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Post by Scarz » Sun May 03, 2009 7:04 pm

"DZZEE" is an odd sound effect, then again what other sound effect would you use for a ki shield? Judging Belzebub's pose on the last panel, I'm guessing he's going to try and break through Cell's Ki shield by force.
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Wait, Dabura blows fire... ? I forget if he did.
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Post by Dayspring » Sun May 03, 2009 7:11 pm

Scarz wrote:"DZZEE" is an odd sound effect, then again what other sound effect would you use for a ki shield? Judging Belzebub's pose on the last panel, I'm guessing he's going to try and break through Cell's Ki shield by force.
The original sound was "Djiiiii," which is like a high-pitched "geeeee" (or arguably "duh-geee" in which the "duh" is very soft and very quick). That's why I find it's a useless translation; the "djiiii" doesn't require translation.

And I think you meant "Dabura" not "Beelzebub."
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Post by Mewzard » Sun May 03, 2009 7:17 pm

I'm starting to wonder how this fight will be. There are two possible trains of thought to the Dabura/Gohan fight-That he was SSJ1, and that he was SSJ2. We and my friend had arguments over this, so I went to the manga. Oddly enough, Gohan's hair was SSJ2 Gohan's hair, not SSJ1 Gohan's hair, yet there was a lack of lightning. Conflicting moment.

I'm thinking the creators of this fantastic webcomic subscribe to the SSJ1 theory, if I read the page about their powers right, which is a bit of a shame. Why would Gohan not go SSJ2 for Dabura, yet got SSJ2 by request for Kibito? Especially since Dabura wasn't really all that exhausted or taken aback by the fight, Gohan was more worn and torn.

Still, this little debate aside, I do like the return of 17's barrier in Cell.
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Post by SSJ2bardock » Sun May 03, 2009 7:18 pm

The sound effect they were trying to go for was a sort of electrical sound, like if you've ever stood under those big metal towers with the electric lines stretching out from them.
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Post by Scarz » Sun May 03, 2009 7:25 pm

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Scarz wrote:"DZZEE" is an odd sound effect, then again what other sound effect would you use for a ki shield? Judging Belzebub's pose on the last panel, I'm guessing he's going to try and break through Cell's Ki shield by force.
The original sound was "Djiiiii," which is like a high-pitched "geeeee" (or arguably "duh-geee" in which the "duh" is very soft and very quick). That's why I find it's a useless translation; the "djiiii" doesn't require translation.
Ah, I see. I've also seen "Djiii" used in other mangas or at least something very similar.
And I think you meant "Dabura" not "Beelzebub."
I know. I just like calling the character by other "hellish" names besides Dabura a la Diabolos, Devil, Demon, Lord of Darkness, Jimmy Page, etc.

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Post by Dayspring » Wed May 06, 2009 2:54 pm

http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/strip-8.html = New mini-manga. They present their manga to Tori-bot... who can't read it because it's not vertical and right-to-left. :lol:

http://www.dragonball-multiverse.com/en/page-114.html = New page. Translation is very accurate. "Such" can arguably be translated as "what," but both imply the exact same context of what's being said.

Death or stone spit should be coming soon.
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Post by The Tori-bot » Wed May 06, 2009 3:09 pm

Dayspring wrote:They present their manga to Tori-bot...
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Post by Dayspring » Wed May 06, 2009 10:30 pm

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Dayspring wrote:They present their manga to Tori-bot...
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:D
How could you turn them down like that?! After all their hard work? :cry:
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Post by Kaboom » Thu May 07, 2009 12:18 am

Nice little mini-comic. As for the new page... I bet Dabra's about to get turned into swiss cheese.
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Post by The Tori-bot » Thu May 07, 2009 1:38 pm

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Dayspring wrote:They present their manga to Tori-bot...
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How could you turn them down like that?! After all their hard work? :cry:
Well, since I can't READ it...
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Post by Dayspring » Thu May 07, 2009 1:48 pm

The Tori-bot wrote:
Dayspring wrote:
The Tori-bot wrote: :shock:

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How could you turn them down like that?! After all their hard work? :cry:
Well, since I can't READ it...
Couldn't you have at least looked at the pretty pictures? :P
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Post by JulieYBM » Thu May 07, 2009 6:11 pm

Dayspring wrote:
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Dayspring wrote:How could you turn them down like that?! After all their hard work? :cry:
Well, since I can't READ it...
Couldn't you have at least looked at the pretty pictures? :P
Why would he be impressed by art he might think he himself drew? :lol:
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Post by Dayspring » Thu May 07, 2009 10:56 pm

JulieYBM wrote:
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The Tori-bot wrote: Well, since I can't READ it...
Couldn't you have at least looked at the pretty pictures? :P
Why would he be impressed by art he might think he himself drew? :lol:
HAHA! I can just see him staring at it and trying to figure out if he drew it before or after Dr Slump. :lol:
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun May 10, 2009 2:04 pm

Page 115 is up, and dang does Cell have the advantage. This fight is probably the best yet, or at least right up there with Nail v. ReaCoome.
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Post by Pain » Sun May 10, 2009 3:47 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Page 115 is up, and dang does Cell have the advantage. This fight is probably the best yet, or at least right up there with Nail v. ReaCoome.
Either the author of this is picking favorites with Cell, or Dabra is acting like a weakling.
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun May 10, 2009 4:25 pm

Dabra was pretty tired out in the last panel. After all, all of Dabra's attacks have been neutralized pretty much, not to mention Cell's probably regrown his body after that fire attack so his body's a little less worn out (even with less ki).
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Post by Pain » Sun May 10, 2009 5:06 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Dabra was pretty tired out in the last panel. After all, all of Dabra's attacks have been neutralized pretty much, not to mention Cell's probably regrown his body after that fire attack so his body's a little less worn out (even with less ki).
I mean, why is Dabra so weak? Cell hasn't gotten any stronger, since his battle with Son Gohan, so they should be about even, right?
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Post by Kaboom » Sun May 10, 2009 6:12 pm

Pain wrote:I mean, why is Dabra so weak? Cell hasn't gotten any stronger, since his battle with Son Gohan, so they should be about even, right?
I'd guess it's not so much Dabra being weak, but Cell is just stronger for some reason. We don't know how things progressed in this Cell's universe... He might have won the Cell Games and then gone on to absorb the rest of Earth's population, or something like that.
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Post by Senzu_Bean » Sun May 10, 2009 6:29 pm

Kanzentai Cell should always have the upper-hand if its at full-power... at least in my opinion. But this Dabra is just plain retard. :P

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Post by JulieYBM » Sun May 10, 2009 8:08 pm

It's possible Cell is really Super Perfect and is bursting his power...
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