Toyble DBAF [June 9, 2012] Vol 4 HD release complete

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:23 am

Yeah, sorry about that. I didn't see it because it was placed obscurely. Just check my original post.

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Post by desirecampbell » Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:58 pm

Tatsunoboshi Horoko wrote:Yeah, sorry about that. I didn't see it because it was placed obscurely. Just check my original post.
Thanks, pal.

New page up on the releases page. Enjoy :)


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Also, if you get around to it, there are these pages too.
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Post by Taku128 » Thu Jan 10, 2008 6:37 pm

desirecampbell wrote:New page up on the releases page. Enjoy :)
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Post by desirecampbell » Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:05 pm

Taku128 wrote:Dead link for me.
Goddamnit! I've been putting the address to the local copy for the last two pages. Fixed now.

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Post by Hasaki » Sun Jan 20, 2008 3:24 am

Great stuff, thanks again for adding the subbs.

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Post by NeptuneKai » Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:30 am

I don't know if anyone has seen this already but someone fused this comic and the anime, fairly interesting.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_wFZB-R8iGs
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Post by DNA » Sat Feb 02, 2008 11:13 pm

Hey boys and girls, there's 2 new pages on toyble's blog =P
This is getting interesting...

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Post by peterx » Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:06 am

WOW!! Will we see God vs God fight too? :o East Kaioshin seem really cool with Tapion's sword! :D

(Tatsunoboshi Horoko did you translated THAT page with Tapion's story on it? :D )

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Post by desirecampbell » Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:38 am

peterx wrote:WOW!! Will we see God vs God fight too? :o East Kaioshin seem really cool with Tapion's sword! :D

(Tatsunoboshi Horoko did you translated THAT page with Tapion's story on it? :D )
What's left to translate:

>> Pages 74 and 75.

>> Super Saiyan 5.

>> Tapion backstory. Actually half-translated already:
Hildegan on Earth had been eliminated. Tapion, using Bulma's time machine, returned to Planet Conuts a 1000 years in the past. The peaceful Planet Conuts was there, looking how it did before Hildegan had come into existance due to the work of the Madoshi Warlocks.

The first thing Tapion did was dash to the Kami of Planet Conuts. "I have come from the future! If we don't do something, Hildegan will come to be and Planet Conuts will be reduced to ruins! So, before that happens...!"

And the Kami of Planet Conuts answered thusly, "I'm sorry, Tapion of the Future...Although I understand, there is nothing that we can do. The Madoshi Warlocks' magicial powers have already surpassed my own powers..."

"T-That can't be. Then, Hildegan's creation can no longer be stopped...?" Tapion was in despair. There was no point of having come to the past...However, it was then!

"I can give you a helping hand, Kami of Conuts." The Southern Kaio somehow appeared.

"K-Kaio-sama!" The God of Conuts kneeled in trepidation.

"Use that holy sword. I recieved it from Kaioshin-sama, so it's a blessed sword. It will split any Genmajin demon, never even mind Madoshi Warlock, right in two."

"Kaioshin-sama's sword!?" Whether this was his first time, Tapion learned of the existence of the Kaioshin.

"That's right. There is only one condition to master the sword."

"A condition...!?"

"You must become a devote servant to the Gods. If you do not, you will never draw out the true power of that sword."

"What does that mean exactly?"

"It means you must become a priest. If that happens, you will no longer be able to stay on Planet Conuts."

Minoshia's face passes by in Tapion's mind for a split instant. Tapion furrowed his brow firmly as he made his decision. "I understand, sir. I will become a priest."

"Heh heh heh. Well, we'll start the ritual." The Southern Kaioshin held out his hand to Tapion and out let a flash.

Shimmer! Tapion appears from the within the light. There weren't any major changes to his appearance. With the execption of one being his orange hair turning purple in color.... "Right, all done. Do your best, Tapion," said the Southern Kaio as he then departed. Thus, Tapion had become a priest.

Immediately after that, something unexpected happened. Planet Conuts was engulfed in tremors and the sounds of explosions. Hildegan has been put into commission. Tapion dashed out of Kami-sama's temple. At the evil temple, with his legendary sword in hand, he lunged at Hildegan directly. However, he was flicked away with a single sweep from Hildegan.

"W-What's the meaning of this...? The legendary sword has no effect?"

Then, the Southern Kaio's voice rang throughout Tapion's mind, "You'll have to stop Hildegan from moving in order to cut through it. Use the flute! There should be two of them that were left before the sword was. They could stop a Genmajin demon from moving."

"I-I know that...but who in the world besides me..."

That is when two brave warriors appeared before his very eyes. It was the Tapion and Minoshia of that time.

"We will do anything if it is to protect this planet."

There stood the him from a 1000 years in the past. Tapion percieved everything at this time. The priest that had cut Hildegan into two by giving himself the legendary flute and sealed it in orgle box was none other than Tapion himself.

"So, this is my destiny, is it?" Tapion made the decision to follow his destiny.

So then, with the cooperation of the two young heroes, Hildegan was sealed up.

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Post by Herms » Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:15 pm

Because I'm bored and enjoyed reading this doujinshi so much, here's a translation of the last two pages ( [L] and [R] indicate left and right speech balloons):

p.74
3rd panel:

Kaioshin: It seems that the time has finally come…for me to fight.

5th panel:

Elder Kaioshin: Wait, what are you doing? You can’t lightly get involved with the problems of the Lower World! It won’t be much longer until Goku is found!

6th Panel:

Kaioshin: No, without a doubt I am the Western Kaioshin. Which means that this is a problem that I must solve!

7th Panel:

Kaioshin: Tapion!!!

8th Panel:

Tapion: Y-yes!!!

p.75
1st panel

Kaioshin: [R] I entrust the Kaioshin Realm to you. [L] From now on, protect the universe’s peace along with Minoshia!

2nd panel

Tapion: K-Kaioshin-sama?!

4th Panel

Kaioshin: Kai-Kai!

5th Panel

Elder Kaioshin: [R] Ugh! [L] That was rash…!

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Post by Herms » Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:33 pm

He's the SSJ5 pages:

Page 1
1st panel

Gohan: [R]… [L] Eh?

2nd panel

Goku: Haaaa…!!!

3rd panel

Zaiko: What is this? What’s he started to do…?

4th panel

Everyone: …!!! [OK, you probably already knew that one]

5th panel

Broli [?!?!?]: …..

Vegeta: ha-!!!

6th panel

Goku: Kaha-!!!

Page 2
1st panel

Zaiko: Wha-what is this transformation!!?

2nd panel

Goku: Gaaaaaa…!!!

3rd panel

Gohan: Fa-father, h-he couldn’t be…!!?

4th panel

Vegeta: [R] You mean you can go farther above…Super Saiyan 4? [L] Kakarot!!!

5th panel

Zaiko: Gu-…!!!

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Post by desirecampbell » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:31 pm

Sweet. 74 and 75 are up on the release page. working right now on getting the whole site ready for an update, so I'll wait until then to put up the SSj5 pages and the other 'extras' I've seen on the site. Maybe later tonight or tomorrow *crosses fingers*.

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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:54 pm

Aww, looks like I don't have a job here this week.

Well, least I can do is stop procrastinating and finish that story page up.
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-1-
Hildegan on Earth had been eliminated. Tapion, using Bulma's time machine, returned to Planet Conuts a 1000 years in the past. The peaceful Planet Conuts was there, looking how it did before Hildegan had come into existance due to the work of the Madoshi Warlocks.

-2-
The first thing Tapion did was dash to the Kami of Planet Conuts. "I have come from the future! If we don't do something, Hildegan will come to be and Planet Conuts will be reduced to ruins! So, before that happens...!"

And the Kami of Planet Conuts answered thusly, "I'm sorry, Tapion of the Future...Although I understand, there is nothing that we can do. The Madoshi Warlocks' magicial powers have already surpassed my own powers..."

"T-That can't be. Then, Hildegan's creation can no longer be stopped...?" Tapion was in despair. There was no point of having come to the past...However, it was then!

"I can give you a helping hand, Kami of Conuts." The Southern Kaio somehow appeared.

"K-Kaio-sama!" The Kami of Conuts kneeled in trepidation.

"Use that holy sword. I recieved it from Kaioshin-sama, so it's a blessed sword. It will split any Genmajin demon, never even mind Madoshi Warlock, right in two."

"Kaioshin-sama's sword!?" Whether this was his first time, Tapion learned of the existence of the Kaioshin.

"That's right. There is only one condition to master the sword."

"A condition...!?"

"You must become a devote servant to the Gods. If you do not, you will never draw out the true power of that sword."

"What does that mean exactly?"

"It means you must become a priest. If that happens, you will no longer be able to stay on Planet Conuts."

Minoshia's face passes by in Tapion's mind for a split instant. Tapion furrowed his brow firmly as he made his decision. "I understand, sir. I will become a priest."

-3-
"Heh heh heh. Well, we'll start the ritual." The Southern Kaioshin held out his hand to Tapion and out let a flash.

Shimmer! Tapion appears from the within the light. There weren't any major changes to his appearance. With the execption of one being his orange hair turning purple in color.... "Right, all done. Do your best, Tapion," said the Southern Kaio as he then departed. Thus, Tapion had become a priest.

-4-
Immediately after that, something unexpected happened. Planet Conuts was engulfed in tremors and the sounds of explosions. Hildegan has been put into commission. Tapion dashed out of Kami-sama's temple. At the evil temple, with his legendary sword in hand, he lunged at Hildegan directly. However, he was flicked away with a single sweep from Hildegan.

"W-What's the meaning of this...? The legendary sword has no effect?"

-5-
Then, the Southern Kaio's voice rang throughout Tapion's mind, "You'll have to stop Hildegan from moving in order to cut through it. Use the flute! There should be two of them that were left in front of the sword. They could stop a Genmajin demon from moving."

"I-I know that...but who in the world besides me..."

That is when two brave warriors appeared before his very eyes. It was the Tapion and Minoshia of that time.

"We will do anything if it is to protect this planet."

There stood the him from a 1000 years in the past. Tapion percieved everything at this time. The priest that had cut Hildegan into two by giving himself the legendary flute and sealed it in orgle box was none other than Tapion himself.

"So, this is my destiny, is it?" Tapion made the decision to follow his destiny.

-6-
So, then, with the cooperation of the two young heroes, Hildegan was sealed up.

-7-
"I'm giving this sword to you. You will need it the next time the seal breaks. Hold on to this until it's time. And after all of the disasters have been wiped out, pass down this sword to the next generation." Once Tapion delivered this news to the young heroes, they were both sealed into an orgle box, with one being launched to Planet Couryo of the West Galaxy and the other to Earth of the North Galaxy.

-8-
"Now..." Tapion started up the time machine to carry out his final objective. "Wait for me, Minoshia..."

Tapion had been launched into Planet Couryo of the West Galaxy a thousand years later, and upon his arrival, saw the lower portion of Hildegan about to stomp on Minoshia. "Daaah!" Tapion narrowly managed to save Minoshia. The two, having crossed a thousand years of time and space, were finally able to reunite.

-9-
"Bro! Now we can live together again!"

Tapion hesitated to speak. "I'm sorry, Minoshia...To tell the truth, I'm a servant to the Gods. Now that I've fufilled my objective, I can no longer remain on this world."

"No way...! Bro, then, what am I supposed to do?"

-10-
It was then that something floated down from far up above, basked in light. "Tapion, you truely are a fine hero. And, of all things, you've mastered my sword. You also possess more than enough talent. So, would you care to serve under me?"

Tapion did not know who this person was. "Who are you?"

"I am Kaioshin."

"You're...K-Kaioshin-sama?!" The man who had appeared before Tapion was none other than the Kaioshin. "B-But, then, Minoshia..."

"Please come to the Kaioshin Realm with Minoshia-san as well. I really wouldn't mind."

Tapion and Minoshia exchanged glances, and with a broad grin across his face, he replied, "Yes, sir! It would be an honor!" And, so, Tapion and Minoshia now live in the Kaioshin Realm.
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Post by desirecampbell » Sun Feb 03, 2008 10:58 pm

Wow. Awesome job Horoko. I'll get on that really soon. Could you put in some kind of reference as to where the text should go? I can't make heads or tails of it. I can see ten distinct text areas, here:
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Six and seven will probably have to be combined, but if you could give me an idea of where the translations should go, I'd appreciate it :)

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Post by SSj Gogito » Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:42 am

Wow that Tapion Back story fits so well, i love the twist of him been the one who actually cut Hirudagarn
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Post by Captain Awesome » Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:57 am

I really enjoyed that back story, it ads an extra dimension to movie 13, which has always been one of my favorites.

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Post by caejones » Mon Feb 04, 2008 9:56 am

Time paradox aside... Tapion is now a Kaioshin? And Kaioshin plans on Fighting 'Laila'/West Kaioshin?
Makes the random transformations forgivable, at any rate. XD.
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Post by SSj Gogito » Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:10 am

Hopefully Toei make a contract with Toyble to turn this into an anime :D
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Post by Tatsunoboshi Horoko » Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:59 am

desirecampbell wrote:Wow. Awesome job Horoko. I'll get on that really soon. Could you put in some kind of reference as to where the text should go? I can't make heads or tails of it. I can see ten distinct text areas, here:
Check my first post. You can do whatever you want with the spacing and whatnot. I just placed the text like that so it wouldn't be a wall of textual diarrhea :)

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