Anybody translating DB:EX Apocalypto?

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 9:44 pm

http://sebliet.blogspot.com/2009/01/dbe ... re-01.html
Was anybody translating this? It's artwork is on par with DBAF and DBM. The first five chapters are up in Spanish, whereas only the first two are in French.

I could translate the French one, but I don't want to since the original can be translated by a ton of people here.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 10:58 pm

Dayspring wrote:http://sebliet.blogspot.com/2009/01/dbe ... re-01.html
Was anybody translating this? It's artwork is on par with DBAF and DBM. The first five chapters are up in Spanish, whereas only the first two are in French.

I could translate the French one, but I don't want to since the original can be translated by a ton of people here.

Oh my God, I really want a translation of this now.

Ultimate Gohan!

Super Saiyan 4!!

Big Momma · Post by **Big Momma** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:14 pm

I'm pretty sure I've seen those before.

Isn't this the one where SS(J)3 Vegeta and Goten spar?

Chuquita · Post by **Chuquita** » Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:25 pm

Nice artwork; and I like how they got around Vegeta and Goten's GT hair by just having it grow back to their Z hairs' shape by having a year of training pass.

Curious as to what type of evil entity it is that overtook/fused with Goku--if I'm reading this correctly.

Dayspring · Post by **Dayspring** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:06 am

It seems like there are 12 "God Planets" (I'm guessing a pun on the Chinese Zodiak?) and Goku is on the one that Shenron comes from (The Dragon Planet) because he fused with Shenron at the end of GT. The planets orbit what appears to be the planet of the gods (...wouldn't that be Kaioshinsei?), and some evil entity from that planet possessed him.

sangofe · Post by **sangofe** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:29 am

I'm half French and could probably pull out a decent translation... Although this seems to have been done in Spanish, so the best would be to get the Spanish version, and translate from that.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:22 am

I can tranlate it if you want.

(translated from spanish)

001

Chapter 1 - The mystery of the Dragon (or the dragon mystery)

002

Box with the dragon balls: "For a long time, the dragon balls have been an ally of our friends in the protection of Earth..."

Box with evil Shenlong: "However, due to abusive use, the negative energy within them increased unknown to all, until it manisfested itself in the form of a dark dragon..."

Box with kid Goku: "All the evil energy of this one dragon gave birth to seven terrible beings bent on Earth`s destruction. It was Goku who defeated them, one by one, until he faced the last, the single most powerfull enemy he had ever faced, the one star dragon..."

Boxes with the one star dragon: "This terrible being increased much of its power by absorbing the remaining dragon balls... But still Goku defeated him and ended this battle which decided not only Earth`s fate but the fate of the entire universe"

Box with Goku and Shenlong: "The dragon balls re-established themselves at once and finally Shenlong and Goku fused and disappeared from this world..."

sangofe · Post by **sangofe** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:49 am

rereboy wrote:I can tranlate it if you want.

The Spanish version? Edit: Evil Goku! Muhaha.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:30 am

sangofe wrote:
rereboy wrote:I can tranlate it if you want.
The Spanish version? Edit: Evil Goku! Muhaha.

Yes. I edited my post with the translation of the first page.

I can keep going if you like.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:46 am

rereboy wrote:
sangofe wrote:
rereboy wrote:I can tranlate it if you want.
The Spanish version? Edit: Evil Goku! Muhaha.
Yes. I edited my post with the translation of the first page.

I can keep going if you like.

I like!

Do you think it'll be possible to specify which box you are translating (for those who want to make an English translation...)

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:08 am

JulieYBM wrote:
rereboy wrote:
sangofe wrote: The Spanish version? Edit: Evil Goku! Muhaha.
Yes. I edited my post with the translation of the first page.

I can keep going if you like.
I like!

Do you think it'll be possible to specify which box you are translating (for those who want to make an English translation...)

Sure. I`ve edited the post.

Btw, if anyone spots any typo in my tranlations please tell me. Thank you.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 10:57 am

003

Box with Kami`s place: "In the meantime, something troubles Kami-sama..."

Mr. Popo (first text bubble): "Is something wrong, Kami-sama?"

Kami (first text bubble):"No, Mr. Popo. I was just thinking about the appearance of the evil dragons."

Kami (second text bubble):"I remembered something that the elders of my people told me. Many years ago, there was a time where Namek was plagued by frequent and constant attacks of space pirates, who destroyed everything in their path, and because of them, we turned several times to the dragon balls.

Kami (third text bubble):"The strangest thing is that they were used as many or, maybe, more times than the ones from Earth, and no one ever mentioned any evil dragon or even that Namek was destroyed."

Mr. Popo (second text bubble):"Why would that be, Kami-sama?" (or using a more litteral translation: "To what do you believe that is due to, kamisama?)

Kami (4 text bubble):"Don`t know it yet, Mr. Popo... Don`t know it yet." (or "still do not know")

Kami (thinking):"I hope you`re alright, Goku..."

-----------------------------

004

Box with the house: "Right after the battle, everyone gathered at Goku`s home to celebrate their recent victory. However, everyone thought he would return... All, except one."

Vegeta thinking: "That fool, kakarot, fused with that dragon. I wonder if his powers increased, but unfourtunately I`ll never know... Is there a limit for the sayans? I must put it to the test, although... I must train necessarily with one of the boys since training alone I wont obtain the same results as before. What a drag!"

Wojak · Post by **Wojak** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:47 am

Tracing galore!
Although it's a nice story, the Evil Goku thing is too old.
But I like that Mystic Gohan is on par with SSJ4 Goku.
As it should be.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:13 pm

005

(the first 2 bubbles dont need translation)

Vegeta (2 text bubble): "Are you ready to start our training?"

Trunks (2 text bubble): "Our... Training? ... But, dad..."

Bulma: "Vegeta, wait... I`m sorry to interrupt, but Trunks needs to take charge of the rebuilding operations of the corporation. I can`t take care of it alone".

006

(the first bubble doesn`t need translation)

Vegeta (2 text bubble): "Wouldn`t you like to train with me for a while, eh? What do you say?"

Gohan (1 text bubble): "I would like to go with you Vegeta, even if I don`t see the need to, but I`ve just been told that I must work in rebuilding the company where I work..."

Vegeta (3 text bubble): "What? Isn`t there someone else who can take care of it? You have to do it, necessarily?"

Gohan (2 text bubble): "I`m currently in charge of the company and I must be aware of all. I`m trully sorry, Vegeta, some other time..."

Vegeta thinking: "Idiot..." (or asshole, or imbecile)

Kuhan · Post by **Kuhan** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 3:57 pm

If I get bored at home, I may edit the words into the pictures for y'all!

DNA · Post by **DNA** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:07 pm

Personally I think the story is pretty pathetic and every character is acting out of character. Seriously, would you ever see Vegeta training with Goten? His rival's son? Don't think so. Also, all the new characters are just there. There's no presenting them, no explaining who they are. They're just there. Drawings are good, story is mediocre. I like the adaptation of the "Evil Goku" thing about AF, but don't like the origins of it. I wonder how Toyble will handle the "Evil Goku Arc", if he will at all.

darkhawk5 · Post by **darkhawk5** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:21 pm

So I started editing the pages using the translations by rereboy, should I continue?

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 01copy.png

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 02copy.png

Innagadadavida · Post by **Innagadadavida** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:24 pm

This has been translated before as images here on Daizenshuu EX. The comic used to be called Dragon Ball AF, I guess they changed the name so that it doesn't get confused with the other AF.

SSJ Helldog · Post by **SSJ Helldog** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:32 pm

Yeah, I thought this looked familiar.

http://db.schuby.org/daizex/viewtopic.p ... r++spanish

http://db.schuby.org/daizex/viewtopic.p ... 34&start=0

It'd be awesome if someone wanted to consolidate these images and continue translating!

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:45 pm

darkhawk5 wrote:So I started editing the pages using the translations by rereboy, should I continue?

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 01copy.png

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 02copy.png

Good job.

I will continue to translate them. However it might take a while. I won`t do everything at once.

Kanzenshuu

Anybody translating DB:EX Apocalypto?

Anybody translating DB:EX Apocalypto?

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