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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:23 pm

Koitsukai wrote: Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:19 pm She blew up a solar system and is getting a second chance?

It's like those horror movies when the blonde girl knocks the killer unconscious and instead of finishing him off with the machete/gun/rock/whatever, she just tries to escape only for the killer to recover and attack her once more minutes later.

Funnily enough, I'm betting Salagir has watched dozens of those kind of movies and laughed at the stupidity of the characters and the writers
Third chance actually (almost blew up the Earth intentionally. after becoming a Super Saiyan) but hey, she's his daughter...and he wants a good fight. Because saiyan...

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by jjgp1112 » Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:29 pm

Koitsukai wrote: Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:19 pm She blew up a solar system and is getting a second chance?

It's like those horror movies when the blonde girl knocks the killer unconscious and instead of finishing him off with the machete/gun/rock/whatever, she just tries to escape only for the killer to recover and attack her once more minutes later.

Funnily enough, I'm betting Salagir has watched dozens of those kind of movies and laughed at the stupidity of the characters and the writers
Well, it's his daughter. I'm sure he'd rather avoid doing right then instead of giving her another chance.

Now I'm starting to think the Vegetto heel turn that Bardock foresaw is connected to her. Who knows what makes him fly off the rails to "I'll kill everyone here if necessary!" Maybe they don't believe him? I dunno.

(Fuck, it's been NINE YEARS since that reveal and we're still not even CLOSE to that being resolved. This story was still taking frequent breaks back then but it was moving MUCH faster than it is now, and that was with less frequent releases!)
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Koitsukai » Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:51 pm

I don't think the daughter card is valid here. She just killed Goten, there is intrafamily violence at its worst going on, along with a whole solar system, and a supernova is underway (they can escape of course).

If he is already thinking of killing her then he is seeing past the blood link. But he is acting like she just broke a glass. :crazy: :crazy:

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Wed Oct 14, 2020 3:40 pm

Koitsukai wrote: Wed Oct 14, 2020 2:51 pm I don't think the daughter card is valid here. She just killed Goten, there is intrafamily violence at its worst going on, along with a whole solar system, and a supernova is underway (they can escape of course).

If he is already thinking of killing her then he is seeing past the blood link. But he is acting like she just broke a glass. :crazy: :crazy:
Well, also, they have 2 sets of Dragonballs. So, one more chance. Kinda why I wanted her to bring up that everything can be fixed, to show how detached she is to everyone. But reasons why not just to kill his daughter then and there? 1) Daughter. and not Goku's daughter or Vegeta's daughter, Vegetto's daughter. 2) Dragonballs 3) A really good fight later.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Thu Oct 15, 2020 1:12 pm

So Bra hears she killed Goten, doesn’t bat an eye, and just gets excited she’s stronger than Gohan. Yes they have Dragon Balls but it’s turned her apathetic to life in general.

Also if I remember correctly, she continually made fun of Goten in the tournament for being weak, that’s just twisting the knife. Your sister kills you, doesn’t care, and then you have to play nice while she mocks you.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Thu Oct 15, 2020 2:29 pm

Just leads to show how ill planned this storyline is. When DBM first started, initially the only changes U16 had from U18 was Vegetto and anything that Vegetto affected. That meant Bra being a fighter, and Pan as a SSJ, most likely inspired by Bra to train harder. But all these special chapters, this one especially show that far more should be changed. Most everyone from U16 should be exasperated of Vegetto, and fearful of Bra. For whatever reason chosen that U18 Goten and Trunks are goofs, U16 Goten should especially hold a level of resentment to Bra, and imho be stronger than his U18 counterpart, knowing personally that Bra is a threat and that if Vegetto was to fall, Gotenks is the only one who has any remote chance against her. Everyone should be wary of what Bra truly is, and because of this, Bra should at least different in that regard. Bra should be if anything, extra nice, extra cordial, trying to not scare her family, and be afraid that if she messes up, she could be killed the moment they get home.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by miguelnuva1 » Thu Oct 15, 2020 3:43 pm

FoolsGil wrote: Thu Oct 15, 2020 2:29 pm Just leads to show how ill planned this storyline is. When DBM first started, initially the only changes U16 had from U18 was Vegetto and anything that Vegetto affected. That meant Bra being a fighter, and Pan as a SSJ, most likely inspired by Bra to train harder. But all these special chapters, this one especially show that far more should be changed. Most everyone from U16 should be exasperated of Vegetto, and fearful of Bra. For whatever reason chosen that U18 Goten and Trunks are goofs, U16 Goten should especially hold a level of resentment to Bra, and imho be stronger than his U18 counterpart, knowing personally that Bra is a threat and that if Vegetto was to fall, Gotenks is the only one who has any remote chance against her. Everyone should be wary of what Bra truly is, and because of this, Bra should at least different in that regard. Bra should be if anything, extra nice, extra cordial, trying to not scare her family, and be afraid that if she messes up, she could be killed the moment they get home.
No one ind Dragon ball acts like that except Tien. Goku, Kuririn and Gohan had forgave Vegeta for the most part by the Cell saga and Piccolo was indifferent.

Goten being nicer than them will forgive Bra as I'm sure we'll get an I'm sorry from Bra.

Goten is the type of charcter that would do the old I'm sorry I hurt you by dying and just make sure to control your power better.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Slangh » Fri Oct 16, 2020 2:22 pm

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Well this kind of 'parenting' won't be good for Bra... She still doesn't know what she's done, considering Vegetto treats it as something trivial like cleaning up her room, so she's just starting to throw another tantrum. Can you really leave such a 'monster' on her own? Of course not. Vegetto only cares about Bra as far as his own expectations go. He never had the patience to deal with Bra himself, leaving Gohan to teach her to control her power instead. Such a useless parent Vegetto is in this story. It's so obvious why Bra is so ffed up, considering how terrible Vegetto is, so the real question is why HE is this way. Explain that, Salagir.
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Post by miguelnuva1 » Fri Oct 16, 2020 2:49 pm

He has a good storyline with Bra but he wastes it here.

Majin Bra should have either been her trying to get strong enough to protect herself from Vegetto or when she does attack have Gohan break through to her and then Vegetto shows up in no mercy mode.

That would explain why he attacks Gohan. Actually I'm still expecting that to be the reason he attacks Gohan.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Dbzfan94 » Fri Oct 16, 2020 3:04 pm

She deserves this, but Vegetto absolutely is making the situation worse. It’s no wonder she’s so unhinged

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by FoolsGil » Fri Oct 16, 2020 4:10 pm

I guess this is the part where we're supposed to feel bad for Bra? Where if she doesn't figure out how to escape, the supernova will kill her? I uh don't feel bad. I actually feel worst for everyone in U16 who isn't Vegetto and Bra. Goten is literally going to stay dead for a period of time because of this.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Fri Oct 16, 2020 5:00 pm

This is not in-character for either of his fusees, what even is going on here.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Jackalope89 » Fri Oct 16, 2020 7:21 pm

RandomGuy96 wrote: Fri Oct 16, 2020 5:00 pm This is not in-character for either of his fusees, what even is going on here.
Character favoritism causing other established characters to act in ways that don't match pre-established behaviors.
In other words, making Vegito bad to wank, er, "feel bad" for Bra. It pops up sometimes in other fanfics, and a major annoyance in them.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Koitsukai » Fri Oct 16, 2020 8:11 pm

Say what you like about the SW prequels, at least they never had Ben or Yoda treat Anakin like a piece of shit and threaten to kill him to justify his evil ways.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by The Bastard. » Fri Oct 16, 2020 9:42 pm

Koitsukai wrote: Fri Oct 16, 2020 8:11 pm Say what you like about the SW prequels, at least they never had Ben or Yoda treat Anakin like a piece of shit and threaten to kill him to justify his evil ways.
This would be hilarious.

But yeah, trash special.

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Post by miguelnuva1 » Sat Oct 17, 2020 12:03 am

Koitsukai wrote: Fri Oct 16, 2020 8:11 pm Say what you like about the SW prequels, at least they never had Ben or Yoda treat Anakin like a piece of shit and threaten to kill him to justify his evil ways.
Anakin was not Evil until after Yoda and Obi-Wan were sent away from him.

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Post by Fionordequester » Sat Oct 17, 2020 3:21 am

Would this be the equivalent of a time-out? It's not as though he could lock her in her room or anything, after all.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by miguelnuva1 » Sat Oct 17, 2020 3:02 pm

Fionordequester wrote: Sat Oct 17, 2020 3:21 am Would this be the equivalent of a time-out? It's not as though he could lock her in her room or anything, after all.
Time out would be the Mafuba.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by JewyB » Sat Oct 17, 2020 3:05 pm

miguelnuva1 wrote: Sat Oct 17, 2020 3:02 pm
Fionordequester wrote: Sat Oct 17, 2020 3:21 am Would this be the equivalent of a time-out? It's not as though he could lock her in her room or anything, after all.
Time out would be the Mafuba.
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