Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

[Shiini]

Hm? I'm not familiar with that one. That's Goten's girlfriend, right? Why should it be "Paris" specifically?

I'm pretty sure that that's her name, from GT.

It's パレス = Paresu, romanized as Palace by Toyble.

[Dayspring]

I think it should be "Paris" as well. If it were meant to be "Palace" than her name would more likely have been written as Parasu. Although the argument of Parisu for Paris can be made, Parisu would force the pronunciation of "Pareece."

[Kaboom]

I dunno about you guys, but I kinda prefer her dub name, "Valese."

"Paris" only brings to mind a certain hotel-named, hollywood bimbo with the IQ of a lobotomized trout.

EDIT: Then again, Goten's girlfriend ain't that bright herself...

[Shiini]

Prounonciation of the "A" in English, like in the word "a palace" equals the character エ in Japanese = A in English = É in French, and not as the イ in Japanese = EE in English = I in French.

So it's Paresu, as I said before. Pares, because we do not prounonce the u at the end. In French, it's sounds like Paresse (meaning Laziness), and in English, a Palace, and not Paris, I insist.

Anyway, the romanization of names is always difficult. But Toyble gave us the romanzation of the name as Palace, so we're fixed.

[TripleRach]

I think it should be "Paris" as well. If it were meant to be "Palace" than her name would more likely have been written as Parasu. Although the argument of Parisu for Paris can be made, Parisu would force the pronunciation of "Pareece."

But her name is パレス Paresu in Japanese, and that's exactly how the Japanese approximate the word "palace". (Examples on Alc.) It's as simple as Piccolo or Trunks.

Paris like the city is パリ Pari, based on the French pronunciation, and Paris as in names like Hilton or the Trojan prince are パリス Parisu.

[Dayspring]

I dunno about you guys, but I kinda prefer her dub name, "Valese."

"Paris" only brings to mind a certain hotel-named, hollywood bimbo with the IQ of a lobotomized trout.

EDIT: Then again, Goten's girlfriend ain't that bright herself...

Hmmm... Was Paris Hilton already a world famous dumbass back in '96? I think Paresu was merely named after the same city and for the same reasons as Hilton was.

EDIT: Nevermind. Rach ends this discussion.

[Kaboom]

In my humble opinion, "Palace" doesn't make a very good name.

[Dayspring]

In my humble opinion, "Palace" doesn't make a very good name.

But "Trunks," "Piccolo" and a slew of other random names do?

She likes to be pampered like a princess. Princesses live in palaces. Personally I'd go with "Princess" as a name, therefore, but palace fits as a pun-name too.

[Kaboom]

Meh, guess you're right.

I'm intrigued because Palace/Paris/Valese has a bit larger role in my FanFic, and I'm trying to solidly figure out what to call her...

[Dayspring]

Meh, guess you're right.

I'm intrigued because Palace/Paris/Valese has a bit larger role in my FanFic, and I'm trying to solidly figure out what to call her...

"Valese"... How odd that someone who is basically Goten's baggage gets named after a type of bag in the dub.

[Olivier Hague]

She likes to be pampered like a princess. Princesses live in palaces.

Or it's because "goten", written with different kanji (御殿) means "palace".

[Dayspring]

She likes to be pampered like a princess. Princesses live in palaces.

Or it's because "goten", written with different kanji (御殿) means "palace".

Nah. Too convenient.

[Kaboom]

She likes to be pampered like a princess. Princesses live in palaces.

Or it's because "goten", written with different kanji (御殿) means "palace".

By Dende, I think the boy's decided it!

[desirecampbell]

I thought that Daimao subbed her name as 'Paris' I don't really know, I've not seen much GT, and nothing subbed (by Steve, or otherwise).

Current script:

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Time traces back a bit directly after Son Goku, who had awakened his Super Saiyan, defeated Freeza, Ruler of the Entire Universe, on the distant Planet Namek.

While he received Goku’s final attack, Freeza barely managed to survive…

Ship Hand: We’ve found Freeza-sama!
Cold Daio-sama!!

King Cold: Freeza!!
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How could this be!?
To a mere Saiyan…!?

Freeza: It hurts. Papa, Mama…
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Lila: Hmph.

King Cold: I will definitely exact revenge for him!

Cooler: M-Mother!
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F-Freeza!
He's alive?!

Lila: I have no idea about that near-dead fool.
I no longer need a son who is not the best in the universe!
Prepare a ship immediately!

Ship Hand: Huh? Oh, yes ma’am!

Lila: The Saiyan who brought down Freeza that far named “Son Goku”…
Just what kind of man is he?

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I want to know! He will become my key to universal conquest!
I must reach contact with him before Cold and the others do!
Hurry up and get it ready! I am leaving immediately!!

Ship Hand: C-Certainly!
Lila-sama!!

And now, several decades’ time has passed.
A crisis unlike any before it has drawn near the peaceful Earth.
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---DRAGONBALL AF---
(Toyble)

Chapter 1 – Former Warriors in the Future
Everyone has been waiting for you…
Dragonball’s new adventure has started!!

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Until now, the Earth’s fighters, including Son Goku, have protected the world from Cell and Majin Boo’s attacks...

From then on, while the earth faced a countless number of threats, on each occasion,

Goku and the others would repeatedly develop and save the world.

And then, finishing his task at last, Son Goku disappeared from the world of the living with Shenlong.

The Earth was deprived of both Goku and the Dragonballs…However, the world had obtained peace in return...

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Page 8

This is the college in Satan City...
Orange Star University

Gohan: R-Right, the academic conference tomorrow!
Gohan: I’m a little indisposed at the moment...!
Woman: E-Excuse me...
Woman: Professor...?
Gohan: You see...about that.
Woman: Professor Son!!
Gohan: Could we handle this later?
Gohan: Oh—Sorry about that!
Woman: Um, well, it’s already time for your lecture...
Gohan: Ah... (*Nudge*) (*Stagger*)

Page 9

Woman: Eeeek!!
Gohan: !?
Gohan: Urk...
Woman: Pro-Professor!!
Gohan: T-The lecture...
Gohan: I had forgotten.
Gohan: I sure wish I could focus solely on my research.
Gohan: But that’d be impossible...I’m the only one in the family that works...
Gohan: Right then, let’s begin.


Page 10

Gohan: ...As can be seen above, since the habitat of the seven-colored wart frog are few and far between...
Boy: Hey, did you see yesterday’s news?
Goten: I saw! I saw!
Goten: It was about an alien being caught at Satan Rock, wasn’t it?
Boy: It sure was! Cool, isn’t it?
Girl: You know what, this is what I heard...
Girl: I heard that alien is really...
Girl: a shaven ape!
Goten + Boy: For real—!!!?

Page 11

Gohan: ...
Boy: Hey, let’s go check it out after this!
Goten: Sounds good!
Goten: Come with us, Paris-chan!
Paris: An ape?


This is an emergency broadcast!
A robbery has occured in Key Bird Town!
I will repeat. Those in Key Bird Town...
and those nearby, excerise extreme caution!

Paris: I’ve never seen an ape!
Goten: Uh...well, we’re going to check if there is an ape or not!

Page 12:

Paris: Hmm...I hope that it is an ape.
Boy: O-Only Paris would rather it be an ape if anything else...
Gohan: Goten! Goten!
Goten: Well, either way is fine. In any case, I’m looking forward to it...
Gohan: Goten!!
Goten: W-What?
Gohan: Didn’t you just hear the broadcast? Get going already!!
Goten: No way! I’m busy today!
Gohan: I don’t see how going to see an ape is busy. I’ll cut your allowance!
Goten: Y-You wouldn’t....

Page 13
Plane: (*Zip*)
Goten: Unlike my brother, I don’t happen to like anything troublesome...
Goten: ...All right. Transform!
Watch: (*Beep*)
Goten: Great Saiyaman #3!!
Goten: Now! Where are you, villans!? (*Vip*)


Page 15

Boy: Well, I’ll be. That Goten is rarin’ to go.
Paris: Goten-sama is so cool!
Girl: ...!!
Goten: Here it is...
Pilaf: Hey! Stay back if you value this girl’s life!
People: ...!!
Pilaf: Damn it...Why are we doing this...?
Mai: It can’t be helped, Pilaf-sama. We’ve spent too much money on developing combat machines, we don’t have any left for any living expenses!
Shû: ...Yes...we’ve hit rock bottom...


Page 15
*Land*
Goten: Hey, villans! Prepare yourself! The Great Saiyaman #3 is...
Goten: Heee!!
Guy: It’s Papayaman!!
Pilaf: Hm!?
Old Man: Papayaman has arrived!
Man: Look! Papayaman!
Oob: Everyone, please step aside!
Goten: Uh...Oob-kun?
*Land*


Page 16

Oob: Now, villans! Come and get it!
Pilaf: G-Get him!!
*Voom*
*Crack*


Page 17
*Crack*
*Dead Silence* *Step*
Girl: Mama!
Guy: Attaboy, Papayaman!
Woman: You’re the best, Papayaman!
Goten: U-um, just where do I stand in this...?
(Rustling)
Goten: !?

Latest Edition
Super Hero Rankings
1. Papayaman
2. Mister Satan
3. Original Great Saiyaman
4. Great Saiyaman #2
5. Savings Warrior Cashman


Page 18
21st: Katsukazan
22nd: Kirano
23rd: Beelzebub
24th: Neko Majin Z
25th: Captain Chicken
26th: Kajika
27th: Mighty Mask
29th: Tocchio
30th: Panputt
31st: Oribu
32nd: Karoni
33rd: Toybleman

99th: Pete Kobayashi
100st: Great Saiyaman #3
Unranked: Suppaman

Goten: O-One hundredth!?
Goten: I knew it would be a shock...
Goten: Whatever. I’m going home...

Page 19

Hyoooooo....
Grm grm grm grm grm...
Shooooo...

Page 20

*Step*
Xicor: So this is Earth...where Father is from...
Laila: Yes, it is. The time to fulfill our parent-child ambitions has finally come.
Xicor: Heh heh heh.
Xicor: I, Xicor, am the heir of my father, Son Goku, the mightiest in the universe!!

Page 21

Xicor: Hm?
*Vmmm*
Goten: I wish that Oob would use a little courtesy...
Laila: We’ve already found you...
Laila: Son Goten!!

Page 22

Goten: Oh, man...
Goten: I wonder if everyone already went home...
(Shoop) (Glare)
Goten: Gaaah!!
Goten: W-Who are you!?
Xicor: Are you Son Goten...?
Goten: I’m not! (Fit)
Goten: I am the Great Saiyaman...

Page 23

(Shh...)
Xicor: Die!
Goten: !!
(Shiiine)

Page 24
(Kaaadoo...m)
Gohan: G-Goten!?
Gohan: W-What is the deal with this ridiculously large ki!?

Page 25

(Grm grm grm grm grm grm)
Man: W-What is this...!?
Random People: Aaah! Aaah!
Old Man: I-It’s an earthquake!!
(Crk crk crk crk...)
Child: Master, what is this!?
Lunch: Gaah!
Chaozu: Ten-san, that ki is incredible!!
Tenshinhan: Ghh...What is this? What has started?

Page 26

(Wshoooo...)
Goten: Aa...aagg...ggff...
Xicor: Hmph, so he’s still alive...
Laila: !? Someone’s coming!!
Gohan: Goten!!
(Bbmm)

Page 27

Gohan: Goten!! (Zzzmph)
Goten: Grgh!!
Laila: Good...it’s Son Gohan.
Gohan: A-Are you okay?!
Goten: B-Big bro...
Gohan: Grr!! (Tck)
Gohan: Was it you that did this?!
Gohan: Who are you?!
Xicor: So you’re Son Gohan...
Xicor: Heh...Why do you have such pathetic energy?

Page 28
Gohan: I’m asking you who you are!!
Xicor: Me? Why, I’m your little brother!
Gohan: W-What!?
Gohan: L-Little brother...? Who are you trying to fool...
Gohan: Listen up! The only little brother I have is Goten here!!
Xicor: Hah, hah, hah! You two do indeed have a strain of these pathetic Earthlings in your blood, don’t you...
Trunks: Gohan-san!! (Bbmmp)
Gohan: Trunks...
Gohan: Vegeta-san!
Xicor: Even more of them, huh...?
Xicor: Saiyans, that is.

Page 29:

Vegeta: So he’s the one who beat Goten...
Gohan: ...Yes.
Trunks: G-Goten...
Gohan: W-What does this all mean?
Xicor: I have the ultimate body that possesses the genes of both the strongest warrior and deity in the universe...
Xicor: I am Xicor!
Gohan: The strongest warrior in the universe!? ...Deity!?
Gohan: What are you talking about?!
Laila: Allow me to explain. (Zip)
Gohan + Vegeta: !!

Page 30

Gohan: Ghh!!
Gohan: Are you on our side!?
Gohan: When did you get there!?
Vegeta: ...!!
Laila: Xicor’s father is, Son Goku, the same as yours...but it's only your mothers that are different...
Laila: I, a goddess, am his mother!
Gohan: Wha!?
Gohan: You expect us to believe that...?!

Page 31

Laila: Hmph! (Fpp)
Gohan: Sh...
Gohan: She’s gone!!
Laila: I’m here, fools. (Vpp)
Gohan: I-Instantaneous Movement...?
Vegeta: Hey! You’re both speaking gibberish!
Vegeta: What’s your objective? What did you come to Earth for?!
Xicor: Objective? That’s simple. I am the heir to Son Goku, who boasted the most power in the entire universe!
Xicor: I will rule the universe in my father’s stead. It won't be any of you.

Page 32

Gohan: H-Hey! Have you made some sort of mistake!?
Gohan: Father was strong, but he doesn’t rule the universe!! And we don’t plan on ruling it either!
Laila: Hmph, such barefaced lies...
Laila: Xicor, don’t be swayed by them. Kill them and you will become ruler of the universe.
Gohan: Ghh...
Xicor: Heh...
Gohan: W-Whatever the case, get lost!!
Gohan: You guys don’t belong here!!

Xicor: Heh heh heh... (Bmmmm)
(Zbmmm)
Gohan: !!

Page 34

(Shiing)
(K-bm bm bm...)
Vegeta: O-Oh no!!
Gohan/Trunks: Aaaaaaah...!!
Group: The... (Wooooosh....)
Group: The land got plowed over!!

Page 35

Gohan: W-What are you doing?!
Xicor: Is it important?
Xicor: The Earth which you’ve spent your time with father with, that is...
Gohan: W-Why you!!
Xicor: I’m going to make you all disappear.
Xicor: Both you...and this planet...

Page 36

Gohan: Grr...!!
(Shh...)
Gohan: !?
Vegeta: Hey...I’ve been listening to you for a while about who’s the strongest in the universe.
Vegeta: You’d better listen up! I’m going to teach you who’s really the strongest warrior in the universe, right now!!
Vegeta: Haaa!! (Doomm)

Page 37

Gohan: Wait!
Gohan: Vegeta-san!!
Xicor: Oh-ho...
Xicor: So you’re Vegeta, are you...?
Vegeta: Daaaah!!
(Wapaaam)

Page 38

(Grin)
Vegeta: Ghh!!
(Zuzaza) (Tmp)
Vegeta: Tsaaah!! (Gaaah)

Page 39
(Grab)
Vegeta: !!
(Pull)
Vegeta: Gaaaaaaah!!
Xicor: Haah!!
(Wham)

Page 40

Gohan/Trunks: !!
Vegeta: Gh...
Vegeta: Ghhah...!!
(Stagger)
Xicor: Whoa there! (Grab)
(Pull)
Xicor: You’re this bad with just a single punch?
Xicor: Your royal blood weeps, Vegeta.

Page 41
Trunks: F-Father!!
Gohan: D-Damn it!! (Rustle)
Trunks: Gohan-san, I’ll join you...!! (Rustle)
Gohan: Trunks!
Gohan: You take Goten and get out of here!!
(CRAK)
Gohan: !!?
Trunks: Aaah!!

Page 42
Vegeta: Gffh...!!
Xicor: Hah!! (Shaa)
(Swiiish)
Xicor: May the entire Earth be gone! Vegeta!!
Gohan: N-Not good!!

Page 43:
Gohan: Haaaaaaaaaa.... (Grm grm grm grm grm)
Trunks: !!
Trunks: A-A tail!?
Trunks: Impossible!!
Gohan: Daaah!! (Doomm)
(Shine)


Gohan: Gaaaah!!
Haah!!
Huff... Huff...

Trunks: Even Gohan-san...turned into a Super Saiyan 4?!

Xicor: Hah!

Vegeta: Ghah...Cough...
Gaa!!

Xicor: Hurry up and come at me, Son Gohan. Or do you plan on watching from there until this one dies?


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Xicor: Ha ha ha ha ha!

Vegeta: Gaaaaaah!!

Gohan: You bastard!

Trunks: Stop it!!

Gohan: Trunks!

Xicor: Heh!

Trunks: Urk!!

Gohan: Stop, you dummy!

Trunks: Gh...Ghurk...

Xicor: Hmph...You're a Saiyan too? If you are, you're pathetic. You're too weak. Make haste and be gone!

Trunks: Wai--

Gohan: Daaaaaaaaah!!

[Tatsunoboshi Horoko]

She likes to be pampered like a princess. Princesses live in palaces.

Or it's because "goten", written with different kanji (御殿) means "palace".

This was the same exact logic I was following when I wrote the name as Palace. (I didn't even know that picture a few posts up even existed O_o)

[BrollysKin]

Guys, thanks so much for the translations. I would hope at some point they will be inserted into the caption bubbles themselves.

Didn't someone write to the person who is drawing this?

[desirecampbell]

Guys, thanks so much for the translations. I would hope at some point they will be inserted into the caption bubbles themselves.

Didn't someone write to the person who is drawing this?

Wha -buga -kabwa

Noone remember me

[BrollysKin]

Yes I do, you have done an amazing job. I just wasn't sure if you put it into the manga itself yet. Many apologies. When do you forsee this being done?

[desirecampbell]

Yes I do, you have done an amazing job. I just wasn't sure if you put it into the manga itself yet. Many apologies. When do you forsee this being done?

I've done the first 20 pages so far, which should be three or five pages back, and I'm going to start from scratch again, and do all 51 pages starting about midnight Friday and I won't stop until it's done. (I expect it to take several hours).


-edit-
I was going to quote my last post with the old pages, but that's almost like work, so fuck that. Here's a zip:

http://desirecampbell.com/toyble_DBAF_01-20.zip


-edit-
Anyway, does anyone know what Palace/Paris' name is supposed to be? 'Palace' sounds like the best choice, but I could swear Daimao subs it as 'Paris'. Can anyone confirm that?

[Shiini]

Anyway, does anyone know what Palace/Paris' name is supposed to be? 'Palace' sounds like the best choice, but I could swear Daimao subs it as 'Paris'. Can anyone confirm that?

We've fully described the japanese phonetic situation a few posts before. Please, take some time to read.