New Dragonball AF comic?!

Captain Awesome · Post by **Captain Awesome** » Fri Dec 19, 2008 5:24 pm

I would love to see a translation of it, because I'll be honest, I hate the story in DBM, the art is fantastic, but the story feels like every bad fanfic that I have ever read.

Bussani · Post by **Bussani** » Fri Dec 19, 2008 7:14 pm

Eison wrote:There is this one: http://gogeta-jr.supafan.net/BD/144/Dra ... ext-Gen-/1
It's also made by Gogeta Jr. (who draws Dragonball Multiverse), but it's in France and it's unfinished. It also has Pan and she looks way better than how she looked in GT, she kinda looks like Gohan in the Cell sage.

Ooooh. I agree, this looks like a good comic. It's not as clean looking as DBM, but that roughness kind of makes it feel even more like the older Dragon Ball manga if you ask me.

SSJ Helldog · Post by **SSJ Helldog** » Thu Dec 25, 2008 11:46 pm

Super Ghost Kamikaze wrote:I just now started translating chapter 2. I have about 80% of it done, it's pretty fun and I like this one's portrayal of Goku.

You still working on this, SGK? The wait for Toyble's AF is killing me.

Chuquita · Post by **Chuquita** » Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:06 am

Bussani wrote:
Eison wrote:There is this one: http://gogeta-jr.supafan.net/BD/144/Dra ... ext-Gen-/1
It's also made by Gogeta Jr. (who draws Dragonball Multiverse), but it's in France and it's unfinished. It also has Pan and she looks way better than how she looked in GT, she kinda looks like Gohan in the Cell sage.
Ooooh. I agree, this looks like a good comic. It's not as clean looking as DBM, but that roughness kind of makes it feel even more like the older Dragon Ball manga if you ask me.

Wow, I like those character designs.

THAT is what I expected an older Pan to look like. Also like how Videl and Goten look in this.

Bussani · Post by **Bussani** » Fri Dec 26, 2008 8:33 pm

Chuquita wrote:THAT is what I expected an older Pan to look like. Also like how Videl and Goten look in this.

It's good, but I prefer how she looks in the DBM one for some reason.

Super Ghost Kamikaze · Post by **Super Ghost Kamikaze** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:51 am

Hey...anyone willing to help me get my translation on these pages?

Also, the art in the first chapter is being re-done. It looks MUCH nicer now!

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:17 pm

Wowza, the revised art is impressive. I'm looking forward to seeing a translation.

Super Ghost Kamikaze · Post by **Super Ghost Kamikaze** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:19 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Wowza, the revised art is impressive. I'm looking forward to seeing a translation.

I've translated all of chapter two and I'm halfway through Chapter 3. I don't have Photoshop though, so when I put text in the bubbles it looks funky.

I could post my plaintext translation notes in the thread, if you want. But that's all I have.

((I should have had it all done by now...I justify this by saying Chapter 3 wasn't done when I started and "collecge shit happened".))

Sprite Satan · Post by **Sprite Satan** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:33 pm

Super Ghost Kamikaze wrote:I've translated all of chapter two and I'm halfway through Chapter 3. I don't have Photoshop though, so when I put text in the bubbles it looks funky.

I could post my plaintext translation notes in the thread, if you want. But that's all I have.

((I should have had it all done by now...I justify this by saying Chapter 3 wasn't done when I started and "collecge shit happened".))

If y'want, I can run through this stuff in Photoshop (I am the one man who keeps Adobe afloat by buying a legal copy too.) and add the translation all pretty like.

If y'want, that is.

Wojak · Post by **Wojak** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:21 pm

The Time Traveller wrote:
Wojak wrote:It's in Spanish. I don't have the time to translate it, maybe later I can.
I recommend you typing the text into a free web translator and translating it into English.
You mean like I did a few posts above here?

I missed the second page. Obviously.

I don't get the deal about the complaints about SSJ3 Vegeta and SSJ3 Goten.
I too think that it's fairly impossible for Goten to reach that stage so quickly, but in the back on my head, I know that it's a fanmanga, and probably a dream the creator of the manga has.
Everyone is a dumb fan in some kind of way.

Super Ghost Kamikaze · Post by **Super Ghost Kamikaze** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:35 pm

Wojak wrote:
The Time Traveller wrote:
Wojak wrote:It's in Spanish. I don't have the time to translate it, maybe later I can.
I recommend you typing the text into a free web translator and translating it into English.
You mean like I did a few posts above here?
I missed the second page. Obviously.

I don't get the deal about the complaints about SSJ3 Vegeta and SSJ3 Goten.
I too think that it's fairly impossible for Goten to reach that stage so quickly, but in the back on my head, I know that it's a fanmanga, and probably a dream the creator of the manga has.
Everyone is a dumb fan in some kind of way.

What's going to make people more mad is Chapter 4: "Gohan, Defender of the Earth!

Rocketman · Post by **Rocketman** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:37 pm

Wojak wrote:Everyone is a dumb fan in some kind of way.

Especially if they like Goten.

NeptuneKai · Post by **NeptuneKai** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:41 pm

Rocketman wrote:
Wojak wrote:Everyone is a dumb fan in some kind of way.
Especially if they like Goten.

Rocketman just downloaded a 400 pack of emoticon .gifs.

Wojak · Post by **Wojak** » Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:02 pm

Super Ghost Kamikaze wrote:
Wojak wrote:
The Time Traveller wrote: You mean like I did a few posts above here?
I missed the second page. Obviously.

I don't get the deal about the complaints about SSJ3 Vegeta and SSJ3 Goten.
I too think that it's fairly impossible for Goten to reach that stage so quickly, but in the back on my head, I know that it's a fanmanga, and probably a dream the creator of the manga has.
Everyone is a dumb fan in some kind of way.
What's going to make people more mad is Chapter 4: "Gohan, Defender of the Earth!

.
He is probably going to be: Gohan, Super Mystic Saiya-jin 4!

Rocketman wrote:
Wojak wrote:Everyone is a dumb fan in some kind of way.
Especially if they like Goten.

Hmm, Goten may be a shallow character, but I see him most as a SSJ Kid Goku. In terms of art, it's cool to see.
But I don't like his character as a teen, or in DBGT.

Congrats to the new emoticons. It takes hard work and demands respect.

MajinKing · Post by **MajinKing** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:59 pm

Just to let you guys know, that site has a lot of well drawn dragonball fan mangas. They are all in spanish. Good thing I know spanish.
http://dibujaclm.foroactivo.com/continu ... 030f6f7807