm

Geekdom101 wrote:
Jinzoningen MULE wrote:You did not make them look like DBZ. What you did was crank up the saturation way too far, then used blur to keep it from looking to ridiculous. It isn't good, it looks like the Orange Bricks on steroids.
IT DOES remind me of the Bricks a little!
More like a lot! xD.
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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by simtek34 » Wed Dec 14, 2016 11:53 pm

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Re: DBS Episode Edit

Post by Moffett1990 » Thu Dec 22, 2016 10:28 am

Another thing to note, if your goal was to get it to look more like the original anime taking the light shade out would have helped a bit... As well as changing future trunks hair back to purple :P

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