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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sat Jun 09, 2007 1:26 pm

Hah. That's a lot of text for seven panels.

I have some of it done already, but it'll take a while since I have other stuff to do.

Where did you find this thing, by the way?

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:59 am

Let me just post the first part of this beast. (Well, it's not all that serious. I'm just doing four different things at once. Woot!)

Hildegan on Earth had been eliminated. Tapion, using Bulma's time machine, returned to Planet Conuts a 1000 years in the past. The peaceful Planet Conuts was there, looking how it did before Hildegan had come into existance due to the work of the Madoshi Warlocks.

The first thing Tapion did was dash to the Kami of Planet Conuts. "I have come from the future! If we don't do something, Hildegan will come to be and Planet Conuts will be reduced to ruins! So, before that happens...!"

And the Kami of Planet Conuts answered thusly, "I'm sorry, Tapion of the Future...Although I understand, there is nothing that we can do. The Madoshi Warlocks' magicial powers have already surpassed my own powers..."

"T-That can't be. Then, Hildegan's creation can no longer be stopped...?" Tapion was in despair. There was no point of having come to the past...However, it was then!

"I can give you a helping hand, Kami of Conuts." The Southern Kaio somehow appeared.

"K-Kaio-sama!" The God of Conuts kneeled in trepidation.

"Use that holy sword. I recieved it from Kaioshin-sama, so it's a blessed sword. It will split any Genmajin demon, never even mind Madoshi Warlock, right in two."

"Kaioshin-sama's sword!?" Whether this was his first time, Tapion learned of the existence of the Kaioshin.

"That's right. There is only one condition to master the sword."

"A condition...!?"

"You must become a devote servant to the Gods. If you do not, you will never draw out the true power of that sword."

"What does that mean exactly?"

"It means you must become a priest. If that happens, you will no longer be able to stay on Planet Conuts."

Minoshia's face passes by in Tapion's mind for a split instant. Tapion furrowed his brow firmly as he made his decision. "I understand, sir. I will become a priest."
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Post by Olivier Hague » Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:03 am

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:The Southern Kaioshin somehow appeared.
It's the South Kaiô, actually.

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:44 am

D'oh! I wasn't even paying attention.

Thanks. It's fixed.

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Post by Kaboom » Sun Jun 10, 2007 12:32 pm

Shweet.

So basically, not only did Tapion go back to save his planet 100 years ago, but he's been serving and training with the Kaioshins ever since.
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Post by Dayspring » Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:08 pm

... Does that imply that the monk who fought Hildegarn with Tapion and Minoshia was... Tapion from movie 13? :?

You can't have a paradox in DB time travel! :x
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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Mon Jun 11, 2007 1:33 pm

Actually, yes. The next part details it.

"Heh heh heh. Well, we'll start the ritual." The Southern Kaioshin held out his hand to Tapion and out let a flash.

Shimmer! Tapion appears from the within the light. There weren't any major changes to his appearance. With the execption of one being his orange hair turning purple in color.... "Right, all done. Do your best, Tapion," said the Southern Kaio as he then departed. Thus, Tapion had become a priest.

Immediately after that, something unexpected happened. Planet Conuts was engulfed in tremors and the sounds of explosions. Hildegan has been put into commission. Tapion dashed out of Kami-sama's temple. At the evil temple, with his legendary sword in hand, he lunged at Hildegan directly. However, he was flicked away with a single sweep from Hildegan.

"W-What's the meaning of this...? The legendary sword has no effect?"

Then, the Southern Kaio's voice rang throughout Tapion's mind, "You'll have to stop Hildegan from moving in order to cut through it. Use the flute! There should be two of them that were left before the sword was. They could stop a Genmajin demon from moving."

"I-I know that...but who in the world besides me..."

That is when two brave warriors appeared before his very eyes. It was the Tapion and Minoshia of that time.

"We will do anything if it is to protect this planet."

There stood the him from a 1000 years in the past. Tapion percieved everything at this time. The priest that had cut Hildegan into two by giving himself the legendary flute and sealed it in orgle box was none other than Tapion himself.

"So, this is my destiny, is it?" Tapion made the decision to follow his destiny.

So then, with the cooperation of the two young heroes, Hildegan was sealed up.

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Post by Dayspring » Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:12 pm

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote: "W-What's the meaning of this...? The legendary sword has no effect?"

Then, the Southern Kaio's voice rang throughout Tapion's mind, "You'll have to stop Hildegan from moving in order to cut through it.
Not true, Toyble! What makes Tapion and Minoshia's swords magic is that they can cut Hildegarn without him having to attack them first. That's why Tapion's is magic and Trunks' isn't, despite how the daizenshuu maintains they're the same sword.
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Post by Olivier Hague » Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:29 pm

Dayspring wrote:That's why Tapion's is magic and Trunks' isn't, despite how the daizenshuu maintains they're the same sword.
Of course it shouldn't be the same sword, logically... But isn't it obvious it's meant to be?

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Post by Dayspring » Mon Jun 11, 2007 2:45 pm

Olivier Hague wrote:
Dayspring wrote:That's why Tapion's is magic and Trunks' isn't, despite how the daizenshuu maintains they're the same sword.
Of course it shouldn't be the same sword, logically... But isn't it obvious it's meant to be?
It's obvious that is meant to be, hence why the daizenshuu confirms it is.

As for impossibility, we don't know the circumstances regarding how Mirai Trunks got his sword. If Hoi unlocked Minoshia through his own magic, it's entirely possible he was forced to do so in TL2 since there were no DBs. It would explain why Trunks only gets the sword (to our knowledge) between the ages of 13 and 17 instead of at the age of 7.

As for killing Hildegarn, note that the bottom half of Hildegarn didn't have cities full of millions of people to absorb like in movie 13, so that would mean Hildegarn doesn't transform in TL2. Since that doesn't happen, it's entirely possible that Tapion could seal both halfs into himself or that they succeed in killing Hildegarn using the sword. Anywhere in the process, to explain Tapion's absence later on, Tapion simply dies.
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Post by Olivier Hague » Mon Jun 11, 2007 3:16 pm

Dayspring wrote:As for impossibility, we don't know the circumstances regarding how Mirai Trunks got his sword.
Meh. Sorry, I just don't see the point in trying to actually connect the movies to the main (manga) story... ^^;

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Post by Dayspring » Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:02 pm

Olivier Hague wrote:
Dayspring wrote:As for impossibility, we don't know the circumstances regarding how Mirai Trunks got his sword.
Meh. Sorry, I just don't see the point in trying to actually connect the movies to the main (manga) story... ^^;
Oh, that's what you meant by "shouldn't"... Welp, waste of a post on my part, then. :P
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Post by Kaboom » Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:04 pm

About the sword: just because it's magical/enchanted against demons/monsters such as Hildegarn doesn't necessarily make it enchanted or extraordinarily effective against Androids. Against them, it's probably just a regular sword.
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Post by Dayspring » Mon Jun 11, 2007 4:37 pm

SSj Kaboom wrote:About the sword: just because it's magical/enchanted against demons/monsters such as Hildegarn doesn't necessarily make it enchanted or extraordinarily effective against Androids. Against them, it's probably just a regular sword.
Which is most likely another reason why the daizenshuu says they're the same: the only thing magical about it is that it can cut Hildegarn without Hildegarn being in the process of attacking you.
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Post by desirecampbell » Mon Jun 18, 2007 12:37 pm

So, is that the entirety of that huge page?
Hildegan on Earth had been eliminated. Tapion, using Bulma's time machine, returned to Planet Conuts a 1000 years in the past. The peaceful Planet Conuts was there, looking how it did before Hildegan had come into existance due to the work of the Madoshi Warlocks.

The first thing Tapion did was dash to the Kami of Planet Conuts. "I have come from the future! If we don't do something, Hildegan will come to be and Planet Conuts will be reduced to ruins! So, before that happens...!"

And the Kami of Planet Conuts answered thusly, "I'm sorry, Tapion of the Future...Although I understand, there is nothing that we can do. The Madoshi Warlocks' magicial powers have already surpassed my own powers..."

"T-That can't be. Then, Hildegan's creation can no longer be stopped...?" Tapion was in despair. There was no point of having come to the past...However, it was then!

"I can give you a helping hand, Kami of Conuts." The Southern Kaio somehow appeared.

"K-Kaio-sama!" The God of Conuts kneeled in trepidation.

"Use that holy sword. I recieved it from Kaioshin-sama, so it's a blessed sword. It will split any Genmajin demon, never even mind Madoshi Warlock, right in two."

"Kaioshin-sama's sword!?" Whether this was his first time, Tapion learned of the existence of the Kaioshin.

"That's right. There is only one condition to master the sword."

"A condition...!?"

"You must become a devote servant to the Gods. If you do not, you will never draw out the true power of that sword."

"What does that mean exactly?"

"It means you must become a priest. If that happens, you will no longer be able to stay on Planet Conuts."

Minoshia's face passes by in Tapion's mind for a split instant. Tapion furrowed his brow firmly as he made his decision. "I understand, sir. I will become a priest."

"Heh heh heh. Well, we'll start the ritual." The Southern Kaioshin held out his hand to Tapion and out let a flash.

Shimmer! Tapion appears from the within the light. There weren't any major changes to his appearance. With the execption of one being his orange hair turning purple in color.... "Right, all done. Do your best, Tapion," said the Southern Kaio as he then departed. Thus, Tapion had become a priest.

Immediately after that, something unexpected happened. Planet Conuts was engulfed in tremors and the sounds of explosions. Hildegan has been put into commission. Tapion dashed out of Kami-sama's temple. At the evil temple, with his legendary sword in hand, he lunged at Hildegan directly. However, he was flicked away with a single sweep from Hildegan.

"W-What's the meaning of this...? The legendary sword has no effect?"

Then, the Southern Kaio's voice rang throughout Tapion's mind, "You'll have to stop Hildegan from moving in order to cut through it. Use the flute! There should be two of them that were left before the sword was. They could stop a Genmajin demon from moving."

"I-I know that...but who in the world besides me..."

That is when two brave warriors appeared before his very eyes. It was the Tapion and Minoshia of that time.

"We will do anything if it is to protect this planet."

There stood the him from a 1000 years in the past. Tapion percieved everything at this time. The priest that had cut Hildegan into two by giving himself the legendary flute and sealed it in orgle box was none other than Tapion himself.

"So, this is my destiny, is it?" Tapion made the decision to follow his destiny.

So then, with the cooperation of the two young heroes, Hildegan was sealed up.

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Mon Jun 18, 2007 4:42 pm

No, it's not. It still has more, but I'm busy at the moment, so I can't translate anymore at the moment.

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Post by desirecampbell » Mon Jun 18, 2007 11:06 pm

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:No, it's not. It still has more, but I'm busy at the moment, so I can't translate anymore at the moment.
Ah, okay. No rush, I was just oing to do a re-pack of everything - no hurry.

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Post by ManOfHokuto » Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:58 pm

very cool

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Post by FunkmastaZeph » Wed Jun 20, 2007 11:38 pm

Why is a female Kaioshin Freeza's mom? :shock:

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Post by DaemonCorps » Wed Jun 20, 2007 11:52 pm

desirecampbell wrote:
Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:No, it's not. It still has more, but I'm busy at the moment, so I can't translate anymore at the moment.
Ah, okay. No rush, I was just oing to do a re-pack of everything - no hurry.
Heh, I thought you would have fainted after knowing that there was even more text than that.

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