Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:48 pm

I'd like to say that I'm sorry for taking so long, but I've had a ton of other things to do. A lot of things have come up with the Fall approaching. I'm trying to get other things done without trying to rush through them. So, I don't really know when that page will be done, but I'll try to get it done.

Oh, and here's a quick translation of what that update by Toyable (who I think is female) says. Sugoro is the cat creature...thing in GT. (I have no idea who he is, since I didn't watch much of GT.)

Sorry for neglecting things for so long.
I'm busy in my public and private life...Plus, I haven't been able to read all of One Piece after all. (⌒_⌒;

Oh, but I've taken a look at the comment board.
It worries me, but I'm not able to delete each and every one,
so it's turned into quite the lawless desert and pretty tough to read...
I will sort things out as much as I possibly can after this.

I've picked out the comments I've received and I'm definitely reading them. (or should be, at least...)
So, everyone, I have to thank you all once again for that.

By the way, Sugoro has a way that he talks,
but it was pointed out by someone on the comment board before,
so in realizing it and giving it a checking out,
Goten in the third person is "Goten-san"
and his sentence ender is spoken as "yasu" rather than "yansu."
And I drew it without any doubts in my mind.
Human memories are vague, aren't they? (⌒_⌒;
You saved me big time. Thank you all very much.

The lines will be corrected depending on the next update.
And by the way, next time, the update will be about four pages.

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Post by peterx » Wed Aug 29, 2007 5:29 am

As impressive as always! 8)
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Post by Gaiash » Wed Aug 29, 2007 7:27 am

You've got to love this manga, its a great deal better than most AF stuff you see.
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Post by suomipoika » Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:59 am

that is so f*ckin cool
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Post by desirecampbell » Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:32 pm

Hey - have we ever actually emailed Toyble? To, you know, tell him we love it and are doing a translation?

Also, new parts just showed up, so I'm off to put together a new rig. I'll be able to edit that psd now :P so expect those to be available by the end of the night.

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Post by Kaboom » Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:01 pm

desirecampbell wrote:Hey - have we ever actually emailed Toyble? To, you know, tell him we love it and are doing a translation?
We were talking about it, weren't we? If we haven't, we really should.
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Post by peterx » Fri Aug 31, 2007 1:21 pm

4 new page released, and there is a text CHANGE on the 60th page!! 8)

WHOAA this manga is getting bettter and betttttteer and BETTTER!!!! :D
Piccolo owned Cell and Freeza with a single blow :lol:

Really interesting anyway! Could Piccolo kill Perfect Cell with a single blow at this time? :? He must have trained really well in Hell for this! :)

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Post by Kaboom » Fri Aug 31, 2007 2:14 pm

peterx wrote:Really interesting anyway! Could Piccolo kill Perfect Cell with a single blow at this time? :? He must have trained really well in Hell for this! :)
Well, it has been several decades since Cell died, during which Piccolo's probably continued to train, whereas I doubt Cell (or any of the villains) are capable of increasing their strength in Hell. Piccolo, however, apparently has a job of some sort of managing Hell, so he's probably either capable of fruitfully training while there, or has some sort of advantage over them anyhoo.

But regardless, if Piccolo can train himself to pretty much match a Super Saiyan within 3 years, I see no reason why he couldn't have trained to become stronger than Cell in 20 or so.

EDIT: Ooh, diggin' Goku's new outfit. We needs translations...
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Post by Humpski » Fri Aug 31, 2007 2:36 pm

Does it reveal what happened to Goku after he left with the Dragon?
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Post by Gaiash » Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:26 pm

Humpski wrote:Does it reveal what happened to Goku after he left with the Dragon?
Hasn't got that far yet.
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Post by Metrite » Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:48 pm

Gaiash wrote:
Humpski wrote:Does it reveal what happened to Goku after he left with the Dragon?
Hasn't got that far yet.
Looks like it has, now. So I guess we'll soon see what this person's take on the GT ending was.

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Post by Humpski » Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:46 pm

Metrite wrote:
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Humpski wrote:Does it reveal what happened to Goku after he left with the Dragon?
Hasn't got that far yet.
Looks like it has, now. So I guess we'll soon see what this person's take on the GT ending was.
That doesn't really tell me anything. It just shows him somewhere with Paikuhan. How'd he get there and how did he grow up so fast?
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Post by DaemonCorps » Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:53 pm

Humpski wrote:That doesn't really tell me anything. It just shows him somewhere with Paikuhan. How'd he get there and how did he grow up so fast?
Well, see, there's this whole process of having Tatsunoboshi Horoko translate the text and put it up on the forums here, where desirecampbell then does a little photoshopping to replace the Japanese text in the word bubbles with the appropriate English ones.

Just be patient :D.

And isn't it appropriate that we (at least we think) that toyble's new pages explain where Goku went right after the podcast talks about it?

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Post by desirecampbell » Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:27 am

Looks like there's another "Kaioshinkai" bubble-thing.

Oh, and about getting those psd's done - hahaha, by 'tonight' I obviously meant 'next Wednesday'.

Goddamn processors. Why aren't you glowing and beeping? Then I could find you. Damnit.

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Post by Chuquita » Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:43 am

What little I see of Goku's new gi so far, I'm lovin' it. X3
Can't wait for them to show the whole thing.
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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:52 am

Oni: No, I haven't seen Goku for years now-oni...
Wha?

Piccolo: Let me see that.
Son Goku took his leave from this world...
He shouldn't be in neither this world or the next.

Freeza: Bwa ha ha ha hah! So, here you are, Namekian!

Cell: We're going to dispose of you this time!!

Piccolo: Hah!!

Freeza: Gyah!!

Cell: Gaah!!

Piccolo: Sorry, but I'm kind of busy at the moment. I don't know who you are, but just give it up.

*CLICK*

Suugorou: Kaio-sama, Goku-san wasn't in Hell either-yasu!
They said "He took his leave from this world" or something like that!

Rou Kaioshin: Hmmm...So, he wasn't there either, huh?

Kaioshin: So, Goku-san really is nowhere to be found.

Rou Kaioshin: No...I definitely sensed Goku's soul back then...
There's no doubting that he passed through Hell with Shenlong, but...
Hm? Shenlong? "He took his leave from this world"...?
*Gasp*! Could he have...!!
W-Went to that world...!?

Text: Far above the skies of the Realm of the Kaioshin...
Neither in this world nor the next...
And, a world not in the Realm of the Kaioshin...
There is a world...
whose very existence has gone forgotten.

Paikuhan: Still, I can't believe you chose to come to this world...

Goku: Ain't no helpin' it. After all, it was the only way to save the earth at the time.
And be that as it may, Paikuhan, you're here keepin' me company, ain't you?

Paikuhan: Don't get things mixed up. I only came here because I was asked to by Grand Kaio-sama!

Goku: Well, either way, I'm just grateful to have myself a trainin' partner.
Come on! Let's do some sparrin', Paikuhan!
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Post by caejones » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:59 pm

Heh heh heh, sweet!
So apparently Goku got sent ... to another dimention? *attempts to snicker, but realizes it wasn't funny after all*.
Though we have to wonder how Paikuhan got there so easily?


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Post by Kaboom » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:13 pm

Well, I don't know about the details of where Goku went...

...But when I do the artwork to go along with the epilogue of my fanfic, that is SO going to be Goku's outfit. Or something very similar.
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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:22 pm

This is the dialogue on Page 60 that was changed that Toyable mentioned earlier.

Uh, t-this is the Realm of the Kaioshin-yasu! There's a little something I want to ask-yasu..

What is it-oni?

Well, is Goku-san down there-yasu?

Goku:

*Prick*

Did you say Goku...?

I also noticed that I mistook the gobi "-nyasu" for the character's name the first time. (Damn GT and it's...existence! *shakes fist*)

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Post by DaemonCorps » Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:35 am

Taking a closer look at Goku's new gi, it looks like it's the same outfit that toyble uses for his/her SSJ5 Goku (which in turn is based off of that old SSJ5 pic).

I especially like Goku's ring wrist band things. They remind me of that one Rocko's Modern Life episode where they ask why they're wearing ring things on their shoulders, to which Filb responds " 'cuz it's the future!" But I digress...

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