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by testing223 » Mon Dec 17, 2007 12:35 am
FindKenshi wrote:Please tell me I'm not the only one who noticed that over 80% of the panels in this "fan" manga are ripped either straight out of the Dragonball manga, or from other popular manga, or from freeze frames of the Dragonball Z anime.
Well the original manga tracing was gone over pages ago, but I don't recognize any shots from other series. Or any from the show.
Care to point a few out?
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by testing223 » Mon Dec 17, 2007 12:37 am
oops, dp.
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by peterx » Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:06 pm
After a looong time there is one new page update on Toyble's manga!

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by desirecampbell » Sat Dec 29, 2007 5:52 pm
peterx wrote:After a looong time there is one new page update on Toyble's manga!

Anyone want to try and translate his post? The new page is also larger, perhaps the post explains?
Toyble wrote:未完成…
スイマセン、微妙に未完成ですがアップしちゃいます。
72ページです。
実は明日から1週間出張なんです。
なもんで元旦にも更新できないんです。
それまでになんとか一枚でもと思ったんですが、
間に合わなかったす…。
And as soon as someone can translate the new page, I'll have it up

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by Kendamu » Sat Dec 29, 2007 7:42 pm
Damn. I can only partially translate it. It looks like someone's asking about Paikuhan's whereabouts and he's explaining it over the phone.
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by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sat Dec 29, 2007 8:21 pm
Toyble wrote:Incomplete...
Sorry, it may be subtly incomplete, but I upped it.
Here's page 72.
By the way, I'll be going on a one-week business trip tomorrow.
So, I won't be able to update on New Years either.
I was thinking of managing a single page in the meantime,
but I wasn't able to do it in time....
As for the page:
Page 72:
Text: Planet of the Grand Kaio
Grand Kaio: That he did.
He went with Paikuhan-chan.
Huh? I don't know where they went.
I'm positive that they flew off with some weird dragon.
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by desirecampbell » Sun Dec 30, 2007 2:07 am
Change on the structure of
the releases - every 10 pages is now in its own zip file, other pages are linked below that (so now you don't have to re-download the entire set for every new page).
Pages 71, 72:
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Also, there's some 'extras' from Toyble too. Mostly just character shots, but some have text, if someone wouldn't mind translating these too, that'd be great
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some more info
here maybe.
And some other pages
here.
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by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sun Dec 30, 2007 2:33 am
1st.
Paper: COLORING PAGE Goku: Heya, I'm Goku!
2nd.
Nappa: Freeza-sama! Please give us some time off once in a while...
Freeza: Absolutely not. Back to work with you.
Vegeta: Hmph!
3rd.
At least we can turn into Super Saiyans too!
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by Hero 004 » Sun Dec 30, 2007 3:02 am
Thanks as always, Tatsunoboshi and Desire. What a great picture of the after life warriors.
"Sometimes life is too uncertain to have regrets"- Goku
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by sangofe » Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:55 am
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by DNA » Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:01 am
Dragonball RN sucks ass so badly that I could barf myself non-stop.
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by caejones » Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:17 am
DNA wrote:Dragonball RN sucks ass so badly that I could barf myself non-stop.
I've really got to be more creative with the names I give fanfics... XD
Which... probably means I should go post something somewhere...
(Was the most recent page involving Dai Kaio?

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Dr Gero, in Budokai 2 wrote:Go, my Saiba Rangers!
Akira Toriyama, in Son Goku Densetsu wrote:You really can’t go by rumors (laughs).
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by peterx » Mon Jan 07, 2008 5:30 pm
Again 'two' new pages but this time page 72 is redrawn and comes in the usual size :S

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by desirecampbell » Mon Jan 07, 2008 9:14 pm
peterx wrote:Again 'two' new pages but this time page 72 is redrawn and comes in the usual size :S

Redone page 72 up on the
releases page, ready and waiting for page 73.
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by SSj Gogito » Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:55 pm
I dont like AF stuff, But i have been following this comic for a long time, and it is great, If i were to see a contiuation of DBGT it is This, Hopefully Toei get there hand on it
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by DNA » Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:07 pm
There's only one thing alone I don't like about this manga, that Laila girl. I mean, she's Freeza's mom? That's just plain stupid... and then you have this guy who's her's and Goku's son... yup... pretty stupid.
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by caejones » Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:24 am
DNA wrote:There's only one thing alone I don't like about this manga, that Laila girl. I mean, she's Freeza's mom? That's just plain stupid... and then you have this guy who's her's and Goku's son... yup... pretty stupid.
Maybe. Kaioshin's comments lead me to believe that there's something more interesting to it... but that remains to be seen.
Dr Gero, in Budokai 2 wrote:Go, my Saiba Rangers!
Akira Toriyama, in Son Goku Densetsu wrote:You really can’t go by rumors (laughs).
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by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:56 pm
Page 73
Text: Kaioshin Realm
Old Kaioshin: Give it here.
Grand Kaio! Did they go higher above the Grand Kaio Planet?
Grand Kaio: Huh? Ah...
Yeah, that they did.
Old Kaioshin: Ah-ha! So I was right! I'm convinced now! Goku is there!!
Suugoro: T-Thank you very myach.
Grand Kaio: S-Suugoro-chan, who was that?
Suugoro: Kaioshin-sama-nyasu!
Grand Kaio: K-Kaioshin-sama!?
T-That's the first I've ever talked to him...
The "myach" spelling was intentional, by the way.
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by desirecampbell » Wed Jan 09, 2008 5:16 pm
Hmmm, having a bit of trouble with the speech balloons on page 73. In the third panel, I think the second balloon should have the complete "Yeah... that they did.", but then what goes into the first baloon?