[FanManga] Dragonball Shippuden

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[FanManga] Dragonball Shippuden

Post by Nasseime » Wed Oct 30, 2013 5:24 pm

Hello,
I'm happy to present you my Fanmanga Dragonball Shippuden.
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DBS is a crossover between Naruto and Dragonball, created in 2008.
It tells the story of Son Goku acidentally stuck in the Naruto universe.

Here are some of my recent pages:
For now, DBS has more than 120 pages and is being updated every Sunday on Shindra.

Sorry for my bad grammar, I'm unfortunately not very good in English.
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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by hulkty » Wed Oct 30, 2013 6:34 pm

I've seen the whole thing so far. Wish you could release at a faster pace. :/

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Nasseime » Thu Oct 31, 2013 7:50 am

I've seen the whole thing so far. Wish you could release at a faster pace. :/
The most important thing for me is quality, not quantity

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Super Vegetto » Thu Oct 31, 2013 7:54 am

Nasseime wrote:
I've seen the whole thing so far. Wish you could release at a faster pace. :/
The most important thing for me is quality, not quantity
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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Big Momma » Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:41 pm

I'm only a few pages in but I'm loving this!
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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Bullza » Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:52 pm

Interesting I'll give it a read.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Einstein001 » Thu Oct 31, 2013 4:30 pm

Holy... This is so freaking amazing!
Be sure to check my fan manga :
Son Goku vs Superman: The Clash : http://einstein001.deviantart.com/galle ... -The-Clash

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by rereboy » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:25 pm

This is one of the best fan comics I've ever read. Keep up the good work.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Scarz » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:39 pm

It looks fantastic and the story seems to be quite good. But since I'm not a fan of Naruto I don't really have a connection to any of the characters besides Goku. I'm not saying that the story is bad, like I've mentioned I think it's quite good. But not being a fan of the show or the manga it's really killing my enjoyment.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by rereboy » Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:55 pm

Scarz wrote:It looks fantastic and the story seems to be quite good. But since I'm not a fan of Naruto I don't really have a connection to any of the characters besides Goku. I'm not saying that the story is bad, like I've mentioned I think it's quite good. But not being a fan of the show or the manga it's really killing my enjoyment.
I'm not really a fan of Naruto but since I've read it that's enough for me to fully enjoy it. Otherwise I would be lost reading this.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Nasseime » Fri Nov 01, 2013 5:04 pm

thank you Big Momma and Bullza it means a lot ! :D
Postby Einstein001 » Thu Oct 31, 2013 10:30 pm
Holy... This is so freaking amazing!
I read your fanmangas (superman/goku and Onepiece/goku) they're good! I'm honored you appreciate DBS. :)
Postby Scarz » Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:39 pm
It looks fantastic and the story seems to be quite good. But since I'm not a fan of Naruto I don't really have a connection to any of the characters besides Goku. I'm not saying that the story is bad, like I've mentioned I think it's quite good. But not being a fan of the show or the manga it's really killing my enjoyment.
I wish you can enjoy the story even if you don't care about naruto's characters.
Postby rereboy » Thu Oct 31, 2013 11:55 pm
I'm not really a fan of Naruto but since I've read it that's enough for me to fully enjoy it. Otherwise I would be lost reading this.
thank you rereboy, I enjoyed creating it. :D

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by hulkty » Fri Nov 01, 2013 8:54 pm

Can you explain the Female Goku better? If Itachi could use her all this time, then why isn't he like.....the ruler of Naruto's entire world!? XD

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Pantalones » Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:35 pm

I'm guessing he used a different type of genjutsu to take advantage of Goku's mindset--make him think he's in a fight with someone equal to him (which he will want to do, and thus be less likely to realize it's genjutsu and break out like he's done before) rather than the usual illusions or "trapped in a world of pain for X amount of time" sorts of things that get used on regular ninja.

So it's all in Goku's head... he didn't actually summon up a female Goku out of some gender-swap universe.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

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Post by hulkty » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:54 am
Can you explain the Female Goku better? If Itachi could use her all this time, then why isn't he like.....the ruler of Naruto's entire world!? XD
Sun Goku doesn't actually exist, she's an illusion. In the Naruto universe, this technique is called a Genjutsu.
Post by Pantalones » Sat Nov 02, 2013 4:35 am
I'm guessing he used a different type of genjutsu to take advantage of Goku's mindset--make him think he's in a fight with someone equal to him (which he will want to do, and thus be less likely to realize it's genjutsu and break out like he's done before) rather than the usual illusions or "trapped in a world of pain for X amount of time" sorts of things that get used on regular ninja.

So it's all in Goku's head... he didn't actually summon up a female Goku out of some gender-swap universe.
Exactly :D

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Godo » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:52 pm

Currently read the 1st chapter and I have to say that I am impressed! The art is nice, as well as the concept! Looking forward to read the rest of the chapters!

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by TheGmGoken » Sat Nov 02, 2013 2:02 pm

Awesome 9/10

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by mAcChaos » Sat Nov 02, 2013 9:12 pm

I liked what I saw. Some of chapter 4 is down though.
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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Pantalones » Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:18 pm

Yeah, when I read through this a few days back "Page 7 and 8" wasn't working, and neither was "Page 8" after it. The rest seemed to have no problems, though.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Drayenko » Sun Nov 03, 2013 4:57 pm

Awesome. Really enjoyable.

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Re: [FanManga] Dragonball Shipuuden

Post by Sshadow5001 » Sun Nov 03, 2013 7:11 pm

Just read through it all so far. Really enjoying it :D
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