Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by coola » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:03 pm

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Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:05 pm

800 pages. Damn.

I also repeat. SHUT THE FUCK UP BRA YOU BITCH.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:07 pm

Ugh. Bra is worst than Chi and Bulma(Dragonball first arc) put together. She so fucking annoying. Why can't Vegetto beam sword her ass.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by dbzfan7 » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:09 pm

TheGmGoken wrote:Ugh. Bra is worst than Chi and Bulma(Dragonball first arc) put together. She so fucking annoying. Why can't Vegetto beam sword her ass.
Because Vegetto is almost as bad as she is in this comic.

I like to read the fan comic of Gast kicking her ass and the bird guys not giving a shit about her dying.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by hulkty » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:12 pm

Agree with Bra...
Art is still bad in all the panels except maybe the first...
Neko SHOULD be dead from a powered up SSj Teen Gotenks punch... but it probably won't be over for a while...
The Mr. Satan thing is stupid as can be... Trunks himself is too embarrased by him to do anything he would do...
Seriously...why is TEEN Gotenks MORE immature than CHILD Gotenks?..... -__-'

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by TheGmGoken » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:18 pm

hulkty wrote: Seriously...why is TEEN Gotenks MORE immature than CHILD Gotenks?..... -__-'
I think the author is trying to hard to have "gag" or be funny. Which he's failing at IMHO. His Gotenks seems to try to hard to be Gotenks.

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Post by coola » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:42 pm

Well, teenagers often tend to be more immature than kids, so i don`t really have problem with Gotenks acting like that
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by KentalSSJ6 » Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:49 pm

coola wrote:Well, teenagers often tend to be more immature than kids, so i don`t really have problem with Gotenks acting like that
Well EoZ Trunks and Goten seemed pretty mature for their age when we saw them in the anime. I know they get arrogant while as Gotenks but youd think hed have improved a little bit.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Insertclevername » Fri Oct 11, 2013 11:00 pm

coola wrote:Well, teenagers often tend to be more immature than kids, so i don`t really have problem with Gotenks acting like that
They aren't teenagers. They should be in their late 20's.
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Post by Malik_DBNA » Fri Oct 11, 2013 11:18 pm

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coola wrote:Well, teenagers often tend to be more immature than kids, so i don`t really have problem with Gotenks acting like that
They aren't teenagers. They should be in their late 20's.
When Goku left with Uub, Trunks was 18 and Goten was 17. I believe this takes place 9 or 10 years later, so Trunks would be 27 or 28 and Goten would be 26 or 27.

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Post by miguelnuva1 » Sat Oct 12, 2013 5:57 am

I'll say it.

I kinda enjoy both Bra and Vegito.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Marco Polo » Sat Oct 12, 2013 7:48 am

You know your fan manga is awkward when your Gotenks is dumber than GT Gotenks.

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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Flame Dragon » Sat Oct 12, 2013 9:02 am

Honestly the new artist is terrible, the art doesn't resemble Toriyama style at all.
When i see these pages i don't think "Dragonball" i think "Ben 10?".
So awful.

The manga should have ended after the creators (believe their names are GogetaJR and Salagir) left... Now it looks like a (bad) random kids comic.

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Post by dbzfan7 » Sat Oct 12, 2013 10:28 am

Flame Dragon wrote:Honestly the new artist is terrible, the art doesn't resemble Toriyama style at all.
When i see these pages i don't think "Dragonball" i think "Ben 10?".
So awful.

The manga should have ended after the creators (believe their names are GogetaJR and Salagir) left... Now it looks like a (bad) random kids comic.
Only Gogetajr left. Salagir is still on board.
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Post by Gyt Kaliba » Sat Oct 12, 2013 3:17 pm

dbzfan7 wrote:
Flame Dragon wrote:Honestly the new artist is terrible, the art doesn't resemble Toriyama style at all.
When i see these pages i don't think "Dragonball" i think "Ben 10?".
So awful.

The manga should have ended after the creators (believe their names are GogetaJR and Salagir) left... Now it looks like a (bad) random kids comic.
Only Gogetajr left. Salagir is still on board.
Yup. That and, say what you will about the wavering quality of this comic (something I agree with even if I disagree about this particular chapter being "bad", other than some of the art), I'd rather it keep going and end eventually rather than us all just being left hanging.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by RandomGuy96 » Sat Oct 12, 2013 3:26 pm

Gotenks looks so off in the second panel.

And seriously? Gotenks' parts are adults now, it makes no sense that they still act like this. Unless they just never mentally grew up, which didn't seem to be the case from what we saw of them at the EoZ.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by mAcChaos » Sat Oct 12, 2013 3:34 pm

RandomGuy96 wrote:from what we saw of them at the EoZ.
When was that?
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sat Oct 12, 2013 10:30 pm

You know, I think it finally hit me what I found wrong with the complaints. If you have them, ok...but is it really necessary to voice them EVERY. SINGLE. PANEL that comes out? Before even so much as a second has passed in the story itself? To me, it seems like the equivalent of watching, say, Legend of Korra, and pausing the video every 15 seconds to go on a rant about how the artwork in that 15 seconds was so off-panel, and how those two sentences Korra uttered were completely out of character, etc., etc...

And it's hard to even call it an exaggeration when ALL that's needed for people to voice, say, how much they want Bra to shut up, and how much of a jerk she is...is for her to say one mildly vitriolic sentence, in one throwaway panel....

I dunno, it just seems like we're beating a dead horse. I mean, if you want to nitpick the arwork, fine. The comic comes out slow enough that there's an actual point to complaining about that every panel (so that Salagir might hear). But are we really going to call the STORY a failure before it's even had time to get into motion?
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Post by mAcChaos » Sat Oct 12, 2013 11:41 pm

It's been 800 pages.
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Re: Fanmanga - DB Multiverse

Post by Fionordequester » Sun Oct 13, 2013 1:28 am

I'm talking about this current chapter. I'm just saying, I think we ought to let it finish before we start analyzing it.
Kataphrut wrote:It's a bit of a Boy Who Cried Wolf situation to me...Basically, the boy shouldn't have cried wolf when the wolves just wanted to Go See Yamcha. If not, they might have gotten some help when the wolves came back to Make the Donuts.
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