Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by peterx » Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:56 pm

One more new page available! :wink:

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Post by DaemonCorps » Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:40 pm

peterx wrote:One more new page available! :wink:
Yay! It looks like toyble referred to that final chapter cover from the manga for that page. Nonetheless, it looks pretty awesome, with Goku decked out in his new training garb.

Poor Paikuhan. Looks like he's second banana to Goku even in a new universe.

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Post by Chuquita » Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:45 pm

Goku's new gi looks cool. :3

That one upper-arm band looks a little too much like garter for me o_O;;;
But other than that, yeah, nice stuff.
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Post by Kaboom » Fri Sep 28, 2007 8:02 pm

Chuquita wrote:Goku's new gi looks cool. :3
I know. I'm gonna color this page. The outfit's pretty much the one form that infamous SSj5 picture, right? I oughta track it down for reference...
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Post by Hasaki » Sat Sep 29, 2007 9:41 am

This is a good thread to post my 1st post :) , anyways that guy is doing an awesome job on those DBAF drawings, after seeing his work its influencing me to resume my DB sidestory manga.

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Post by peterx » Thu Oct 04, 2007 11:44 am

SIX! new page released? :shock: :D

Umm, Goku already transforms into SSJ5 for that second? :o

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Thu Oct 04, 2007 4:24 pm

Aah, a bunch of 'grunt' panels. Good. Less work for me!

CHAPTER 2: ANOTHER WORLD

Paikuhan: For crying out loud...Just how strong do you have to get,
until you're satisfied?

Goku: Come and bring it!

Paikuhan: Hmph! I won't get beaten over and over like that!

Paikuhan: Haah!!

Goku: Guh!!

Paikuhan: Daaaah!!

Goku: Tch!

Goku: Deh!

Paikuhan: Daah!

Goku: Guugh!

Goku: Haaah!!

Goku: Daryah!!

Goku: Oh, no!

Paikuhan: Got you!!

Paikuhan: Wha!?

Paikuhan: Koff...Ugh...

Goku: Y-You okay!?
Paikuhan!

Paikuhan: If you change into that form every time it looks like you'll lose...
I'll never be able to win!

Goku: Sorry, Sorry...
Was a mistake...

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Post by Chuquita » Thu Oct 04, 2007 4:48 pm

This has some beautiful artwork. X3
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Post by Kendamu » Thu Oct 04, 2007 9:54 pm

peterx wrote:SIX! new page released? :shock: :D

Umm, Goku already transforms into SSJ5 for that second? :o
Looks like it! At first I thought it was SSj3 until you mentioned something and I looked closer.

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Post by DaemonCorps » Thu Oct 04, 2007 9:59 pm

Hmm... looks like Paikuhan is at least strong enough to take an SSJ5 blast to the face.

While I'm glad this fan-manga isn't as bad as it could be, I really think there should be some kind of down side or limit to the new upgrade. I mean, by the time SSJ3 was introduced, they were also bringing up the idea that it wasn't really meant to be used while alive, since it'd sap so much power out of you. I'd like to see toyble play around with that idea again (even though it was blatantly disregarded throughout GT).

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Post by Kendamu » Thu Oct 04, 2007 10:12 pm

Well, I'm thinking that the new enemy on Earth will give SSj5 Goku and Paikuhan a good challenge.

Hopefully, the other characters will have something to do besides sit and gawk at Goku and Paikuhan.

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Post by Hasaki » Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:43 am

Unlike ssj4 level, it seems like he made Goku transform to that form in an instant, interesting concept.

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Post by caejones » Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:19 am

Hmm, it sounds kind of like now that he has it, he has a hard time controling it... so if he was on Earth, he might lose control of his power and do unintentional damage to people and stuff.
Of course, it's not like Xicor hasn't already remodeled the planet just to show off...
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Post by ReiMehari » Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:04 am

Pretty sweet stuff :)
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Post by DNA » Sat Oct 20, 2007 10:59 am

So.. when are the new translated pages going to appear?

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Post by desirecampbell » Sat Oct 20, 2007 12:04 pm

DNA wrote:So.. when are the new translated pages going to appear?
Bwa! How long have these been up?! How did I not see this?

They'll be up ASAP; if not later today then Monday.

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Post by Dan no saisei » Sat Oct 20, 2007 2:16 pm

well this is my fist post in thisgt topic....and i just have to say one thing:
it looks amazing

if i hear little kids talking about DBAF like it is a real manga/anime and say things like "but i have already seen some episodes on youtube, but they have been taken down" i just ignore it mean while, thats realy stupid but if i look at that manga i realy dont know how to feel about it....ok the beginning of that manga is just unrealistic....how did freezas mother got pregnant from goku?! did he cheat on chi-chi?! but beside that and the fakt that it is a sequel of DBGT and not DBZ it makes me feel like "reading"(i dont realy speak japanese) my kanzenban mangas. His drawing still looks so mutch like the original one it makes me speakless....and that new gi from goku looks cool too...maybe too cool for goku? i dont know but anyway...all in all its worth downloading it

i hope the new translated pages will be online soon

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Post by Kaboom » Sat Oct 20, 2007 2:24 pm

Dan no saisei wrote:How did Freeza's mother get pregnant by Goku?!
Perhaps it was a more Chakotay/Seska kind of thing? 10 points to whoever gets the reference

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Post by caejones » Sat Oct 20, 2007 5:46 pm

It's not that it doesn't make sense... it's that it hasn't been explained yet... XD. I mean, when Freeza's mother looked identical to West Kaioshin, but had a name and a story completely different... I wasn't expecting Kaioshin to randomly recognize her... Me thinks plot twists are in order. :D
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Post by DNA » Tue Oct 23, 2007 1:30 pm

desirecampbell, I need my fix man! C'mon, were is it? 8|

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