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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by DNA » Fri Sep 24, 2010 10:10 pm

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DNA wrote:His style is so close to Toriyama's that it looks like it was made by the master himself.
There's a pretty good reason for that, you know...
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by spencer7x7 » Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:35 pm

DNA wrote:And honestly, if AF is going to follow the rumours and fanfics, and following what the Elder Kaioshin said, I'm guessing that Xicor isn't going to be defeated by fighting, but with diplomacy instead; probably becoming a good guy afterwards and then we enter the Dark Goku Arc, or something like that.
I doubt there will be a "Dark Goku" arc because it will take at least a year to finish the Xicor ark or more. Also,there's not really any reason to continue the series after it.
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by DNA » Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:50 pm

spencer7x7 wrote:I doubt there will be a "Dark Goku" arc because it will take at least a year to finish the Xicor ark or more. Also,there's not really any reason to continue the series after it.
... Why..?

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by desirecampbell » Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:43 pm

Pages 175-194 are up, big thanks to Necrosaber!

http://www.desirecampbell.com/dbaf

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by JulieYBM » Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:52 pm

desirecampbell wrote:Pages 175-194 are up, big thanks to Necrosaber!

http://www.desirecampbell.com/dbaf
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I was worried they wouldn't fit in well with the Toyble uploads but they seem to quite well.

Couldn't the earlier pages use some updating? I'm pretty sure Horoko did the translations way back when. O.o
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Ussj Future Trunks » Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:52 pm

I will say this. It's not just a tournament. That's been implied many times with all the villains making their own little plots. Not to mention XXI/main villain. You can't say the plot didn't thicken when Zen Buu stopped Broly from being sent back to test Vegetto. Lol you can't say AF has more going on per chapter. It's one big "bad guy here, gotta get goku to stop him". DBZ isn't exactly known for plot but Multiverse has way more twists and happenings. There's so much mystery that you can't say it has no plot. It just hasn't started up yet. AF moves faster but ultimately its just another fanfiction about some big villain.
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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by Piccolo Daimaoh » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:23 pm

desirecampbell wrote:Pages 175-194 are up, big thanks to Necrosaber!

http://www.desirecampbell.com/dbaf
Thanks. These ones look a bit better. And they're consistent with the other pages too. :P

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by spencer7x7 » Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:30 pm

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spencer7x7 wrote:I doubt there will be a "Dark Goku" arc because it will take at least a year to finish the Xicor ark or more. Also,there's not really any reason to continue the series after it.
... Why..?
Because the the rest of the arcs in AF are just crap.
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by Scarz » Sun Sep 26, 2010 1:54 am

spencer7x7 wrote:
DNA wrote:
spencer7x7 wrote:I doubt there will be a "Dark Goku" arc because it will take at least a year to finish the Xicor ark or more. Also,there's not really any reason to continue the series after it.
... Why..?
Because the the rest of the arcs in AF are just crap.
:lol: I'm sorry but after reading your signature I wonder if your comment is supposed to be some kind of sarcasm?

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Re: Toyble DBAF Aug 7, 2010] pg 172-174

Post by DNA » Sun Sep 26, 2010 6:08 am

spencer7x7 wrote:Because the the rest of the arcs in AF are just crap.
Oh yeah, because Xicor was pure literary genius before Toyble started adapting it.

Anyway, all this talk of Dragon Balls in the comic makes me think of this BGM:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-E8PRDf7QjU

Scroll to 4:26.

Anyway Necrosaber, can't wait to see more scans from you! If you are willing of course. They are much better than the ones Toyble gives us :P
Also, you're name makes me think of this song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKxWl4PcBY4

Except I change it to "Necro Saber" in my mind :|

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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by spencer7x7 » Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:07 am

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:lol: I'm sorry but after reading your signature I wonder if your comment is supposed to be some kind of sarcasm?
What's that supposed to mean? :shock:
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by dbgtFO » Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:37 am

spencer7x7 wrote:
Scarz wrote:
:lol: I'm sorry but after reading your signature I wonder if your comment is supposed to be some kind of sarcasm?
What's that supposed to mean? :shock:
In your signature you say you are the biggest fan of Toybles DBAF manga, yet you don't like the other ideas about AF there has been flourishing on the internet, which Toyble probably will cover, since he has covered the other rumored arcs.
If Toyble does that, and if you don't like it, then you won't be the biggest fan of his manga because you don't like it like you used to, I think that's what Scarz meant.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by Scarz » Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:23 pm

dbgtFO wrote:
spencer7x7 wrote:
Scarz wrote:
:lol: I'm sorry but after reading your signature I wonder if your comment is supposed to be some kind of sarcasm?
What's that supposed to mean? :shock:
In your signature you say you are the biggest fan of Toybles DBAF manga, yet you don't like the other ideas about AF there has been flourishing on the internet, which Toyble probably will cover, since he has covered the other rumored arcs.
If Toyble does that, and if you don't like it, then you won't be the biggest fan of his manga because you don't like it like you used to, I think that's what Scarz meant.
That's exactly what I meant.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by Jaruka » Sun Sep 26, 2010 5:10 pm

I always assumed Toyble would end after they finished the Xicor ark, I mean at the rate they release pages we have like three years before Goku gets revived :lol:

What other rumoured arks could Toyble pick up?
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by DNA » Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:49 pm

Jaruka wrote:I always assumed Toyble would end after they finished the Xicor ark, I mean at the rate they release pages we have like three years before Goku gets revived :lol:

What other rumoured arks could Toyble pick up?
Evil Goku arc is the only thing that comes to mind, in which Goku turns evil or an evil clone of Goku appears, something like that. Those are the only 2 main arcs I picked up from the original AF rumours.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by JulieYBM » Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:59 pm

With the way Toyble keeps playing that "stop relying on Gokû" card I have to wonder if an evil Gokû arc would be the ultimate resolution of that element. :p
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

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JulieYBM wrote:With the way Toyble keeps playing that "stop relying on Gokû" card I have to wonder if an evil Gokû arc would be the ultimate resolution of that element. :p
Now that you mention that, it does make sense, kinda like the "stop abusing the Dragon Balls" deal.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by Scarz » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:38 pm

DNA wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:With the way Toyble keeps playing that "stop relying on Gokû" card I have to wonder if an evil Gokû arc would be the ultimate resolution of that element. :p
Now that you mention that, it does make sense, kinda like the "stop abusing the Dragon Balls" deal.
*whines* But I don't wanna evil Goku arc! I don't wanna, I don't wanna, I DON'T WANNA!

I really hope Toyble doesn't do an "Evil Goku" story. To me it's like to bottom of the barrel of bad fanfiction ideas and besides what would make evil Goku any different from Xicor or other over powered DB villains? "It's Goku but evil" bit isn't going to be enough to hold up a plot.

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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by JulieYBM » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:44 pm

Scarz wrote:
DNA wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:With the way Toyble keeps playing that "stop relying on Gokû" card I have to wonder if an evil Gokû arc would be the ultimate resolution of that element. :p
Now that you mention that, it does make sense, kinda like the "stop abusing the Dragon Balls" deal.
*whines* But I don't wanna evil Goku arc! I don't wanna, I don't wanna, I DON'T WANNA!

I really hope Toyble doesn't do an "Evil Goku" story. To me it's like to bottom of the barrel of bad fanfiction ideas and besides what would make evil Goku any different from Xicor or other over powered DB villains? "It's Goku but evil" bit isn't going to be enough to hold up a plot.
Well, not if the story is about the personal pain of the heroes having to fight their family/friend. Less "OH MAH GAH, GOKUU IS A EVIL!!" and more "the trial of facing a loved one."
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Re: Toyble DBAF [Sept 25, 2010] pg 175-191

Post by DNA » Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:48 pm

Scarz wrote:
DNA wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:With the way Toyble keeps playing that "stop relying on Gokû" card I have to wonder if an evil Gokû arc would be the ultimate resolution of that element. :p
Now that you mention that, it does make sense, kinda like the "stop abusing the Dragon Balls" deal.
*whines* But I don't wanna evil Goku arc! I don't wanna, I don't wanna, I DON'T WANNA!

I really hope Toyble doesn't do an "Evil Goku" story. To me it's like to bottom of the barrel of bad fanfiction ideas and besides what would make evil Goku any different from Xicor or other over powered DB villains? "It's Goku but evil" bit isn't going to be enough to hold up a plot.
I just checked Google and stumbled upon "Dragon Ball Apokalypto" in some other thread. In that one, basically some elder god of evil takes Goku's body, and Evil Goku Arc starts from there, basically. I personally think it's not a bad idea. The Dragon Balls turned into villains eventually. There's only 2 things left to do, another arc with Red Ribbon somehow (which I would rather not have, but it's kind of a tradition) and Goku turning into a main villain, I think it's the only direction to go, if he decides to continue.

Edit: Plus what JulieYBM just said.

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