Dragon Ball LE (The Last Enemy)

[Hellspawn28]

So has anyone seen this fan manga before? I discover it earlier today and I have no idea if it's on going. While the art work is not too bad, I notice some major tracing but I seen much worst. The story seems so unoriginal. Dr. Gero, Dr. Myuu, Dr Raichi and Babidi team up together in Hell to create a super enemy. Why would Dr. Gero team up with Dr. Myuu again when Dr. Myuu turn his back on him in GT? Also it seems like Trunks and Pan got marry 10 years after GT and have a child. Uub and Bra seem to be dating too.



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[jamiljamtheman]

no, I haven't heard of it, but I want to know if there's anything I can search for stuff past the first volume. I may not be able to read it, but it still looks interesting So far "The Last Enemy" returns a mix of random stuff while "Dragon Ball LE" returns mostly french stuff. (Searched on Google).


EDIT: If there is actually nothing past the first volume, forgive me for my ignorance. So far, it seems that's the case

[Hellspawn28]

I just like to see someone translate this into English and see if there is more volumes. Even if this fan manga does suck, I want to see how the rest of it turns out.

[dbzfan7]

Dr. Gero, Dr. Myuu, Dr Raichi and Babidi team up together in Hell to create a super enemy. Why would Dr. Gero team up with Dr. Myuu again when Dr. Myuu turn his back on him in GT. Also it seems like Trunks and Pan got marry 10 years after GT and have a child. Uub and Bulla seem to be dating too.3

Story sounds stupid and incredibly fanfictiony...so perfect to fit the style of current Dragon Ball movies .

Also it seems like Trunks and Pan got marry 10 years after GT and have a child.

Gross.

Uub and Bulla seem to be dating too.

Why? Guess someone is just playing cupid just cause.


Artwork looks cool, everything else sounds stupid....so just like Dragon Ball Multi-verse, but without the fan service.

[DarkPrince_92]

Looks like Young Jiji's work... but not as good.

[Lord Beerus]

So has anyone seen this fan manga before? I discover it earlier today and I have no idea if it's on going. While the art work is not too bad, I notice some major tracing but I seen much worst. The story seems so unoriginal. Dr. Gero, Dr. Myuu, Dr Raichi and Babidi team up together in Hell to create a super enemy. Why would Dr. Gero team up with Dr. Myuu again when Dr. Myuu turn his back on him in GT. Also it seems like Trunks and Pan got marry 10 years after GT and have a child. Uub and Bulla seem to be dating too.

That's where you lost me. I don't approve of tracing in any form, no matter how small. The premise of the story officially killed any form interest I would have in the fan fiction.

Story sounds stupid and incredibly fanfictiony...so perfect to fit the style of all of the Dragon Ball movies .

Fixed it for you.

[Hellspawn28]

I'm not a fan of major villain teams up since they always tend to fail in Dragon Ball. It feels out of character for Dr. Gero to team up with Dr. Myuu again. Dr. Myuu used Super 17 to kill him and I would imagine Dr. Gero would be like "Fuck off" if Myuu asked him to team up again.

[Gyt Kaliba]

I do kind of like the idea of Babidi and a scientist teaming up to make something equally of magic and technology, but since we've already had a Gero/Myuu team up, neither of those scientists really work as well.

[KentalSSJ6]

Jijii has been known to draw covers for other doujin writers. He did one for a story called DBAK



But yeah he hasnt actually drawn LE here, just did cover work.

[FoolsGil]

Also it seems like Trunks and Pan got marry 10 years after GT and have a child.

Gross.

I'm sorry, a thirteen year gap is too much for you to handle? You are aware people with larger age gaps marry in real life right?

As for Dragonball LE...I don't get why so many people like GT so much, or want to continue that story in particular.

[Hellspawn28]

So it looks like only one volume is made so far. Has anyone try to translate the comic into English or know if the author made any volumes pass Vol.1?

[Vidmusc]

I just tried looking into it and I can't find anything on it, which is a shame. I'd love to read this. I'll keep trying to search and see if I can find the author.

[dbzfan7]

Also it seems like Trunks and Pan got marry 10 years after GT and have a child.

Gross.

I'm sorry, a thirteen year gap is too much for you to handle? You are aware people with larger age gaps marry in real life right?

No it's the fact Trunks knew her while she 4 Years old I believe, probably even earlier since I doubt Trunks is as distant to people as Goku. So to end up fucking someone you know while they were a toddler is weird. Also yes I am aware of gaps like these considering my father is gonna marry someone much younger than him. Except he didn't know her since she was a baby or 4 years old, and then proceed to fuck them when they are older. Do you look at a family friends baby and think "Maybe when they're older, and if I have no one, imma date or plow them."

[Gyt Kaliba]

No it's the fact Trunks knew her while she 4 Years old I believe, probably even earlier since I doubt Trunks is as distant to people as Goku. So to end up fucking someone you know while they were a toddler is weird. Also yes I am aware of gaps like these considering my father is gonna marry someone much younger than him. Except he didn't know her since she was a baby or 4 years old, and then proceed to fuck them when they are older. Do you look at a family friends baby and think "Maybe when they're older, and if I have no one, imma date or plow them."

That's making an awful big assumption that Trunks, or anyone else in that situation, would have ever thought that though. If they did, then yeah, it's a little creepy. But sometimes, one can never know what the future will hold. And so long as both are consenting adults, then fictional or real world either one, I fail to see where it's creepy.

But this is all getting off topic anyway.

[dbzfan7]

No it's the fact Trunks knew her while she 4 Years old I believe, probably even earlier since I doubt Trunks is as distant to people as Goku. So to end up fucking someone you know while they were a toddler is weird. Also yes I am aware of gaps like these considering my father is gonna marry someone much younger than him. Except he didn't know her since she was a baby or 4 years old, and then proceed to fuck them when they are older. Do you look at a family friends baby and think "Maybe when they're older, and if I have no one, imma date or plow them."

That's making an awful big assumption that Trunks, or anyone else in that situation, would have ever thought that though. If they did, then yeah, it's a little creepy. But sometimes, one can never know what the future will hold. And so long as both are consenting adults, then fictional or real world either one, I fail to see where it's creepy.

But this is all getting off topic anyway.

The youngest he's known her is 4 years old on panel, before in GT where she's 10. Considering Trunks is not Goku, it's unlikely he hasn't known Pan even earlier than that. Trunks is already an adult before then. Trunks is pretty much her big brother in relation. That's pretty much how it's been. Lovers is just messed up. If anything Oob makes a more sense if they were gonna go in some pairing direction.

I wouldn't say off topic considering this is part of the story apparently.

[Gyt Kaliba]

Oh trust me, I'm not really advocating Trunks x Pan - I'm more of a supporter of the 'idea' (since it pretty much has to be developed in a fan story cuz there's nothing to go with in-series anywhere) of Oob x Pan. I'm just saying I don't really see the 'eww' factor to the level that you are, because to me, again, at the end of the day what two consenting adults (and that's the most important part) decide to do is between them and them alone.

[dbzfan7]

Oh trust me, I'm not really advocating Trunks x Pan - I'm more of a supporter of the 'idea' (since it pretty much has to be developed in a fan story cuz there's nothing to go with in-series anywhere) of Oob x Pan. I'm just saying I don't really see the 'eww' factor to the level that you are, because to me, again, at the end of the day what two consenting adults (and that's the most important part) decide to do is between them and them alone.

I'd see it that way if they didn't know each other, but they have a sorta big brother, lil sis relationship. In GT that is basically how I saw it. Moving from that to intimidate is weird to me. It'd be like if I did it with my babysitter once I was older. Doesn't really matter to me if She's like 30 and I'm 20.

[Hellspawn28]

If LE takes place 10 years after GT then Trunks would be 33 and Pan would be 20. I don't like the of shipping those two because it would make Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. cousins. I don't think Goku's family and Vegeta's family should be connected with each other.

[FoolsGil]

If LE takes place 10 years after GT then Trunks would be 33 and Pan would be 20. I don't like the of shipping those two because it would make Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. cousins. I don't think Goku's family and Vegeta's family should be connected with each other.

Now that's an entirely new can of worms. Shouldn't the families of the last two members of the Saiyan Race unify?

[KentalSSJ6]

If LE takes place 10 years after GT then Trunks would be 33 and Pan would be 20. I don't like the of shipping those two because it would make Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. cousins. I don't think Goku's family and Vegeta's family should be connected with each other.

Now that's an entirely new can of worms. Shouldn't the families of the last two members of the Saiyan Race unify?

If Goku and Vegeta Jr. can go Super Saiyan despite being 1/16 Saiyan, the Son family and Brief family definitely porked at least once.