Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by JulieYBM » Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:17 pm

So exciting. I wonder if the gang's going to prepare to train?!
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Post by Velasa » Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:44 pm

Quick question because I haven't been paying much attention to this fanmanga (it's not that it's bad, it's just that all fighting all the time bores me)- Has Pic shown up again after that one early shot where he's managing things in Hell?
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Post by JulieYBM » Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:53 pm

Velasa wrote:Quick question because I haven't been paying much attention to this fanmanga (it's not that it's bad, it's just that all fighting all the time bores me)- Has Pic shown up again after that one early shot where he's managing things in Hell?
On the latest set of pages, yes.
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Post by Herms » Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:06 pm

He hasn't done much though, other than just say the occasional line.
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Post by fps_anth » Fri Sep 04, 2009 11:57 pm

I love the Daizenshuu-esque covers of the printed versions.

Also, while searching on Yahoo Auctions Japan, I stumbled upon this:

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Bootleg perhaps? Or is there a third volume?

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Post by Herms » Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:32 am

There is an upcoming third volume. Toyble had planned on unveiling it at this August's Comiket, but he wasn't able to finish it in time. I don't know if that's the real cover of it though. I'm pretty sure Toyble wasn't behind those cards though. Whoever made them just reused the covers for volumes 1 and 2.
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Post by kei17 » Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am

fps_anth wrote:I love the Daizenshuu-esque covers of the printed versions.

Also, while searching on Yahoo Auctions Japan, I stumbled upon this:

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Bootleg perhaps? Or is there a third volume?
That is the faux-final volume which was officially(?) sold by Toyble last year. The cards are the added bonuses of that time. I have them. :)

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Post by JamieDBZFan1995 » Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:52 pm

Hey does anyone know when new Pages come out? Say for example DBUniverse Fan Manga. A new page comes out every Wednesday and Sunday, how often is a DBAF Page released? Thanks.
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Post by Herms » Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:23 pm

They're currently coming out on an irregular monthly schedule.
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Post by JamieDBZFan1995 » Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:30 pm

Herms wrote:They're currently coming out on an irregular monthly schedule.

OK, thanks. Does anyone reply in this thread when one comes out?
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Post by Herms » Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:40 pm

JulieYBM is usually the first to post when there are new pages, or any other updates on Toyble's blog.
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Post by JamieDBZFan1995 » Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:22 am

Herms wrote:JulieYBM is usually the first to post when there are new pages, or any other updates on Toyble's blog.

OK thanks mate, I've just finished reading DBAF and I'm hooked on it.
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Post by DaemonCorps » Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:58 pm

Ooh, the final full day on Planet Vegeta? Looks promising. And considering that Goku's still a baby, I'm assuming the character with Raditz is either Tullece or Toyble's going with the whole concept of there being similar looking Saiyans out there based on their strength. The other character looks kinda weird, though; looks like the guy Vegeta punched out in the final Budoukai in Z... except with the head of a kid :?.

As for AF, looks like things are truckin' along nicely. Really like the inclusion of GT characters... except somehow done in a cooler way than in GT. And I really find it hilarious that Tapion and Minoshia are just kinda chilling in the back with no dialogue while Elder Kai fills everyone in on things. Based on what he says, I'm gonna go ahead and predict a month of training for the heroes before the Xicor comes back. Cool stuffs!

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Post by Herms » Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:05 pm

Oh yeah, I never did translate those roughdraft pages for DB Zero. Here ya' go:

Title Page
DB Zero: rough draft

Page One
Box 1: [t] The year, Age 737— 3 days before Planet Vegeta’s destruction—
Box 2: Planet Vegeta Fighting Arena #3
Announcer: The team who finally wins this match will be approved to be dispatched as soldiers to another planet.
Raditz: [r] Hah [l] Hah

Page 2
Raditz: [speech bubble] Gugugu [little bubles] Hah
Shallot (short-haired kid): [r] Hey, Raditz! [l] Say that you give up!!!
Shallot’s teammates: Nice going!
Rycelo (head-scarf kid): …!
Tullece: Guguh
Tullece: [r] Raditz, that’s enough! [l] Surrender!!
Raditz: [r] ! [l] Tullece…

Page Three
Raditz: I get it…
Raditz: [r] Hey! Did you hear that?! [l] I’ll surrender, so take your leg off me.
Shallot: [t] There’s something you’re forgetting! I can’t do that! Just announce that you’ve lost like this!!!
Raditz: [r] Look, please…[l] I don’t want to lose looking so pathetic.
Shallot: …
Raditz: I’ve got pride too! Please take your leg off me.
Raditz: Please!!!
Shallot: …! Chih

Page Four
Raditz: Daah!!!
Shallot: Wha—

Page Five
Announcer: [r] We—ell now! [l] Contestant Raditz has kicked up sand---!!!
Announcer: I can’t see the ring through all this dust!
Shallot: [r] Crap [l] Where’d you go?!!!
Shallot: !!
Shallot: [r] Kah…[l] Kahah!!!

Page Six
Shallot: [t] You…you bastard. Ge…getting help from others, and grabbing tails are…against the rules…!!!
Tullece: You think we care?!!!
Raditz: Hah!!!

Page Seven
Announcer: [r] Contestant Shallot is out of bounds!!! [l] And so, Raditz’s team wins!!!
Shallot’s teammates: Eeh!!?
Raditz: Hihihi

Page Eight
Shallot teammate 1: Hey now!!!
Shallot teammate 2: That was against the rules! That’s dirty!!!
Raditz: [t] Hmph There’s no such thing as “dirty” in battle!
Raditz and co.: [r] Haah hahhahhahahhaah!!! [l] Hahhahhahhahhaah!!!
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Post by JulieYBM » Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:26 pm

Thanks, Herms!
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Post by Captain Awesome » Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:47 am

Not sure if anyone caught this, but Toyble updated his blog a while ago with five unfinished DBAF pages and it looks like Si Xing Long has shown up in the afterlife.

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Post by Herms » Fri Sep 18, 2009 3:15 pm

Yeah, I translated those unfinished page at the bottom of page 54.
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Post by Hellspawn28 » Fri Sep 18, 2009 3:20 pm

I have been reading this AF manga for a while now, and it's well done too. So far it's better then GT and I wish they give out more devoplment for Xicor. It's looks like Toyble is putting AF on hold.

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Post by Sunlight & City Night » Wed Sep 23, 2009 3:48 pm

Has Toyble made any announcements as to when the third volume will be available to buy online? I'm desperate to get my hands on it.
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Post by Hellspawn28 » Wed Sep 23, 2009 4:06 pm

It's looks like Nova has cameback too since I don't see a Halo on his head. I wounder how long this Manga will be?
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