Anybody translating DB:EX Apocalypto?

darkhawk5 · Post by **darkhawk5** » Thu Jun 11, 2009 8:46 pm

Well rereboy translated up to pg.6 I can have them up by tonight

darkhawk5 · Post by **darkhawk5** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:05 am

Here are the links for pages 3-6

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 03copy.png

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 04copy.png

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 05copy.png

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 06copy.png

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:51 am

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First text bubble: "A few minutes later."

Vegeta (1 text bubble): "Hey, Goten".

Vegeta (2 text bubble): "You`re the only one who`s not doing anything, instead of wasting time why don`t you train with me?"

Vegeta (thinking): "I, the great Vegeta, begging for someone to come train with me. Humiliating!"

Goten (1 text bubble): "Eh... That`s fine with me, Mr. Vegeta, but my mother doesn`t want to be alone..."

ChiChi (1 text bubble): "Goten! Don`t worry about me. You have neglected your training long enough. Go with Vegeta."

Chichi (thinking): "I hope that will make him forget all about that girl from the capital."

Goten (2): "What?!"

Goten (3): "Mum, no... Wait"

Vegeta (thinking): "It wasn`t such a bad idea to talk to Chichi."

Vegeta (3): "Its settled. I`ll be waiting for you tomorrow at the capsule corporation, Goten".

Goten: (4): "Oh, no... Now what am I going to do?"

The Time Traveller · Post by **The Time Traveller** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 7:26 am

I was Google Translating it before, but the version I did had different art. Well, WORSE art.

Compare these two.

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Here's the only pages I did, ended up... giving up! As you can see, some of it makes no sense, since I was interperating garbage from Google Translate of course >.>

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darkhawk5 · Post by **darkhawk5** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:09 am

Here's page 7 http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 07copy.png

Kuhan · Post by **Kuhan** » Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:05 am

If you use the title pages from the French version, they're in color!

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:44 pm

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Box with the building: On the next day, Goten heads to the Capsule Corporation...

Goten thinking 1: Mr. Vegeta must be out of his mind. How can he consider to keep training if it is absurd to think that beings more powerfull than him and my dad exist...?

Goten thinking 2: ... That transformation is simply unbeatable...

Goten thinking 3: I really think this training will just be a waste of time...

Goten talking 1: And I who was thinking of spending the summer with peers...

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Goten talking 1: Good day, Mr Vegeta. I`m ready to start the training.

Vegeta talking 1: Goten, you`re late. I was beggining to think you werent coming.

Goten talking 2: I`m sorry, its just that I overslept and...

Vegeta talking 2: Hurry, follow me. The ship is waiting for us.

Goten talking 3: What?... Why do we need a ship Mr. Vegeta if we can just fly, unless... Don`t tell me..!

Vegeta thinking 1: Where is the ship?

Vegeta talking 3: That`s it Goten, we`ll go to an unhabited planet. Did you believe by any chance that the Earth would resist our training? The planet we are going to is very resistent and it`s not very far away. If all goes well we`ll be back in one year.

Goten talking 4: One... One year?!

Vegeta talking 4: Yes, one year. Don`t you think that`s great? And don`t complain and hurry, or we`ll stay even longer if I feel like it.

Freeza Heika · Post by **Freeza Heika** » Sat Jun 13, 2009 6:11 pm

My spanish mediocre, but I gave 10 a try.

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Goten: Are we going to go there Vegeta?
Vegeta: It will only take a few hours with this ship.
Vegeta: Very good Goten. Say goodbye to this planet for a good while.
Goten: What are we going to eat Vegeta?
Vegeta: Don't worry Goten. There is food stored in the capsules.
Goten:Capsule food?! You know that sucks!

Edit:

11 too

Popo: Did you find something out Kami?
Dende: Yes, even though it is only an old myth...
Popo: A myth?
Popo: About what?
Dende: It is related to the origin of the Dragonballs. I'll tell it to you...

The next page is a little too text heavy for my abilities.

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:23 pm

Freeza Heika wrote:My spanish mediocre, but I gave 10 a try.

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Goten: Are we going to go there Vegeta? Are we going to travel in this, Mr Vegeta?
Vegeta: It will only take a few hours with this ship. That`s right. It only take a few hours with this ship.
Vegeta: Very good Goten. Say goodbye to this planet for a good while. Very well Goten. Say goodbye to this planet for a good while.
Goten: What are we going to eat Vegeta? Mr Vegeta, what are we going to eat?
Vegeta: Don't worry Goten. There is food stored in the capsules.
Goten:Capsule food?! You know that sucks! Capsule food?! NOOOO!! That tastes horrible!

Edit:

11 too

Popo: Did you find something out Kami?
Dende: Yes, even though it is only an old myth...
Popo: A myth?
Popo: About what?
Dende: It is related to the origin of the Dragonballs. I'll tell it to you... This story tells the origin of the Dragon balls. I'll tell it to you...

The next page is a little too text heavy for my abilities.

I edited in red some of the things I would change. You did a good job. You only translated the very first sentence wrong. Everything else was right but I edited it to make it closer to the original text. But the meaning is about the same.

Freeza Heika · Post by **Freeza Heika** » Sun Jun 14, 2009 12:26 am

rereboy wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:My spanish mediocre, but I gave 10 a try.

010

Goten: Are we going to go there Vegeta? Are we going to travel in this, Mr Vegeta?
Vegeta: It will only take a few hours with this ship. That`s right. It only take a few hours with this ship.
Vegeta: Very good Goten. Say goodbye to this planet for a good while. Very well Goten. Say goodbye to this planet for a good while.
Goten: What are we going to eat Vegeta? Mr Vegeta, what are we going to eat?
Vegeta: Don't worry Goten. There is food stored in the capsules.
Goten:Capsule food?! You know that sucks! Capsule food?! NOOOO!! That tastes horrible!

Edit:

11 too

Popo: Did you find something out Kami?
Dende: Yes, even though it is only an old myth...
Popo: A myth?
Popo: About what?
Dende: It is related to the origin of the Dragonballs. I'll tell it to you... This story tells the origin of the Dragon balls. I'll tell it to you...

The next page is a little too text heavy for my abilities.
I edited in red some of the things I would change. You did a good job. You only translated the very first sentence wrong. Everything else was right but I edited it to make it closer to the original text. But the meaning is about the same.

Thanks for correcting it. I admittedly took some liberties on purpose. I didn't bother translating Señor to Mr. because I thought that, in this context, it was sort of superfluous when translated to English.

darkhawk5 · Post by **darkhawk5** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:34 am

Sorry been busy lately: http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g15/d ... 08copy.png

Kuhan · Post by **Kuhan** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:53 am

You... umm... you spelled "powerful" wrong...

rereboy · Post by **rereboy** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:27 pm

It`s a typo. Feel free to tell me if you spot any errors.

Saturn523 · Post by **Saturn523** » Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:39 pm

Dayspring wrote:http://sebliet.blogspot.com/2009/01/dbe ... re-01.html
Was anybody translating this? It's artwork is on par with DBAF and DBM. The first five chapters are up in Spanish, whereas only the first two are in French.

I could translate the French one, but I don't want to since the original can be translated by a ton of people here.

Nice

. Can contact the author...

If you are interested in translating this manga to some other language, contact the author.

Saturn523 · Post by **Saturn523** » Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:14 pm

Translation is already

http://sebliet.blogspot.com/2009/01/dra ... glish.html

Saturn523 · Post by **Saturn523** » Sun Jul 05, 2009 8:37 pm

English chpter 2...

http://sebliet.blogspot.com/2009/01/dra ... glish.html

Freeza Heika · Post by **Freeza Heika** » Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:01 pm

The English translation is kind of spotty. At times, I can't even understand it.

Puto · Post by **Puto** » Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:03 pm

Story looks pretty awesome. I read it through all the chapters, seems to be turning out pretty nice...

Senzu_Bean · Post by **Senzu_Bean** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:21 am

This is actually pretty nice. The artwork isn't as good as the other two fan-made Mangas but the story looks interesting (even though a bit silly). However the fact Vegeta and Goten went SSJ3 kinda ruined a bit for me.
I will track it from now on.

Just a question: who is that guy at the beginning of chapter 3?

MCDaveG · Post by **MCDaveG** » Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:19 am

I must say I like it more then the Japanese AF one

Kanzenshuu

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