Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

Post by **desirecampbell** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:55 pm

Forgotten Hero wrote:Nice, new stuff. I made a comment of Desire's website about it.

And bubble tea!

Forgotten Hero wrote:Though there is an error on page 115. Xicor says "They'll be no more miracles for you."
Should it be "There will..."
Sorry for the nit pick.

Fixed.

peterx · Post by **peterx** » Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:18 pm

Thx for the new pages!

desirecampbell:

I just uploaded a zip file for you with three AF pages in it! These three were changed/fixed by Toyble not so long ago but your english version uses the old version from those pages.

Link

All three pages has the "NEW" version and the old! If you change between the versions you can clearly see the differenes

Please fix these too in the english version! Thx!

Post by **Herms** » Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:26 am

Forgotten Hero wrote:Though there is an error on page 115. Xicor says "They'll be no more miracles for you."
Should it be "There will..."

Somewhat pathetically, I originally had that as "They're be no more miracles for you", then "corrected" it to "they'll".

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 1:18 am

Herms wrote: Somewhat pathetically, I originally had that as "They're be no more miracles for you", then "corrected" it to "they'll".

Pathetically? I wasn't scornful was I? Sorry if I sound uneducated.

desirecampbell wrote:And bubble tea!

Bubble Tea rocks!

Post by **Herms** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 1:58 am

Forgotten Hero wrote:
Herms wrote: Somewhat pathetically, I originally had that as "They're be no more miracles for you", then "corrected" it to "they'll".
Pathetically? I wasn't scornful was I? Sorry if I sound uneducated.

What I meant was that it was pathetic that I "corrected" the wording from one incorrect word to a different incorrect one (perhaps I should have have said "ironically, I originally had that as..."). I wasn't saying anything bad about you at all, and I'm glad you pointed out my mistake.

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Fri Nov 28, 2008 4:04 am

Herms wrote:115
Panel 1
Xicor: [l] Ba…bastards [r] I didn't die, but I'm getting there gradually [there's got to be a better way to phrase that]

West Kaioshin: [l]Hmph [r] Having trouble with guys of this level.
Panel 6

”死に損ないが、ちょろちょろと” is probably better phrased as "You half-dead fools are coming in twos and threes [in trickles.]"

I'd probably rephrase that last line to: "To imagine, him having trouble with these weaklings..." But, that's just me.

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:54 am

A better way to say indeed, but I'm fine with the phrase.

Dave SSJ4 · Post by **Dave SSJ4** » Sat Nov 29, 2008 4:16 am

New colored pages:
http://www.speedyshare.com/861852487.html

Forgotten Hero · Post by **Forgotten Hero** » Sat Nov 29, 2008 4:21 am

I can't read the language, but thanks!

Color is nice!

Saiyan-Professor · Post by **Saiyan-Professor** » Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:14 pm

JulieYBM wrote:I'm betting Broli/Pan/Goten might not appear. Toyble's plans might have changed.

He already had produced pages depicting that they will eventually show up.

Also, must you call Gohan an idiot? Your entire attitude towards he, his brother, and Trunks is silly. It's a fiction, to go out of your way to say such things is mind-boggling, to be frank. Espicially with the use of Son Gokû's Saiyan name…

As long as there are fans out there that think the Son family, especially Son Gohan is super cool awesome and can beat Jesus if they fought I will call them idiots.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:20 pm

Saiyan-Professor wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:I'm betting Broli/Pan/Goten might not appear. Toyble's plans might have changed.
He already had produced pages depicting that they will eventually show up.

Also, must you call Gohan an idiot? Your entire attitude towards he, his brother, and Trunks is silly. It's a fiction, to go out of your way to say such things is mind-boggling, to be frank. Espicially with the use of Son Gokû's Saiyan name…
As long as there are fans out there that think the Son family, especially Son Gohan is super cool awesome and can beat Jesus if they fought I will call them idiots.

Which is why I said his plans may have changed sense they were produced.

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 1:58 pm

New page and info!

Post by **Herms** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:40 pm

The picture of Tarble and Gure is going to be used on the inside fold of volume 2. Toyble notes his dislike of painting and says applying toner is a pain too, but fortunately Toriyama didn’t use toner too much. Volume 2 will be done soon, in time for Comike. Though it’s just one page, this will be the last update of the year.

I think I'll let Tatsunoboshi Horoko translate the new page. It looks like a real all-nighter, that one.

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:44 pm

I think you mean "tone" (screentone.) Unless Toyable is a human printer or something

Xicor: !!

Night, folks! *dances off stage*

Post by **Herms** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:55 pm

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:I think you mean "tone" (screentone.) Unless Toyable is a human printer or something :P

I actually thought screentone was called toner. Huh.

Tekkaman-James · Post by **Tekkaman-James** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:57 pm

I always heard it referred to as Zip Tone. In addition, the filter to imitate this effect in Photoshop is called Half Tone. Hmm...

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:21 pm

Now, just have to wait for Desire to get his copy up and shazam, I'll have many more pages...er...

Herms, you're still going to hit up Toyble at that con, right?

Post by **Herms** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:24 pm

JulieYBM wrote:Herms, you're still going to hit up Toyble at that con, right?

I'm actually going to be home for my Christmas break while it's going on...

JulieYBM · Post by **JulieYBM** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:32 pm

Herms wrote:
JulieYBM wrote:Herms, you're still going to hit up Toyble at that con, right?
I'm actually going to be home for my Christmas break while it's going on...

Ah well.

Ho, ho, ho!!

Tatsunoboshi Horoko · Post by **Tatsunoboshi Horoko** » Sat Dec 06, 2008 4:01 pm

Herms wrote:
Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:I think you mean "tone" (screentone.) Unless Toyable is a human printer or something
I actually thought screentone was called toner. Huh.

I've never really heard it referred to as such. (Unless when referring to a separate person applying the screentones, or something.)

Kanzenshuu

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