Apologies if I've posted this before, I can't be sure if I did or not. I have a three-chapter DBZ fic on FFnet that I'm working on every now and then, and I'd appreciate feedback on what you guys think.
Dragon Ball Z: Bardock's Legacy
Prologue: In Hell - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3806863/1/Bardocks_Legacy
Chapter I: Helping Out - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3806863/2/Bardocks_Legacy
Chapter II: Revenge at Last - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3806863/3/Bardocks_Legacy
It uses dub names which I know is a big no-no to a lot of people, but meh - it's what I'm used to.













