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Post by Son Wukong » Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:38 pm

The Haruhi fapping was original though. But they miss something..I don't know what. I don't have the urge to follow this as I do with TFS.

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Post by JAPPO » Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:09 am

Innagadadavida wrote:Episode 5 is up and it's a three parter.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

Overall, I give it a 7/10. There were certainly lots of lols, but too many WTFs. I enjoyed it a lot though and I'm looking forward to episode 6 next year.
I enjoyed it. 2nd part is better than 1st.

Yeah there's too many gay jokes and the voices all sound the same, but it's free entertainment. I also love the "war" between abridgers; it's really funny.
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:37 am

This is some weird shit...I still like the original Abridged better. This is really weird but okay.
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Post by The Tori-bot » Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:37 am

Forgotten Hero wrote:This is some weird shit...I still like the original Abridged better. This is really weird but okay.
Technically, this is the "original" Abridged, since it first came out a year before the one we all know and love. :P
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Post by Forgotten Hero » Mon Apr 06, 2009 8:18 am

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Forgotten Hero wrote:This is some weird shit...I still like the original Abridged better. This is really weird but okay.
Technically, this is the "original" Abridged, since it first came out a year before the one we all know and love. :P
Really! After watching more Ginyu gay jokes, I'm starting to dig it.
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Post by JAPPO » Mon Apr 06, 2009 10:39 am

Forgotten Hero wrote:
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Forgotten Hero wrote:This is some weird shit...I still like the original Abridged better. This is really weird but okay.
Technically, this is the "original" Abridged, since it first came out a year before the one we all know and love. :P
Really! After watching more Ginyu gay jokes, I'm starting to dig it.
Lol I know gay jokes are the lowest form of humor, but I can't help but laugh. I'm only human.
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Post by Pain » Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:05 pm

Gay Ginyu quotes that almost made me die laughing:

1."Suckin' cock usually clears that right up for me...cause I'm GAY."

2."Everyone dances and nobody quits! And if you don't strike a gay pose, then I'll rape you, myself!"

3."You know what I want". ***makes fapping hand gestures***

4."I just...rape things. And whatever rapes me simply makes me...gayer."
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Post by KaiserNeko » Mon Apr 06, 2009 4:41 pm

Pain wrote:Gay Ginyu quotes that almost made me die laughing:

1."Suckin' cock usually clears that right up for me...cause I'm GAY."

2."Everyone dances and nobody quits! And if you don't strike a gay pose, then I'll rape you, myself!"

3."You know what I want". ***makes fapping hand gestures***

4."I just...rape things. And whatever rapes me simply makes me...gayer."
1. Didn't find funny.

2. Again, not funny, too much random rape jokes thinking that the randomness will sell it...

3. ... Ok, yeah, funny.

4. ... Weird, got a chuckle, but mostly because of the response.
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Post by MCDaveG » Mon Apr 06, 2009 5:13 pm

I don't know..... team Four Star is my blood type with their style of humor, but I don't see anything funny about this.... Maybe it's because I'm not teenager anymore
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Post by bkev » Mon Apr 06, 2009 9:19 pm

The intro editing was pretty neat though.
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Post by NeptuneKai » Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:19 pm

PHEW those sex jokes were a LARF in a HARF I tell you what. This is almost as good as Family Guy.
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Post by Innagadadavida » Tue Apr 07, 2009 1:39 am

JAPPO wrote:Yeah there's too many gay jokes and the voices all sound the same
I love the voices, they do all sound the same but there's a charm to that. Especially since it's a hilarious voice.
MCDaveG wrote:I don't know..... team Four Star is my blood type with their style of humor, but I don't see anything funny about this.... Maybe it's because I'm not teenager anymore
TeamFourStar is everybody's "blood type." If you like Dragon Ball Z and have any sort of sense of humor, then you're going to like TeamFourStar's Abridged. There is an abundance of sex and gay jokes in TRDBZA, but that's not all that's there. They definitely have some clever editing and lots of references (Too many Dark Night references IMO).
PHEW those sex jokes were a LARF in a HARF I tell you what. This is almost as good as Family Guy.
I do wish they'd cut back on the sex jokes, m'self.

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Post by The Tori-bot » Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:07 am

NeptuneKai wrote:PHEW those sex jokes were a LARF in a HARF I tell you what. This is almost as good as Family Guy.
I can't tell whether you intend this to be a good or a bad thing.
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Post by The Time Traveller » Tue Apr 07, 2009 2:24 pm

The Tori-bot wrote:
NeptuneKai wrote:PHEW those sex jokes were a LARF in a HARF I tell you what. This is almost as good as Family Guy.
I can't tell whether you intend this to be a good or a bad thing.
Oh it's obviously a bad thing.

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Post by Forgotten Hero » Wed Apr 08, 2009 9:21 pm

JAPPO wrote:Lol I know gay jokes are the lowest form of humor, but I can't help but laugh. I'm only human.
It's funny because, I think it's safe to assume, that the Ginyu Force is a little gay...At least Ginyu and Jheece. I can't help but think of a quote from vol. 7 of the viz graphic novels.
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Jheece wrote:And by "play," we don't mean play peek-a-boo! We're gonna beat you up!
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Post by Deep Thought » Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:07 pm

Alright guys, listen, this is important. If you are parodying something, never EVER make celebrity references, especially when these celebrities are totally unrelated to the thing that you are parodying.

What held me back from regarding ARDBZ as to being good? The constant bombardment of celebrity references. What made me finish watching Episode 1 in the middle of this? The celebrity references. What made me fucking CRINGE when I saw Gopher Ball Z? The celebrity references. What made me feel like I was being tortured when I saw a bit of Scary Movie? The utter, constant bombardment of celebrity references.

So, yeah, when making a parody of something, don't do them. Ever.
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Post by Deep Thought » Wed Apr 08, 2009 10:14 pm

Delete this, again. Sorry.

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Post by Innagadadavida » Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:13 pm

Deep Thought wrote:Alright guys, listen, this is important. If you are parodying something, never EVER make celebrity references, especially when these celebrities are totally unrelated to the thing that you are parodying.

What held me back from regarding ARDBZ as to being good? The constant bombardment of celebrity references. What made me finish watching Episode 1 in the middle of this? The celebrity references. What made me fucking CRINGE when I saw Gopher Ball Z? The celebrity references. What made me feel like I was being tortured when I saw a bit of Scary Movie? The utter, constant bombardment of celebrity references.

So, yeah, when making a parody of something, don't do them. Ever.
So you don't like celebrity references. That doesn't mean its an unwritten rule not to use them.

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