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Post by Wojak » Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:17 pm

Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
I think that the thing you mean is Videl fighting Spopowitch.
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Post by Freeza Heika » Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:19 pm

Wojak wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
I think that the thing you mean is Videl fighting Spopowitch.
Actually, I was hoping for it to be MUCH more gruesome. :twisted:
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Post by jjgp1112 » Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:28 pm

Freeza Heika wrote:
Wojak wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
I think that the thing you mean is Videl fighting Spopowitch.
Actually, I was hoping for it to be MUCH more gruesome. :twisted:
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Post by Freeza Heika » Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:32 pm

jjgp1112 wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:
Wojak wrote: I think that the thing you mean is Videl fighting Spopowitch.
Actually, I was hoping for it to be MUCH more gruesome. :twisted:
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And I'd like to let you know that you icon...disturbs me :shock:
That was the idea behind it. Well that, and some forum members might find it to be a little treat. :wink:
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Post by Scarz » Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:38 pm

Heh, the last panel could be taken way out of con...
Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
jjgp1112 wrote:The last panel can be taken the wrong way, if you know what I mean :lol:
Bow chicka wow wow...
GOD DAMNIT! Why am I always the last one to make an inappropriate joke! What now? Do I reduce myself to making "pedo-bear" pan jokes like some 4chan twit?

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Post by Dayspring » Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:40 pm

Scarz wrote:Heh, the last panel could be taken way out of con...
Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
jjgp1112 wrote:The last panel can be taken the wrong way, if you know what I mean :lol:
Bow chicka wow wow...
GOD DAMNIT! Why am I always the last one to make an inappropriate joke! What now? Do I reduce myself to making "pedo-bear" pan jokes like some 4chan twit?

Agh, I need to get here earlier next time.
Not too late to make a joke about the second to last panel's "His Power Raised." comment. :P

Translation's decent. I would have gone with "His strength has increased," but both mean the same thing.
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Post by Wojak » Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:56 pm

Dayspring wrote:
Scarz wrote:Heh, the last panel could be taken way out of con...
Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
Bow chicka wow wow...
GOD DAMNIT! Why am I always the last one to make an inappropriate joke! What now? Do I reduce myself to making "pedo-bear" pan jokes like some 4chan twit?

Agh, I need to get here earlier next time.
Not too late to make a joke about the second to last panel's "His Power Raised." comment. :P

Translation's decent. I would have gone with "His strength has increased," but both mean the same thing.
Shouldn't it be "His power rose."?
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Post by Bussani » Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:57 pm

MCDaveG wrote:Bussani: You can't judge it by the normal laws, that are working in series. Everyone is powered up as hell in Buu saga, and if there will be two half-breed Saiyan kids, with power as Goku at the start of the series, it won't be interesting, so even if it is against the law or typical fashion, they must be Super-saiyains to get the same importance as other of the characters.
That's what I meant by 'out of universe reasons'. :P There's also the in-universe explanations of half-breeds with no tails just being amazing for some reason. But yeah.
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Post by Rocketman » Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:10 pm

Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat.

HA HA phallic references.

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Post by Freeza Heika » Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:29 pm

Rocketman wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat.

HA HA phallic references.
I knew there was a metaphor in there somewhere. Ha ha, dangly parts!
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Dayspring wrote:
Scarz wrote:Heh, the last panel could be taken way out of con...
GOD DAMNIT! Why am I always the last one to make an inappropriate joke! What now? Do I reduce myself to making "pedo-bear" pan jokes like some 4chan twit?

Agh, I need to get here earlier next time.
Not too late to make a joke about the second to last panel's "His Power Raised." comment. :P

Translation's decent. I would have gone with "His strength has increased," but both mean the same thing.
Shouldn't it be "His power rose."?
It should be. You use raised only if there is a direct object immediately following the word. Rose is used if there is no direct object or if the subject is before the predicate.
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Post by DNA » Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:48 pm

Rocketman wrote: Shouldn't it be "His power rose."?
"Bojack's power rose"
"Bojack used Galactic Buster"
"Bojack's attack missed"
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Let's not use "rose"

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Post by Dayspring » Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:37 pm

Freeza Heika wrote:
Wojak wrote: Shouldn't it be "His power rose."?
It should be. You use raised only if there is a direct object immediately following the word. Rose is used if there is no direct object or if the subject is before the predicate.
Either way, guys, neither my translation nor the wording I would have chosen. :P
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Post by Herms » Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:16 am

Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
It's time for Pan to make like Jack Kerouac and get seriously Beat.
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Post by Freeza Heika » Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:38 pm

Dayspring wrote:
Freeza Heika wrote:
Wojak wrote: Shouldn't it be "His power rose."?
It should be. You use raised only if there is a direct object immediately following the word. Rose is used if there is no direct object or if the subject is before the predicate.
Either way, guys, neither my translation nor the wording I would have chosen. :P
I agree. Whether you use proper grammar or not, "rose" and "raised" both sound awkward. Increased sounds much better.
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Freeza Heika wrote:It is time for Pan to be beaten around like... some kind of thing that gets beat. Damn my inaptitude for similies!
It's time for Pan to make like Jack Kerouac and get seriously Beat.
I can dig it.
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Post by MCDaveG » Thu Jul 09, 2009 2:07 pm

It will be interesting, to get that Pan killed, because that other Pan is watching and counting on her, so then she'll be frustrated and then explode in some fury........ kill one Pan to get other on higher level, because TOEI did a really hideous job with GT Pan.
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Jul 12, 2009 1:58 pm

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Post by Maphisto86 » Sun Jul 12, 2009 2:07 pm

That is just brutal . . . and evil. :evil: Pan did not even have a chance to move out of Bojack's grasp.

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Post by Rocketman » Sun Jul 12, 2009 2:12 pm

Vegetto! *squeal*

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Post by Saiyan-Professor » Sun Jul 12, 2009 2:45 pm

I just know that those two are going to interfere and jack up a perfectly good beating. :(
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Post by Innagadadavida » Sun Jul 12, 2009 3:00 pm

Saiyan-Professor wrote:I just know that those two are going to interfere and jack up a perfectly good beating. :(
I know you know your comments incite controversy. It's perfectly fine to have those opinions, but when you publicly state them knowing that others will react... that's trolling, dude. :roll:

Anyway, I can see how Bojack killing Pan might change the tone of the series. It was a fun competition before, but now it's going to turn into a serious competition with real danger. I mean, they all knew it was dangerous before, but after this they're going to have an example of just how far some of these combatants will go.

I have a feeling that Gohan will want to interfere or get revenge after Pan gets her neck snapped.

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