Fanmanga - Dragonball Raido

[FoolsGil]

http://www.dragonballraido.com

New comic, in french, spanish, and english.

1 - 1: http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-1-1-en/
1 - 2: http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-1-2-en/
1 - 3: http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-1-3-en/
1 - 4: http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-1-4-en/

Spoilers

Spoiler:

Takes place in the Mirai Universe, Goku is hours away from dying to the Virus. Mr. Popo has a plan to save Goku, it involves making a trek to the other side of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, to another world, with Gods who have the medicine to do what the dragonballs cannot. Sadly, and understandably, Goku's friends are too afraid to make the trip. But Gohan, and Pre Kami Fusion Piccolo, will go. Because of the Time Dilation they have 15 days to find this other world, and return with the medicine.

[SaiyanKingMike]

Very interesting read cannot wait for more to come out.

[Underscore_Johny]

Oh wow, the art is quite decent. Still needs a bit of work though but overall it's looking good!

[Skar]

That sounds interesting! I look forward to seeing more. Does he have a release schedule?

[FoolsGil]

That sounds interesting! I look forward to seeing more. Does he have a release schedule?

Not from where I can see. It seems he updates at the beginning of every month though.

[Trouser]

Very nice! Finally something focused more on an adventure (I hope). I really like drawings, I was referencing original manga too when I decided to make my on fancomic (it died due to no interest). It doesn't bother me that autor is redrawing drawings if it helps him with his skill. Everyone needs to start somewhere, right?

I hope to see more soon!

[goku1234]

wow this is amazing can't wait to see chapter 2!!

[Supermist]

Wow I'm impressed with this one so far

[FoolsGil]

English of Chapter 2 - 1
http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-2-1-en/

[FoolsGil]

Chapter 2-1 has been updated since I last mentioned it.

Chapter 2-2: http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-2-2-en/

[TobyS]

Urgh it has good art and is black and white yet read left to right is frustrating, my brain starts the wrong side....

Yamcha already was willing to die for Goku against King Piccolo or the RRA.

He would go.
Vegeta would go "so he can beat Goku himself later" or something.
Ten would go if it was that dangerous it'd be a chance to test his skills and die a warriors death, he said as much when they learn about the androids.
Chaozu would go with Ten unless Ten said it was too dangerous.
And then Kuririn would go too out of guilt and peer pressure.

[FoolsGil]

Yeah that is really my only issue with the series, Gohan is what, 6 by this point? All you experienced fighters are not even going to try and make sure the son of your good friend isn't going to die out there? Not a good look.

[Kakkaroto735]

Urgh it has good art and is black and white yet read left to right is frustrating, my brain starts the wrong side....

Yamcha already was willing to die for Goku against King Piccolo or the RRA.

He would go.
Vegeta would go "so he can beat Goku himself later" or something.
Ten would go if it was that dangerous it'd be a chance to test his skills and die a warriors death, he said as much when they learn about the androids.
Chaozu would go with Ten unless Ten said it was too dangerous.
And then Kuririn would go too out of guilt and peer pressure.

Kuririn is scared but not to that extent. Kuririn would probably go because he's fond of Gohan. He spent quite a bit of time with him. Also, Goku brought him back to life in the Piccolo arc so he also feels a debt to him. He would definitely be hesitant but peer pressure would just be the last straw, not the main reason he goes.

[TobyS]

Urgh it has good art and is black and white yet read left to right is frustrating, my brain starts the wrong side....

Yamcha already was willing to die for Goku against King Piccolo or the RRA.

He would go.
Vegeta would go "so he can beat Goku himself later" or something.
Ten would go if it was that dangerous it'd be a chance to test his skills and die a warriors death, he said as much when they learn about the androids.
Chaozu would go with Ten unless Ten said it was too dangerous.
And then Kuririn would go too out of guilt and peer pressure.

Kuririn is scared but not to that extent. Kuririn would probably go because he's fond of Gohan. He spent quite a bit of time with him. Also, Goku brought him back to life in the Piccolo arc so he also feels a debt to him. He would definitely be hesitant but peer pressure would just be the last straw, not the main reason he goes.

Oh I like to think he'd go out of bravery too but I'm just saying he'd definitely end up going either way is all.
It drives me crazy that the humans and satan/buu didn't go to the tournament in multiverse even as spectators.
They'd be too OP during the babidi rampage especially with Mr Buu there and his healing abilities probably.
People need to be creative in writing out characters they don't want to use.

[Kakkaroto735]

Urgh it has good art and is black and white yet read left to right is frustrating, my brain starts the wrong side....

Yamcha already was willing to die for Goku against King Piccolo or the RRA.

He would go.
Vegeta would go "so he can beat Goku himself later" or something.
Ten would go if it was that dangerous it'd be a chance to test his skills and die a warriors death, he said as much when they learn about the androids.
Chaozu would go with Ten unless Ten said it was too dangerous.
And then Kuririn would go too out of guilt and peer pressure.

Kuririn is scared but not to that extent. Kuririn would probably go because he's fond of Gohan. He spent quite a bit of time with him. Also, Goku brought him back to life in the Piccolo arc so he also feels a debt to him. He would definitely be hesitant but peer pressure would just be the last straw, not the main reason he goes.

Oh I like to think he'd go out of bravery too but I'm just saying he'd definitely end up going either way is all.
It drives me crazy that the humans and satan/buu didn't go to the tournament in multiverse even as spectators.
They'd be too OP during the babidi rampage especially with Mr Buu there and his healing abilities probably.
People need to be creative in writing out characters they don't want to use.

True

[goku1234]

amazing stories can't wait for more of chapter 2 and also what year does story take place at? It is between the android saga and cell saga??

[FoolsGil]

amazing stories can't wait for more of chapter 2 and also what year does story take place at? It is between the android saga and cell saga??

Original Timeline, a few years before the Androids attack.

[goku1234]

amazing stories can't wait for more of chapter 2 and also what year does story take place at? It is between the android saga and cell saga??

Original Timeline, a few years before the Androids attack.

oh cool thanks for the info....

[FoolsGil]

Chapter 2 - 3: http://www.dragonballraido.com/comic/chapter-2-3-en/

[RobinTheMighty]

Enjoying this so far, the art is nice. Refreshing to see adventuring, also a pretty original idea.