Any general discussion regarding fan-created works of the Dragon Ball franchise, including AMVs, fan-art, fan-fiction, etc.
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Nasseime
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by Nasseime » Wed Oct 30, 2013 5:24 pm
Hello,
I'm happy to present you my Fanmanga
Dragonball Shippuden.
DBS is a crossover between
Naruto and
Dragonball, created in 2008.
It tells the story of Son Goku acidentally stuck in the Naruto universe.
Here are some of my recent pages:
For now, DBS has more than
120 pages and is being updated every
Sunday on
Shindra.
Sorry for my bad grammar, I'm unfortunately not very good in English.
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hulkty
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by hulkty » Wed Oct 30, 2013 6:34 pm
I've seen the whole thing so far. Wish you could release at a faster pace. :/
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Nasseime
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by Nasseime » Thu Oct 31, 2013 7:50 am
I've seen the whole thing so far. Wish you could release at a faster pace. :/
The most important thing for me is quality, not quantity
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Super Vegetto
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by Super Vegetto » Thu Oct 31, 2013 7:54 am
Nasseime wrote:I've seen the whole thing so far. Wish you could release at a faster pace. :/
The most important thing for me is quality, not quantity
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Big Momma
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by Big Momma » Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:41 pm
I'm only a few pages in but I'm loving this!
Rocketman(In response to a post about Pandora's Box) wrote:
I sat here for ten damn minutes wondering what the hell God of War had to do with any of this.
Insertclevername wrote:I plan to lose my virginity to Dragon Box 2.
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Bullza
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by Bullza » Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:52 pm
Interesting I'll give it a read.
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Einstein001
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by Einstein001 » Thu Oct 31, 2013 4:30 pm
Holy... This is so freaking amazing!
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rereboy
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by rereboy » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:25 pm
This is one of the best fan comics I've ever read. Keep up the good work.
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Scarz
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by Scarz » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:39 pm
It looks fantastic and the story seems to be quite good. But since I'm not a fan of Naruto I don't really have a connection to any of the characters besides Goku. I'm not saying that the story is bad, like I've mentioned I think it's quite good. But not being a fan of the show or the manga it's really killing my enjoyment.
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rereboy
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by rereboy » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:55 pm
Scarz wrote:It looks fantastic and the story seems to be quite good. But since I'm not a fan of Naruto I don't really have a connection to any of the characters besides Goku. I'm not saying that the story is bad, like I've mentioned I think it's quite good. But not being a fan of the show or the manga it's really killing my enjoyment.
I'm not really a fan of Naruto but since I've read it that's enough for me to fully enjoy it. Otherwise I would be lost reading this.
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Nasseime
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by Nasseime » Fri Nov 01, 2013 5:04 pm
thank you Big Momma and Bullza it means a lot !
Postby Einstein001 » Thu Oct 31, 2013 10:30 pm
Holy... This is so freaking amazing!
I read your fanmangas (superman/goku and Onepiece/goku) they're good! I'm honored you appreciate DBS.
Postby Scarz » Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:39 pm
It looks fantastic and the story seems to be quite good. But since I'm not a fan of Naruto I don't really have a connection to any of the characters besides Goku. I'm not saying that the story is bad, like I've mentioned I think it's quite good. But not being a fan of the show or the manga it's really killing my enjoyment.
I wish you can enjoy the story even if you don't care about naruto's characters.
Postby rereboy » Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:55 pm
I'm not really a fan of Naruto but since I've read it that's enough for me to fully enjoy it. Otherwise I would be lost reading this.
thank you rereboy, I enjoyed creating it.
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hulkty
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by hulkty » Fri Nov 01, 2013 8:54 pm
Can you explain the Female Goku better? If Itachi could use her all this time, then why isn't he like.....the ruler of Naruto's entire world!? XD
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by Pantalones » Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:35 pm
I'm guessing he used a different type of genjutsu to take advantage of Goku's mindset--make him think he's in a fight with someone equal to him (which he will want to do, and thus be less likely to realize it's genjutsu and break out like he's done before) rather than the usual illusions or "trapped in a world of pain for X amount of time" sorts of things that get used on regular ninja.
So it's all in Goku's head... he didn't actually summon up a female Goku out of some gender-swap universe.
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Nasseime
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by Nasseime » Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:41 am
Post by hulkty » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:54 am
Can you explain the Female Goku better? If Itachi could use her all this time, then why isn't he like.....the ruler of Naruto's entire world!? XD
Sun Goku doesn't actually exist, she's an illusion. In the Naruto universe, this technique is called a Genjutsu.
Post by Pantalones » Sat Nov 02, 2013 4:35 am
I'm guessing he used a different type of genjutsu to take advantage of Goku's mindset--make him think he's in a fight with someone equal to him (which he will want to do, and thus be less likely to realize it's genjutsu and break out like he's done before) rather than the usual illusions or "trapped in a world of pain for X amount of time" sorts of things that get used on regular ninja.
So it's all in Goku's head... he didn't actually summon up a female Goku out of some gender-swap universe.
Exactly
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Godo
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by Godo » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:52 pm
Currently read the 1st chapter and I have to say that I am impressed! The art is nice, as well as the concept! Looking forward to read the rest of the chapters!
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TheGmGoken
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by TheGmGoken » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:02 pm
Awesome 9/10
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by mAcChaos » Sat Nov 02, 2013 9:12 pm
I liked what I saw. Some of chapter 4 is down though.
[i]"I have yet to show you, young warrior, what I'm truly capable of."[/i] - Cell
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by Pantalones » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:18 pm
Yeah, when I read through this a few days back "Page 7 and 8" wasn't working, and neither was "Page 8" after it. The rest seemed to have no problems, though.
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by Drayenko » Sun Nov 03, 2013 4:57 pm
Awesome. Really enjoyable.
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Sshadow5001
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by Sshadow5001 » Sun Nov 03, 2013 7:11 pm
Just read through it all so far. Really enjoying it
