Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by Kaboom » Wed May 30, 2007 11:13 am

Shiini wrote:
desirecampbell wrote:Anyway, does anyone know what Palace/Paris' name is supposed to be? 'Palace' sounds like the best choice, but I could swear Daimao subs it as 'Paris'. Can anyone confirm that?
We've fully described the japanese phonetic situation a few posts before. Please, take some time to read.
I think here he's asking specifically how Daimao subs it. I'm curious about that, too.
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Post by desirecampbell » Wed May 30, 2007 9:04 pm

I can see that 'Palace' is probably the best translation - the only thing that's stopping me from endorsing it fully is that I have this weird feeling that Daimao translates it as 'Paris'. I mean, I could be wrong about that, Daimao might sub it as 'Palace' too, in which case there's absolutely no reason I shouldn't use 'Palace'. But if he does use 'Paris', then that's something to consider as well: did he just not know about the Goten/Goten thing? Or did he have some reason to use Paris 'instead'?

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Post by BrollysKin » Thu May 31, 2007 12:23 am

This person claims they created the manga.


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Post by Daimao » Thu May 31, 2007 12:26 am

Olivier Hague wrote:Or it's because "goten", written with different kanji (御殿) means "palace".
This.

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Post by desirecampbell » Thu May 31, 2007 12:32 am

Daimao wrote:
Olivier Hague wrote:Or it's because "goten", written with different kanji (御殿) means "palace".
This.
Well, that settles it :P

Where the hell did I come up with 'Paris' from then? Fuck!

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Post by desirecampbell » Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:53 pm

Okay - ETA to me opening Photoshop: 5 minutes (a reboot now, for luck). If anyone had any further input send it in as quickly as possible so I don't have to re-do some pages.

So, I'll use the script as it is now for all the pages, it'll be 'Palace', 'Lila', and 'Xicor', and pages will be scaled up to 1200px high. Is that good for everyone?

I'll update here as I finish every 10 pages or so.

Wish me luck :D

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Post by desirecampbell » Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:49 am

Okie dokie - so 'updating here' didn't exactly happen, but it's done now! :D

-edit- updated, bitches -/edit-

You can get the full psd, rar'd up (16.6 MB) too, if you're into that kind of thing :P (warning: opening this file may use four hundred MB of system memory. My machine crashed twice working on it before I moved to a new one.)


-edit-
Oh my fuck. Fuck me in the ass. New pages. Six of 'em. Who wants to start translating those? *faints*
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Post by fps_anth » Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:32 am

desirecampbell wrote:Okie dokie - so 'updating here' didn't exactly happen, but it's done now! :D

You can download the .zip file (24.3 MB) here. And share and share alike.

You can get the full psd, rar'd up (16.6 MB) too, if you're into that kind of thing :P (warning: opening this file may use four hundred MB of system memory. My machine crashed twice working on it before I moved to a new one.)


-edit-
Oh my fuck. Fuck me in the ass. New pages. Six of 'em. Who wants to start translating those? *faints*
Get to work mother fucker. :lol:

Kidding. The ones you did are great. As for the new pages, they look very interesting. Is that Minoshia or Tapion doing pushups with the "heaviest substance in the universe" on his foot? Unique!

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:59 am

Gohan: Haaa!!

Xicor: Haa!!
So, you finally feel like fighting, do you, Son Gohan?
Come and get some...
I'm going to kill you.

Gohan: Haaa!!

Xicor: Let me tell you right now that I'm not here to enjoy a battle.
I won't be pulling any punches.

Lila: Heh heh heh...
This is perfect!

Kaioshin: I-Is that's...
W-West Kaioshin?

[Realm of the Kaioshin]

Kaioshin: A-
Ancenstor-sama!!

Old Kaioshin: A Kaioshin must never forget the power of concentration.
You must concentrate.

Tapion: Ggh!

Kaioshin: Ancenstor-sama!
Th-There's a situation!

Both: Ah!

Tapion: Gyaah!
F-Forgive me!

Kaioshin: A-Are you all right?

Old Kaioshin: Are you trying to kill me...
You dumbasses...
What!? The West Kaioshin, you say?

Kaioshin: ...Yes, sir. There's no doubt about it.

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Post by Kaboom » Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:01 pm

Sweet, Tapion's back. And getting training from the Kaioshins, no less.
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Post by DaemonCorps » Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:20 pm

Finally, toyble brings up the whole West Kaioshin thing!

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Post by caejones » Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:42 pm

Is it just me, or did the plot stop sucking for a few glorious moments? :D
Interested to see where this goes now that... umm... it'sg oing somewhere!
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Post by fps_anth » Sat Jun 02, 2007 8:07 pm

Sounds interesting. I was wondering how West Kaioshin just kinda showed up like that.

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Post by Xell » Sun Jun 03, 2007 2:24 pm

I decided to do 52-57 to save desirecampbell the effort.

Big Thanks to:

Tatsunoboshi Horoko for translating.
desirecampbell for doing the other 51 pages.

^_^

Toyble's DBAF Pages 52-57 Translated

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Post by sangofe » Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:55 pm

Awesome. I can't get enough of DBAF ;O

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Post by Kay » Wed Jun 06, 2007 9:52 pm

Can you upload it as a .zip file? Thanks.

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Post by Sebastian (SB) » Thu Jun 07, 2007 1:02 am

caejones wrote:Is it just me, or did the plot stop sucking for a few glorious moments? :D
Interested to see where this goes now that... umm... it'sg oing somewhere!
I have to agree. I love how toyble takes all references from Toriyama's (& even Toei's) works on the DB series, & them makes his own story out of it.
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Post by Shiini » Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:56 pm

How and when Tapion end up on the Kaiôshinkai, by Toyble :

http://image.blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/I'm ... id=1561384

I PMed Tatsunoboshi Horoko. :wink:

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Post by desirecampbell » Sat Jun 09, 2007 10:51 am

Xell wrote:I decided to do 52-57 to save desirecampbell the effort.
Big Thanks to:

Tatsunoboshi Horoko for translating.
desirecampbell for doing the other 51 pages.
^_^
Toyble's DBAF Pages 52-57 Translated
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Sweet. I've been without the Internet since I uploaded those last pages, finally scammed some access today (to check on those daizenshuu on eBay) and thought Id check if anyone translated the pages yet.

And they're done already, yay! :D

When I get hooked up properly, I'll mirror the new pages too :)
Shiini wrote:How and when Tapion end up on the Kaiôshinkai, by Toyble :

http://image.blog.livedoor.jp/toyble/I'm ... id=1561384

I PMed Tatsunoboshi Horoko. :wink:
*faints*

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Post by caejones » Sat Jun 09, 2007 12:51 pm

Does this fit into the AF story somehow (Flashback?), or is it something extra to explain things (AF TV Special~!)?
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